ADVINI TS - SAAT JANMO KA SAATH (Karva Chauth Special) Part 2 Pg 6 Up! - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
Oh☺️
Any way I am lost in Advay now
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Oh☺️
Any way I am lost in Advay now

I am sure you will lose yourself more after reading the last part 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Of course I will Nazia
Advay is a character who makes me feel lost in him
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey dearies, thank you for the support you gave to this story and me. Here we go with the last part. Ending part is mature, kids stay away


SAAT JANMO KA SAATH (KARVACHAUTH SPECIAL)


Part 2


There he stood in all his glory giving that 'kaatilaana' smile which made her knees weak. She stilled as she couldn't believe that her wait was finally over. He was here in body and flesh chuckling at her. And she closed her eyes as she heard that husky voice after ages

"Tumhaara Dev laut aaya Paro" (Your Dev has returned Paro)

Her lips quivered as she answered "Aa...Aap"

Advay (giggling) - Tum kabse mujhe 'aap' kehne lagi. Waah! meri aadarsh patni. Par itni izzat ki aadat nahi hai mujhe. (When did you start addressing me as 'tum'. Great! My ideal wife. But I am not habitual to such respect)

He joked making her smile and remembering as to why she was standing she hurriedly took the sieve and looked at the moon. She moved the sieve to see Advay's face who winked and blew a kiss at her while her pooled with tears. She blushed and prayed for his long life. She offered water to the moon to secure its blessings. Taking the water from the thaali, he gave her the first sip and fed her with the first morsel of the day. She was about to keep the thali aside, when he stopped her

Advay - Oh Madam, what kind of a wife are you who doesn't care for her husband who is hungry since morning?

Confused at first, her eyes widened as she realised he had fasted for her. Her heart swelled with pride and more tears brimmed her eyes. She hurriedly took the morsel and fed him lovingly. Not able to control her tears any longer, she hugged him tight and broke down in his arms. He embraced her shielding her in his protective arms and patted her hair to calm down her sobs. Shutting his eyes, Advay let his own tears freely fall as today they finally united.

Chandini (stammering in between the sobs) - I miss...(hiccups)...I missed you so much

Advay (pulling her closer) - I missed you too Jaan...(his voice cracking)... I missed you...

Chandini (crying) - You won't leave me again, right...

Advay - Yes, jaan, I promise I won't leave you ever...ever...again...

They stayed in each other's embrace for quite a long time when she came out of the hug and kissed all over his face. Wiping his tears, she touched her forehead with his as he always did

Chandini - We won. Distance and time couldn't separate us, Advay

Advay's throat clogged with tears and he managed to just nod a yes. He gave her a hard peck on her head and placed her head on his heart to make her listen his wild heartbeats. She kissed him there and cuddled more in his arms. After a while, when they regained their composure, he made her sit on the chair and handed her a glass of water. He kneeled infront like he always did and gazed at her affectionately. She had gained a bit weight, her cheeks appeared to be more chubby. She was looking ethereal in this bridal attire. He noticed her wearing the sindoor and the gold chain he tied stood out amongst the other jewelleries she wore, and his heart skipped a beat. His heart bubbled in joy as he realised how dedicated and committed she was for this marriage which was not even complete. He always knew how much respect she held for the concept of marriage and that she would be the best wife one could ever had. His love for the woman sitting in front her increased manifolds and his heart filled with appreciation and delight seeing how patient she had been for 3 damn years, how mature she had become, the girl who always clinged to him was now an independent lawyer. She gazed his face which had grown a bit manly. He had thick stubble which gave him an intense and serious as well as sexy look. He was leaner now and probably quite fit. She trailed her eyes to his broad shoulders, taut chest and the muscles outlined by his transparent white shirt. She adored the man who loved her immensely, who patiently waited for 3 long years, who married her without thinking twice just because he couldn't break her dream of a wedding night, who never cried infront of her only so that she doesn't feel weak, who was her pillar of strength since past 23 years of her existence. Her sacrifice was fruitful as today Raizada Group was fast emerging in the abroad economies only because of him.

Chandini - I know you very well. You had plans to surprise me by your arrival. But what is confusing is whether you actually planned to arrive on Karva Chauth or is it just a concidence? ...she questioned him

Advay - Last week I was talking to mom, she was out to shop for Karva Chauth. That is when it struck me that we actually got married on this festival. I was guilty that I didn't even call you on this day in past 2 years since I know you will definitely fast for me. So to make it up to you, I purposely planned my arrival on Karva Chauth and fasted for you so that we celebrate our togetherness equally

By the time he finished, he saw her crying again. She kept his head on her lap and rested her face on the back of his head. This was their way of hiding the overflowing emotions from each other and shed their silent tears. To lighten up the mood, Advay said

Advay - You should thank me for fulfilling your wish of recreating the 'Silsila yeh chaahat ka' scene in your life.

