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Posted: 7 years ago
scenario 1 is the best. personally I don't want any third angle between them. they gave each other pain now its time for them to help one another to overcome it and rise like a Phoenix from the ashes of their bitter past
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Posted: 7 years ago
that will be great mahin
healing each other is the best
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: rajatshweta

Even I want a Happily Ever After for AdNi.

Love has always been there between the two. The issue is... Chandni had always loved Advay as a Man. She has always seen him as her Husband.
But with Advay - He desires the body of Chandni. But he loves her as Tiny. There's a difference. He does not attempt to understand her feelings as a woman. There's too much control and Nil respect for her decisions. While he feels that his freedom of thoughts and action is restricted in front of his father, he subjects the same torture to Chandni. She wants a Husband, not a Father figure. She already has Arnav for that. And Advay needs to understand that.
Both of them living together now, again, having daily fights like a Daily soap would be too much go take. It would take a lot of time then for both to understand each other. It wont be enjoyable and a huge headache for Ayi, Baba and Veer...

Baba has understood that his actions had made Advay take psychiatric help and now Chandni is also on the same state. Ayi definitely wants both AdNi to be happy. AdNi is not definitely ready for a divorce. So, definitely Divorce is not gonna happen.

A Leap is what I had in mind when I wrote about Chandni going to Dubai for a year or two with Megha yesterday. But your update of the latest chapter, where Advay says that he will go with her as part of the Dowry even if she remarries - means he is gonna tail her wherever she goes... made me think of a few scenarios myself.

A gap. A time space is what they both need to clear their head. He needs to analyse his actions, their impact on her, the repercussions it has on her mind and health, his love for her as a woman and not as a desirous body or as his adorable Tiny.
Chandni has never stayed away from her family. She needs time away from him to clear the medicine side effects of her operation, her health improvement, a clear understanding of shaping her career path with guidance from Baba and the outside world exposure with different people making her mature enough to understand a grown up mature adult like Advay better.

So, my immediate choice based on what you have already projected in your story was... Scenario 1 - Chandni was born to a Professor Yash, raised by Prof Arnav and trained by Prof Advay. She comes from a family of well educated A Rank holders. She cant be an average student. So, I am assuming that Advay is surprised to find a room in the basement full of Trophies, Cups and Awards in the name of Chandni. He comes to know from Arnav that she is a child prodigy - a born genius with a lot of patents to her credit - that Arnav and Uncle Vanayak has been silently registering it in her name and managing everything all these years - that she has huge funds of her own...
That should make Advay realise that all his Mech. Engg Games that he was bringing her was a child's play for her, but she had always wanted him to be close to her (just like failing driving classes and making Advay take her to college), so she had been getting average marks to make Advay sit with her and teach her ...
That should tell Advay about her undying love for him, that she is not a pauper, that she had actually been a shining chink of armour on Raizada Family and not a charity project.
That should make him look at Chandni with a lot of respect and as a woman too...

Scenario 2 - Chandni has been learning to cook from Ayi ... Ayi is watching Masterchef Australia and asks Chandni to apply for it.
That gives time for Chandni to be away from Advay physically, in a diff country, locked up for 3 months away from family as per the T&C of Masterchef Contest, and its a wonderful opportunity for Chandni to learn something new and gain confidence too.
Advay meantime misses her, realises his Love for her, reads her diaries and realises his mistakes and regrets his actions...
She gets the Runner Up Award with a huge ransom award money. With money and guidance from Masterchef, she succeeds in set up a chain of Food Joint with Ayi Recipes ...
She returns to India with her own Name (not an orphan raised by Raizada und not under their shadow), her own Fame, own work, own Money and no dependency on Raizada family. When she comes back, the Masterchef Winner proposes her and that gets Advay to win back his Lady Love.

Scenario 3. - Arnav comes to know that Chandni has been teaching in Delhi. He guides her to offer Online Coaching Classes from Home. He also guides her in Event Management projects of Raizada Institute. Ayi takes her to all the programmes where she is a Chief Guest. Chandni with her vast knowledge of Fashion sense, designs and fashions all the elite community ladies wardrobes in Mumbai and other major cities - with help from Ayi and Megha Di's friends and clients. Chandni gains outside world exposure, work experience, maturity, training to take up the Raizada Institute in future...

Personally, apart from the Fashion Design idea, I am not in favour of Scenario 3 myself - coz it makes Chandni depend on the entire family to stand up on her legs.
Scenario 1 is without a Leap and Scenario 2 is with a Leap.


All three scenarios are good. in fact each scenario can be a story in itself. but I won't be using them directly. I have thought about what's the next plot line. I will write few more chapters like I originally intended and then, instead of ending it I will take a leap where they will be separated and meet after few years.
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Posted: 7 years ago
A/N I am sorry I haven't been posting regularly and I keep you all waiting. Tomorrow is a very big day in my life. It's going to possibly decide what I will be doing next in my life. If I will be staying where I am or moving. So, hopefully by Sunday I will be able to update regularly. I will be changing the timings to morning as it's not late where I live but in India, it's really late
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Posted: 7 years ago
they will have a separation ?
that will be so painful
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Posted: 7 years ago
all the best for your future and the decision
may u get what u wish for
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: .Ashleydevlin.

A/N I am sorry I haven't been posting regularly and I keep you all waiting. Tomorrow is a very big day in my life. It's going to possibly decide what I will be doing next in my life. If I will be staying where I am or moving. So, hopefully by Sunday I will be able to update regularly. I will be changing the timings to morning as it's not late where I live but in India, it's really late


Ash,
Your creativity and story plots are better than all of us readers. Else, you wouldn't have been able to engage all the readers hooked on to your story for 80 long chapters.
Such a seasoned writer like you who has given us such a beautiful family oriented love saga and planing to close it shortly within 2 or 3 chapters irked me a bit ... that's all. All your readers are emotionally attached to your story and cant accept a mediocre ending from an excellent narrator like you. And I just chose to represent and voice our common opinion. We are not happy with a half hearted abrupt happy ending.
So, if your personal life demands some time off from your regular schedule of writing and posting your story, WE READERS WILL WAIT... RIGHT GUYS ????
Take your time. Personal life commitments are equally important, rather more important than your hobby. So its ok if you keep your writing passion aside for a week or so. Settle down in your new place, get comfy before starting with a new chapter. Wish you all the very best in your life. May the new change in your life bring all positive changes that you aspire in your life 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
dear write the story in your own pace no hurry at all
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks a lot for the note and best wishes for your new life.
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Posted: 7 years ago
all the best for your future life

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