||FF: Written in stars|| Last part Pg 77 - Page 31

Originally posted by: Ravisadha

You write extremely well! I have been thinking about this story all day. And your story forced me to comment. Excellent writing skill 👏 congrats!!!

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Yes but she gave some hints to Khushi

Originally posted by: can_pak

Personally I want to see Advay realising the true extent to which Chandini's been mentally damaged and Veer too. His behaviour honestly pissed me off the most. I hate when people pick a side without hearing what the other side has to say.

Anyone in Chandini's place would lose all trust and belief in relations, especially of a brother, if something like that happened to her.

I like how you've kept it realistic. I hope you don't make the journey of her recovery too easy. I'd actually like to see her go through a bit of depression and this time for the family to actually witness it because so far only Arnav has seen her in that state.

Edit.

And not to forget the diary! I really hope Advay finds out how Chandini's loved him and really loved him, and how she stepped back when he was going to marry Sasha.

I don't want an easy forgiveness for him. The feeling of hatred and love aren't easy to handle when directed towards the same person.

Good luck with the rest of the story. Can't wait for what you have in store for us. You are doing a fantastic job. I mean I barely ever comment for anyone, mostly just like the story but you forced me to comment. So Kudos

Originally posted by: 2filmy

OK this was a seriously painful emotional and sad update
They both deserve happiness as they both are good at heart
But they never even communicate properly
They really need to understand each other better
I hope Chandni too matures a bit and Advay is more sympathetic
Ataya needs to go away from the house

Originally posted by: 2filmy

So now he is jealous of Pratham
Did he really write her that love letter ?
But she felt it was a joke ?
Or she acted that it was a joke in front of him ?
He forbids her from working there again
She is so silent now and does as he pleases
She even changed herself a lot by this time
Advay is having a change of heart and accepted her
He wants to surprise her for the anniversary
I am happy Aditi is punished
But Advay still cannot forget that incident fully

Originally posted by: .Ashleydevlin.

Ataya is gone. Wish granted😎, anything more?

Originally posted by: .Ashleydevlin.

yeah but khushi won't tell Arnav because Arnav will take it to next level

Originally posted by: .Ashleydevlin.

Yes, Pratham did write the love letter. He was seriously interested

Originally posted by: Frey

I've been thinking about this story all day today. You write extremely well! So much so that I've been imagining a lot of scenarios in my head LOL. If you dont mind, can we have a proper redemption track for Advay and I want Chandini to ask this one question from Advay (when he starts regretting his actions) that 'What would have happened if I hadnt gottne sick? Would you still have come back to me?' Like I want her to convey to Advay that if she had died or something in all this ordeal then what would have happened?

Originally posted by: .Ashleydevlin.

And now Khushi won't let him come closer to her. It will be torture for him to not have the chance to say the things he want to say😈😆