Chandini (smilingly) - Thanks but no thanks as you forgot to gift your wife on this important day

Advay pretended to think while she imitated him. He took out a small box from his jacket pocket and kept in front of her. She stopped laughing as her stuck on the contents of the box which contained a solitaire while the band was made up of white gold and platinum.

Advay - Will you marry me?... Again... Mrs. Chandini Advay Singh Raizada

He didn't need words her eyes were enough to give her answer and he quickly slid the ring in her finger. When the cold metal touched her body, she looked up at him. She felt goosebumps as he matched the desire which pooled in her eyes too.

Warning Mature Content (18+)

Standing up, he scooped her in his arms and headed towards the bed. Her beated wildly thinking about what would happen next. All the while his eyes never left hers. Placing her on the bed, she sat hugging her knees like a newly wed bride. He sat besides her and drank her beauty while she shivered at his gaze. He took her right hand and trailing his nose on the length of her hand he reached her ear and gave a tight kiss on the sensitive spot. Chandini curled her toes and clutched her lehenga tight to control her moans. He nuzzled her neck and unpinning her dupatta threw it away making her gasp. He loosened her hair and inhale fruity smell of her shampoo. Removing the bangles, he kissed her wrists. He kissed her feet as he removed the anklets. He placed upen mouthed kisses on her neck as he untied her necklace. Her breathing became heavy as he continued his slow assault and she grasped his hand tight which was on her lap. He roamed his hands on her back and untied the dori of her blouse. Placing soft kisses, he moved further down and opened its hooks while she took a deep breath. Her blouse was gone and then he unhooked her bra with his teeth and threw it away. He laid her on the bed and gazed her.

Her upper body was bare and she shivered under his intense gaze. Shyly he crossed her arms over her chest and blushed furiously. He undid her hands and rubbed the artificial colour off her lips. "I like you raw" he whispered making her turn into a deeper shade of red. She opened his shirt buttons and he discarded his shirt carelessly. Once done, he slammed his lips on her while she roamed her hands on his washboard abs, flat chest, taut muscles, broad shoulders finally resting in his thick mane. Their kiss was an expression of longing, desire, passion, sacrifice. He kissed her thoroughly while she responded with equal fervour while the tongues battled for dominance. He trailed a line open mouthed kisses starting from her jawline till her throat and bit her there while she moaned his name in return. He came to her bosoms and dipped his head into her valley and she moaned his name ever so sweetly. He caught one of her globes in his hand and massaged them till they were erect and ready for him and did the same with its twin. He latched his mouth hungrily over her luscious curves and in turn her hold on his hair tightened. He nipped, teased, sucked them till they were red and sore. At the same time he freed her from the heavy lehenga while her hands worked on his pants unbuckling and pulling them down.

He moved down towards her navel and placed feather light kisses around it. He shredded the last pieces of their clothing moved his one hand inside her thighs and reached her sensitive spot. She gasped loudly at the most intimate contact. He inserted his middle finger inside her core and her eyes rolled back, it soon became two, three and four and then she experienced that ecstatic sensation after a long time. "Happy Anniversary darling" he said and entered her in one powerful thrust. It hurt her since she was indulging in sexual activity after a long time. He waited for her to adjust and once she was okay he moved inside her. Soon pleasure took over pain and they rocked back and forth in the age old rhythm. He fastened his pace and they both came together for the first time. He collapsed on her while she whispered "Happy Anniversary" and dozed off in in his embrace. Pulling a quilt over them, he slept taking her in his arms.


Hope you like it guys. Please hit like and comment. Happy Reading

Loads of Love,

Nazia😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
A happy ending as you promised.. Thank you for this
AdvNi are are no less than Dev and Paaro.☺️ Abd the end scene was just☺️

Just loved it.🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Lost_Somewhere

A happy ending as you promised.. Thank you for this

AdvNi are are no less than Dev and Paaro.☺️Abd the end scene was just☺️

Just loved it.🤗

Thanks Antra. Hot and passionate Advini are ☺️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Wow that was a beautiful ending to an endearing story.
Loved it so much.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Amazing update
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Wah advay and chandni ki shaddi bhi nhi hui ab tak Bt Yeha toh karwa chauth bhi aa gayi Bahut advance me chal rehi ho.. Next story me toh bache bhi hoge Bt I really love your stories.. Ab tak 3 pada and I loved all the three
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-

Wow that was a beautiful ending to an endearing story.
Loved it so much.

Thank you Sona. Love you dear. 😊

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