DRABBLE - Genesis 3:19 (NOTE: Page 8)

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Here's a Drabble I wrote when the Rabba Ve music video first came out. Posting now. 😆

It's also up on the blog (link in my siggy)

Love,
Limon.


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GENESIS 3:19


As his boot clad feet crunched under the barren land he was walking on, the sun blazing on his parched skin, his trusted guitar slung across his shoulders, he came to a halt at the big old rusty gate. He looked up, squinting his eyes, tears forming instantly as the Sun pierced through them. He blinked several times to clear his vision as he opened the gate and strode inside.

Pain seared through his heart. Destruction! There was so much of it in his life. As he bent down to scoop up some of the earth, anger sizzled his entire body. That's when he had a moment of clarity. As the fire raged inside him, his molten caramel eyes blazed and crackled.



He clenched his teeth as he grabbed the ashes. His heart felt heavy. The grief was unbearable more often than not.

But he had a mission to accomplish. He had that person...that beautiful, innocent looking person...to destroy!

Ashes to ashes, dust to dust.


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As he peeked at the ashes inside the pot one last time, he took a vow, to make it into a reality...for her and her family...for taking away his own.

for out of it wast thou taken;

for dust thou art, and unto dust shalt thou return.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow!! Well written!! 👍🏼
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Wow! Too good and now after reading Advay's ilzaam, it is just perfect.
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beautiful!!! m more intrigued in Advay nw <3
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loved it ❤️ the imagery in the video was beautiful and u made it even more so 😳
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That is beautiful Nimbu Ji ❤️
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You wrote it so perfectly
Now it looks like they made that promo reading this piece
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Wohooo! My sin di is back! And with a freaking bang!!!!!
BRING IT ON, ADVAY! We have Sin Di to analyze any shit you have to throw at us!!!!
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This is too good! Yaayyy I can't wait for your work on this [:D/]
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Very well written. Loved it!

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