AsHlok OS'---Written In The Skies--- (Astha's Birthday)) - Page 3

simply wonderful...

Cute OS, I so wish Aastha and Shlok were like this in the serial, but am waiting ... cause that day should cum within a year. Keep writing and do pm me :) BTW, thanks for the pm

oh dat was such a sweet story

this is wndrful well written
nicely depicted
well done dear!!!
i rilli do love ur writin skill
can i know ur name???

Originally posted by: NatashaRia

Cute OS, I so wish Aastha and Shlok were like this in the serial, but am waiting ... cause that day should cum within a year. Keep writing and do pm me :) BTW, thanks for the pm

hopefully they will be like that soon

Awww that was sooo cute and I loved it!

lovely and beautiful update dear
just too good...

Originally posted by: Serviana

beautiful

Thanks!😳

Originally posted by: logambika

such a cute os... lovely... thanks for pm...

Thanks!😳

Originally posted by: Aishaa3

Beautifully written😳

My fav part

"Shlokkk!!" her pitch was overly excited. He hugged her back with one arm behind her back and the other balancing the chocolate larva cake.

"Happy Birthday Love." He whispered in her ears. Astha closed her eyes taking in every ounce of the moment. She broke the hug and hit him hard on his chest.

😳Do write more on ashlok!!

Thanks!😳
really appreciate your reply!😃