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2filmy

@2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

also thank u for writing a teacher student story on AdNi

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 31

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Wow that was such an amazing story loved it so much.

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mahin

@mahin123

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

oh sweet love story! liked it a lot. thank you so much for writing it

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2filmy

@2filmy

Trailblazer

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

how cute it must be
from a teacher student to being colleagues

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AshtaVasus

@AshtaVasus

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

I just love your style of writing, Ash. Simple story, real practical life incidents, non-flavoury straight dialogues just like the way a real normal person would talk or behave (that makes it easier to relate to the characters so well) , simple English that anyone can read and understand and above all, no major 9;-the-knees romance and high heaving suhag raat... 👏

Pls do teach novices like me too... how to write stories, how to pick sequences from real life etc...

Coming to this SS, I fell in love with the humble Advay who doesn't talk much but when he does, he makes sense and he is upto the point. Very cool minded and down to earth. I like the way he proposed and yet not proposed her (that's how most of the guys are in real life I guess 😊)

I did not like te way Chandini fled from the house - she actually gave a confirmation of her character by runnin from the house... She should have at least tried putting her point across to her family before trying to run. If she had stood her ground on PP correctly, she should have told everyone what happened, before leaving the house. Her parents would have felt proud that their daughters have taken her morals seriously. But I am glad that she fell into the right hands - Advay... a good guy. So, ultimately pain and hurt was healed and love, respect and understanding is in the air. Yay..

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2filmy

@2filmy

Trailblazer

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

u know Ashley
Chandni family reminded me of the Handa family in Geet
so low regressive cheap mentality
and Advay to some extent was like maan
guiding her in the right way
but here Chandni is a lot stronger and independent girl

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.Ashleydevlin.

@.Ashleydevlin.

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Aqqo1
Superbbb minblowing story

Originally posted by: Aqqo1
Ur story become my addiction. I really appreciate ur all work. Its superb ss. Hope u like more ss os and ff for adni in future.

Thank you for liking it dear😊

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.Ashleydevlin.

@.Ashleydevlin.

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Hi Priya,

Yes, I hope you enjoyed it, I tried to make him really sweet and nice just for you😊. Yes, Pratham and chandhini had different thinking, he was not wrong initially but since they were so different things would eventually get worse. chandhini is lucky that she got away from him before he fully destroyed her life.

I pity the girl he will eventually end up marrying.

Its not important if a person has been in a relation or not as long as that person is sincere with you, I just highlighted an aspect of society that sometimes if you follow the rules, then you have to pay a high price for it.

Advay was really sweet and nice. A perfect man for this chandhini.

Thanks, Priya for liking it, I usually don't write fairy tales but thought lets try this once. Its not too deep but its something you can open and read at anytime. No drama, just simple story.

And yes, it is a prof-student love story

Edited by .Ashleydevlin. - 7 years ago