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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Fantastic chapters

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Did you draw it?

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

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EPISODE 11: EMPLOYED

ONLY CHANDNI WOULD BE ABLE TO fully satisfy our curiosity about what Devay Kayeshta had been like in those sunny years prior to his family's extinguishment. She might tell us about his youthful confidence. About his teasing manners. His winsome smile. The quickness of his mind. And the mature understanding he displayed from an early age towards his filial responsibilities.

But one thing about Devay---about that young boy's devotion to a certain lively little girl---was revealed to us by Advay himself.

When Veer told him that it had been Chandni who had been abducted, Advay rushed to his feet, upsetting his coffee mug, and looked with wide-eyed agitation. It was as though he had just been told that a member of his family was in danger at this very moment.

Veer also stood. He was puzzled by this strong reaction. "Do you know Chandni?" he asked.

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2filmy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#155

Wow Veer gave a lot of information
He has gathered a lot till now
I liked how they are already so informal with each other
Advay views about Chandni influenced his theory to some extent
But I applaud that he will still find out the whole truth
and will conclude with either justice or truth
I love their bond already
And it is true Chandni did not tell Shikha of the kiss
So she indeed likes to keep some things to herself
But Advay thoughts about the kidnapper being a lover is wrong

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janu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#156

Advay has cleverly covered up his outburst...

Veer is bound to shikha and hence would like to go with the investigation which either ways bring out the truth...I love his attitude towards the new finding...

And advay,just like his dad made a pact with veer which binds veer to him...

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Lily30

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Posted: 8 years ago

#157

Loved part 11 👏
Advay has doubts on Chandi kidnapping, loved Veer quest for truth.
Advay and Veer in a contract.
Eager for the next part.
Thank you for the email 😃

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javeria

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Posted: 8 years ago

#158

Awesome chapter

I wonder when will the real of chandni abduction disclose?

It is so sad and indeed truth that society accuses women before men.

Looking forward to read next chapter.

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Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 8 years ago

#159

Amazing updates till now.
Loving the way you are shaping up the story.
Loved veer Advay interactions.
Continue soon.

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Uthra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#160

I am always at a loss of words when it comes to my thoughts on your chapters. Because thy aren't ordinary, never predictable and take unexpected turns and by the end of every chapter I am so reeling under its effect that I don't know what to say. When advay comes to know that it was chandni who was kidnapped, anyone would expect for his heart to bleed for her. It did, he masks it well and then he goes on to support the theory that most people believe in because she says her heart belongs to someone else. Any cliched writer would have made advay thinks it is Dev she is referring to because they are connected at a divine level. But J wouldn't. That's the beauty of your writing. Because that's what people do in real life. You don't seem to get carried away by cliches. Love your writing!!

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