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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#201

If u write any other story please tell me
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hailly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#202

Awesome update. Beautiful ending, loved it.
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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#203

This story could not have had a better end

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mayukatta

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Posted: 7 years ago

#204

Sharda...🤗

Thank you for a lovely story dear..

To he frank while reading the first chapter I wasn't connected thtothe story. Simply bciz they are DJ differ from the show and imagining barun with out that ADR arrogance was tough for me..

But these sweet characters made their place in my heart..

Now I can never forget Advay's kindness..

Chandini's innocence..

Veers smartness..

Indrani's conflict..and

Nani's sweetness..

They were many good moments in the story..

Chandini acceptance by pool side was my absolute favourite..

As for the last update..

Jhanavi and veer ha. .. she sounded like fierce girl .. perfect match for our veer..

And we are have Achhu in the end as well..

Loved the last part dear..

I can see the four happily sitting in the lawn.. sipping chai and teasing eachother.. that gives such a happy walla feeling..

This was a good story from start to end.

Well done dear.

Keep writing.😛

P.S. : ' Ay pareshaan Nahi pyaar hai biwi '

Imagining barun say this makes my toes curl😳 **freaking hot**

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#205

Sharda a special thank u for the wonderful dialogs here

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Sharda

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Posted: 7 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: LovingAHA2017
Wow! Wow! Wow!👏
You know what, Sharda? I am smiling like an idiot and blushing all red! Such beautiful end to Adni story!

The moment where he troubles her when Naani calls! simply beautiful!

And our much desired Bromance written so well!

My situation is like when sometimes we read the end of the book and then go and catch up with the earlier story. Itching like hell to read SR but phir majaa nahi aayega. Will read from the beginning and finally popcorn khate khate suhaagraat.😉 !

Thank you soo much Neha.

I know I was blushing too while writing only as I had to imagine Barun in all those scenes. 😳 I am glad you are liking my story. Haan zarur padhna suhag raat. Specially that chapter (SR) and the ring finding game was written on our Priya's request 😉 . I always wanted bromance scenes to be shown in the show too but anyways now its all in our imagination.

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Sharda

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Posted: 7 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: 2filmy
Loved this story
Enjoyed it a lot
Am sad that it ended

Hey Priya,

Thank u soo much dear. Without your inputs this story wouldn't go this far. I remember you giving inputs about AdNi marriage rituals, Veer's romance, AdNi SR and life post marriage. You had always shown a lot of interest in this story and had commented on every post. Don't worry I wasn't aware of the blog which has been created exclusively for AdNi. Since we all have a platform to write more stories now I will keep writing. 😊

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Sharda

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Posted: 7 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: rajatshweta
I love happy endings. I always knew Advay would never leave his Chandni, be it your story or the Show. But somehow I was wishing to see some happy ending in Veer's life too. Unfortunately we may not see Veer romance in the Show, but am happy you brought it out here. Thanks Sharda for healing AdVeerNi.

Thank you dear. Yes the show had a lot of scope which now will remain unexplored. Veer Advay bromance, Shikha Veer relation, Veer's equation with Chandni, Advay's redemption, Chandni's equation with her parents and mama after truth revelation etc. Now since the count down has begun and in 2 more days the show will only be a part of our memory I really wished if the cvs could have handled the story more maturedly and the show would be given some other name. May be then we would have get to see the complete AdNi journey.😭

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Sharda

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Posted: 7 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: hailly
Awesome update. Beautiful ending, loved it.
Thanks for pm.

Thank you dear. 😊

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Sharda

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Posted: 7 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: mayukatta
Sharda...🤗
Thank you for a lovely story dear..
To he frank while reading the first chapter I wasn't connected thtothe story. Simply bciz they are DJ differ from the show and imagining barun with out that ADR arrogance was tough for me..
But these sweet characters made their place in my heart..
Now I can never forget Advay's kindness..
Chandini's innocence..
Veers smartness..
Indrani's conflict..and
Nani's sweetness..
They were many good moments in the story..
Chandini acceptance by pool side was my absolute favourite..

As for the last update..
Jhanavi and veer ha. .. she sounded like fierce girl .. perfect match for our veer..

And we are have Achhu in the end as well..
Loved the last part dear..
I can see the four happily sitting in the lawn.. sipping chai and teasing eachother.. that gives such a happy walla feeling..

This was a good story from start to end.
Well done dear.
Keep writing.😛

P.S. : ' Ay pareshaan Nahi pyaar hai biwi '
Imagining barun say this makes my toes curl😳 **freaking hot**

Thank you mayu dear for the detailed analysis of the chapters, for your constructive feedback. You were one among the initial readers who had read my story and had encouraged me to write further. I know even initially I was hesitant about this plot but still I thought of giving a try and I am glad I did that. Made so many friends over here. 😃

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