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Heyy guys i am back with another OS my secound one
This Part is more about Astha and anjili but if i get a good response i will continue it :)
Part 1
Astha was siting all alone in the room..she raised her head look around the beautifull arrangement.whole roome was decorated with flowers..
She was sitting on the floor near the dressing table.Her hair was messed up.her mascara had smudged her face was tear sticken.she looked around there were pieces was the broken vase all over the place her half broken mangalsutra was still in her neck
What is left with me now..nothing nothing is left..i have lost my love my life i went against my parents for this life??dont know how many times ayi had warned me..maine sunna kyun nhe? Yehi meri saza hai ap..bappa kyun kia aesa shlok na kyun?
She saw a broken piece of vase and a thought came to her mind..i cant do this i cant live like that with him i want to die.with that thought she picked up the sharp piece and brought it near her wrist
The piece had barely cut her wrist and two drops of blood appeared when the door of the room opened
"Itni jaldi har man gaen tum?"
There was not surprize on the face of the incomer
"I thought you were much stronger than this"
Astha dropped the piece and got up
"You dont know what he did to me"tears rolled down her cheeks
A small sarcastic chuckle left the persons throat.the person looked around seeing the condition of the room "after living in the great Agnihotri mansion for 30 years you dont have to be a genius to guess that"
"Dono baap betw aik jese hi hain tumhe himmat karni hogi"said anjili there was a hint of anger in her voice
Anjili walked to Astha picked the broken mangalsutra from her neck and secured it in her neck
Astha looked at her confused"but how do yo--"
Anjili : not here come with me
She held asthas wrist and dragged her to the terrace where no one can see them..it was still very early in the morning and no one was awake
When the reached the terrace
Anjili: sit dowm on that chair
Astha sat down and anjili followed and sat across her
Astha: how did you knew that he was gonna do that to me?why didnt you warned me why did you let me fall in this?
Anjili smiled: Had i not warned to Astha?but you were so blinded in love with my son that you didnt notice..i even insulted your parents to keep you away from shlok but you being you..
Astha: tears getting out i didnt realized that he doesnt love me all that love all that care was just a big lie
Anjili in a calm tone:he does love you Astha he just does not realize that he is blinded by the hatred his father has put into him
Astha felt like laughing:Shlok does not loves me and why would niranjan uncle do like that he always so nice to me
Anjili chuckled:Nice and niranjan agnihotri?my foot..Thats what i am telling you Astha OPEN you eyes Astha see whats happening to you and most importantly Who is doing what?
Let me help you astha
Astha confused:why do you want to help me?i thought you hated me?
Anjili:i still do because you are Exactly what i used to be" anjilis voice cracked " when i came into this house i was like you astha carefree loving but not accepting injustice i was my parents only princess like you are Astha..i loved my parents like you do Astha i want to save you Astha from becoming another Anjili Agnihotri.
Astha:But i--
Anjili:first listen to what i have to say i dont have much time Mr niranjan agnihotri will be up soon.Shlok was not like this Astha..no matter what my life was i made shlok strong he was always close to me than his father.i taught him to differntiate between right and wrong.It may look like that Shlok follows his father blindly but i know better.i always gave all the right teachings to my son like you parents gave to you.i made him respect girls and be nice to them.No matter how much his father tried to put wrong thoughts in his mind i always protected shlok he was everything i wanted my son to be" tears rolled her eyes
"But then swati came in his life..he was attracted to swati he used to talk all day about her to me she was her college mate..then Mr nirangan Agnihotri came to know about swati he told me to stop shlok from meeting her and i said that i will not as it was shloks life..shlok did not loved swati it was just a teenage attraction for him not love but his father found swati a threat
Astha: how can a girl be a threat?
Anjili: swati was punjabi not from pur cast and was the daughter of a poor halwai who was studying in shloks college on scholarship..these things didnt matter to shlok money was never his priority
Anjili sighed and then continued: shlok used to send card and gifts to swati the things you saw in that room that day
Then one day niranjan saw them in a restuarant and he told me to break there bond i refused to it so he-- tears were rollong on her face she wiped them and continued
Anyhow secound to that day he sent a lady dressed in my attire to swatis house and insulted her and gave her a huge amount for her studies and her parents they accepted the money because they were in need of it as there shop was about to be taken by the bank and they needed money to save the shop..and were shop was bought by mr agnihotri only so that swatis family has no option and has to leave the city.
