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Originally posted by: 2filmy

Haye what a charming man
he would literally sweep u of your feet
and entrap u in his magic

Originally posted by: FrankPunch

Ah Damn, how the hell did I miss this story all these days ??!! @Priya, thank you for writing small snippet comments on all the FFs to keep them alive... Else, i would have really missed this one..

You shall be punished heavily for missing this one but let me think how😛😆

Ash, I like heavy subjects, handled smoothly with a light story which everyone can relate to. And this one fits the bill the whole yard and beyond...

Such a wonderful concept, handled so tactfully with very small characters to play and very few scene changes. You win my brownie points hands down, Ash... Take a bow girl... Have read and read this story about 5 / 6 times... i lost count of it. 😉

Thank you. I like this one too😳

Ok, the thoughts that went through my head thinking about some ... some things that were left unsaid or rather unexplained...Few gaps...

1) Like When Advay met Chandni for the first time, he knew Sheekha and was lookiing for someone like her to fit his tastes.. His character was such that he could buy anyone anyhow, and he doesn't like second hand, ugly things.. So, why did he not think of asking Chandni's hand as his wife to her parents? Because, then, she would have been completely belonged to him, she is beautiful, and no one else could use her...

One reason I could think of was, since he knew Sheekha as a wh***, he thought all her family members to be so... But he never had a chance to know anything about Chandni... He straightaway approached her on the road, talking to her friends, and asked her about "her price". A man of his stature would know that a who** doesn't roam around in broad daylight, with friends, and chatting in the middle of the road. Despite her saying that she is a respectable girl, his comment was only "interesting".. Beyond that, he did not still think of having her as a family member.

He was just looking for pleasure not a lifelong commitment, its like we go shopping and like something but turns out that its actually been worn, so you look for something similar but its only for one time pleasure. I know it sounds crass but some rich people like him, they believe everything has a price tag. Hence, the word price tag in story name. He didn't think she was a wh**e but he believed he could buy her off for a one night stand.

2) Death of Chandni's parents.

Its difficult to ascertain whether Chandni's parents death and her reaching Vikrant's hands were staged by Vikrant (or) Advay.

From the way the story line went further, we could understand that Sheekha was a hot property that many clients wanted, and so Vikrant would have made plans of pulling Chandni also in the profession... thats why Sheekha was upset when Vikrant was talking closely to Chandni and her parents and even tried protecting her later in her house.

So, whether the death of Chandni's parents - the accident - was it staged by Vikrant to get Chandni ??

As luck would have it, Chandni was rightly handed over to Advay as her first client, and he happily catches her hand and says "gotcha"... So, it also appears that Advay had arranged for her parents death, so that Vikrant can cater to his specific taste of girls... Otherwise, how did he land just on the day when Chandni was auctioned ??

No, that was pure coincidence. I took writer's liberty of arranging the events so that it happened in that pattern. Vikrant knows advay's tastes and he knows he only sleep with virgins and that he wanted someone like sheekha. When chandhini's parents died, it was an opportunity for him to get chandhini and he did and then, he spread the words which reached advay's ears and he turned up in party.

3) The hot property, Sheekha, the person who fetched good clientele and good money goes absconded overnight, along with her look alike sister - another hot property, and the "Guru" of Vikrant did not react at all? Vikrant would have been punished duly by the Guru, or the Guru would have sent his other thugs to search for the girls in such profession.

But the story did not involve around Vikrant much, after Sheekha left. Except the part he meets her and sets her free.

So, that makes one wonder, is Advay the "Guru" ? Is that why Advay did not touch Sheekha, because she was already touched by Vikrant and others? Yes, Vikrant is transgender, but Sheekha did not know when she loved and married him... Is that how Advay managed to get Chandni auctioned specifically for him? Oh, thats scary...

No, guru is someone else. The thing is sheekha is hot property compared to other girls but if guru has a choice between vikrant and sheekha, then vikrant is more important. Vikrant actually found sheekha. Vikrant is powerful in his own right. Guru probably never heard what happened to sheekha.

Sangeeta honestly that was a really good angle, I never thought my advay would ever do something like this but if he was an actual villain well then, you were 100% right.

Ever since I was a little girl, I have always loved the Beauty and the Beast story. IPKKND3 was one such story ... But Written in Stars, I fell for your Smile, Drowning in Love, and now this... Your Advay is so different in each story, and the best beast fit for each specific story. And I have loved each and every version of your Beauty and the Beast, Ash. Well done.

Thank you. Its weird I try to write sweet but my heroes always turn up grey😳, I need to read something nice and romantic before writing down my next story🤓. Thanks😳

Originally posted by: 2filmy

OMG Sangeeta Di you have given me a completely new angle to think about
what if Advay staged the accident and is Vikrant guru
that's really scary I hope it's not the case