FF: -Chandni- by Jalebi Jane EPISODE 1-14 Rest at JalebiJane.com - Page 15

Originally posted by: rajatshweta

Veer told Advay about how he was found by the farmer and got adopted and even his age at that time. And Advay still did not have a hint ? There's something you are not telling us, Sister !

Veer aspires to be a world famous investigator, but disclosed his investigation and his clients' name to Advay 😆

Originally posted by: reflorated

Hello, just caught up to this story finally. Consider this my bookmark. I shall return with reviews on the chapters so far by this weekend, hopefully

But before this, I wish to ask your view on a dichotomy that I simply cannot resolve in my own mind. How does Advay Singh Raizada, the mathematician reconcile with the illogical leaps he is taking in the investigation of his parent's murder?

The obvious answer here is that his emotions are coloring his thoughts. But that is not my question. I ask, when does Advay step back and decide to take a conscious decision to look at it from the perspective of a mathematician and not as someone who has suffered deep injustice?

Coming to my personal worries - I am afraid of what I see. The wheel is turning. But the past is best not repeated, especially if the consequence is women suffering at the hands of the men who have no business punishing them in the first instance.

Originally posted by: JalebiJane

Thank you for your interest in my work, Sister.

Yes, you are right :-) You will not find logical thought and rational reasoning in my tales.

I write what I enjoy reading---and in my five years of writing, I have not yet learnt how to write a story that is tightly-crafted [where all hints are picked up immediately, where all characters behave as they ought to] without sacrificing the qualities I enjoy, such as dramatic tension. I am aware that there are writers out there who can do this. If you know of any, please let me know. I'm always open to studying craft.

Jalebi Jane

Originally posted by: rajatshweta

That was an instant thought that came to me when I read this Chapter. I did not mean to hurt you, as a Writer. Each writer is different. Sometimes, while downloading the thought flow on paper / computer, some minor details gets skipped. Or, those details are picked from readers' feedback and captured in further chapters. Mine was one such positive criticism.But, I think, I wielded a knife or spanner somewhere in your work.If you were offended by my words, I am sorry. That was completely unintentional. I would refrain from commenting henceforth. I think I should Just stick to Like Button.