That day shlok met swati and told that i bribed her family and i created problems for them and ahe broke up with shlok and left
Shlok was 19 at that time its a tender age he started hating me from that day wothout knowing the truth..shlok has a habbit of going to the extremes when he respected me and my teachings he loved me to the extreme and when his father broke his trust from me now he is on the extremw of hating me.its been 7 years now that he had kept that hatred in him he hates women now.
Anjili broke down into sobs
Astha couldnt see that and she ran and hugged her"i am so sorry i misunderstood you"
Anjili hugged her back and then when the calmed down she moves back
"But i know one thing no matter how much he hates women but he would never marry someone just for revenge..i know my son astha behind this revengeful and monster shlok there is my son who still respects women.I have seen care in his eyes for you Astha i know that he loves you but would never accept it..if shlok would only want revenge from you than he would have done that ages ago..mr niranjan agnihotri would have killed you or gotten you raped or would have killed you parents for the insult you btought to his family..but belive me i know that you dont but trust me Shlok marrying you is a form of care and possessivesness for you..he is saving you from his father Astha..
Astha: i saw pure hatred in his eyes for
Me yesterday
Anjili:he does hate you astha because he cares for you.you are his weakness astha...you are the only one who could get me my shlok back..i dont want him to talk to me i just want him to stop burning himself in this fire which is with him for years..i want him to be happy
Astha was thinking about it
Anjili:think about it Astha i told you all the past because i want you to cure him..if you still want to leave him then go i want stop but its a mothers request to you" Anjili
Filded her hands in front of astha
Astha:no
No please dont do this
I need time to digest all this..i dont know why do you belive on me soo much but i would think about it.
Anjili hugged astha kissed her forehead and was leaving when she turned back
"One more thing Astha Shlok has a very bad habbit of saying things he doesnt mean..his actions always count more than his words"
"Best of luck"
Astha got back to her room and thought about every incident every moment she had with shlok maybe it was all a drama and everything anjili ji said was falsa but still Anjili ji had given a little ray of hope to Astha and Astha decided to hold on to that ray of hope May be it is worth giving a try.
Thats it guys..i did not gave it a second read so plz ignore the typos
Criticism is most welcome and guys if you like it plz hit the like button you response is very important to me
If i get a good response i would like to show further about how Astha gets her shlok back now
Happy reading guys!!!
Part 2 page 3
Part 3 page 5
This Part is more about Astha and anjili but if i get a good response i will continue it :)
Part 1
Astha was siting all alone in the room..she raised her head look around the beautifull arrangement.whole roome was decorated with flowers..
She was sitting on the floor near the dressing table.Her hair was messed up.her mascara had smudged her face was tear sticken.she looked around there were pieces was the broken vase all over the place her half broken mangalsutra was still in her neck
What is left with me now..nothing nothing is left..i have lost my love my life i went against my parents for this life??dont know how many times ayi had warned me..maine sunna kyun nhe? Yehi meri saza hai ap..bappa kyun kia aesa shlok na kyun?
She saw a broken piece of vase and a thought came to her mind..i cant do this i cant live like that with him i want to die.with that thought she picked up the sharp piece and brought it near her wrist
The piece had barely cut her wrist and two drops of blood appeared when the door of the room opened
"Itni jaldi har man gaen tum?"
There was not surprize on the face of the incomer
"I thought you were much stronger than this"
Astha dropped the piece and got up
"You dont know what he did to me"tears rolled down her cheeks
A small sarcastic chuckle left the persons throat.the person looked around seeing the condition of the room "after living in the great Agnihotri mansion for 30 years you dont have to be a genius to guess that"
"Dono baap betw aik jese hi hain tumhe himmat karni hogi"said anjili there was a hint of anger in her voice
Anjili walked to Astha picked the broken mangalsutra from her neck and secured it in her neck
Astha looked at her confused"but how do yo--"
Anjili : not here come with me
She held asthas wrist and dragged her to the terrace where no one can see them..it was still very early in the morning and no one was awake
When the reached the terrace
Anjili: sit dowm on that chair
Astha sat down and anjili followed and sat across her
Astha: how did you knew that he was gonna do that to me?why didnt you warned me why did you let me fall in this?
Anjili smiled: Had i not warned to Astha?but you were so blinded in love with my son that you didnt notice..i even insulted your parents to keep you away from shlok but you being you..
Astha: tears getting out i didnt realized that he doesnt love me all that love all that care was just a big lie
Anjili in a calm tone:he does love you Astha he just does not realize that he is blinded by the hatred his father has put into him
Astha felt like laughing:Shlok does not loves me and why would niranjan uncle do like that he always so nice to me
Anjili chuckled:Nice and niranjan agnihotri?my foot..Thats what i am telling you Astha OPEN you eyes Astha see whats happening to you and most importantly Who is doing what?
Let me help you astha
Astha confused:why do you want to help me?i thought you hated me?
Anjili:i still do because you are Exactly what i used to be" anjilis voice cracked " when i came into this house i was like you astha carefree loving but not accepting injustice i was my parents only princess like you are Astha..i loved my parents like you do Astha i want to save you Astha from becoming another Anjili Agnihotri.
Astha:But i--
Anjili:first listen to what i have to say i dont have much time Mr niranjan agnihotri will be up soon.Shlok was not like this Astha..no matter what my life was i made shlok strong he was always close to me than his father.i taught him to differntiate between right and wrong.It may look like that Shlok follows his father blindly but i know better.i always gave all the right teachings to my son like you parents gave to you.i made him respect girls and be nice to them.No matter how much his father tried to put wrong thoughts in his mind i always protected shlok he was everything i wanted my son to be" tears rolled her eyes
"But then swati came in his life..he was attracted to swati he used to talk all day about her to me she was her college mate..then Mr nirangan Agnihotri came to know about swati he told me to stop shlok from meeting her and i said that i will not as it was shloks life..shlok did not loved swati it was just a teenage attraction for him not love but his father found swati a threat
Astha: how can a girl be a threat?
Anjili: swati was punjabi not from pur cast and was the daughter of a poor halwai who was studying in shloks college on scholarship..these things didnt matter to shlok money was never his priority
Anjili sighed and then continued: shlok used to send card and gifts to swati the things you saw in that room that day
Then one day niranjan saw them in a restuarant and he told me to break there bond i refused to it so he-- tears were rollong on her face she wiped them and continued
Anyhow secound to that day he sent a lady dressed in my attire to swatis house and insulted her and gave her a huge amount for her studies and her parents they accepted the money because they were in need of it as there shop was about to be taken by the bank and they needed money to save the shop..and were shop was bought by mr agnihotri only so that swatis family has no option and has to leave the city.
That day shlok met swati and told that i bribed her family and i created problems for them and ahe broke up with shlok and left
Shlok was 19 at that time its a tender age he started hating me from that day wothout knowing the truth..shlok has a habbit of going to the extremes when he respected me and my teachings he loved me to the extreme and when his father broke his trust from me now he is on the extremw of hating me.its been 7 years now that he had kept that hatred in him he hates women now.
Anjili broke down into sobs
Astha couldnt see that and she ran and hugged her"i am so sorry i misunderstood you"
Anjili hugged her back and then when the calmed down she moves back
"But i know one thing no matter how much he hates women but he would never marry someone just for revenge..i know my son astha behind this revengeful and monster shlok there is my son who still respects women.I have seen care in his eyes for you Astha i know that he loves you but would never accept it..if shlok would only want revenge from you than he would have done that ages ago..mr niranjan agnihotri would have killed you or gotten you raped or would have killed you parents for the insult you btought to his family..but belive me i know that you dont but trust me Shlok marrying you is a form of care and possessivesness for you..he is saving you from his father Astha..
Astha: i saw pure hatred in his eyes for
Me yesterday
Anjili:he does hate you astha because he cares for you.you are his weakness astha...you are the only one who could get me my shlok back..i dont want him to talk to me i just want him to stop burning himself in this fire which is with him for years..i want him to be happy
Astha was thinking about it
Anjili:think about it Astha i told you all the past because i want you to cure him..if you still want to leave him then go i want stop but its a mothers request to you" Anjili
Filded her hands in front of astha
Astha:no
No please dont do this
I need time to digest all this..i dont know why do you belive on me soo much but i would think about it.
Anjili hugged astha kissed her forehead and was leaving when she turned back
"One more thing Astha Shlok has a very bad habbit of saying things he doesnt mean..his actions always count more than his words"
"Best of luck"
Astha got back to her room and thought about every incident every moment she had with shlok maybe it was all a drama and everything anjili ji said was falsa but still Anjili ji had given a little ray of hope to Astha and Astha decided to hold on to that ray of hope May be it is worth giving a try.
Thats it guys..i did not gave it a second read so plz ignore the typos
Criticism is most welcome and guys if you like it plz hit the like button you response is very important to me
If i get a good response i would like to show further about how Astha gets her shlok back now
Happy reading guys!!!
Part 2 page 3
Part 3 page 5
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