ADVNI-(SS)-Ruthless Rejection-LAST CHAPTER-updated. - Page 8

Originally posted by: Devilicious

Outstanding!

Deeply in love with the sizzling chemistry btw advni through this story

Great work once again

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon plz :)

Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor

Nice concept...So, Chandni lost her eyesight because of Advay's small mistake...he is punishing himself for the accident which happened in their childhood. They both love each other hopefully they will be together soon.

Thank you so much for loving the concept.

Originally posted by: Isha28

Chapter 2

Shocking to know that Advay has his own pain to deal with. He has more scars physically as well as emotionally. Poor Advay he is punishing himself more for what he did to his Chandu unknowingly. Even his mother and Meghna knows his feelings. All but Chandni.

Both of them have been living with pain and guilt all these years. I do hope Advay and Chandni come together and fight all these battles together. Thank God Advay's mother will tell the truth finally.

Thanks a lot for the PM. Waiting for next update. Update soon.

Thanks a lot for your detailed comment on the chapter.

Originally posted by: Isha28

Chapter 3

Thanks a lot for your super fast updates. You are incredible. And thanks for the PM.

This one is the most emotional update. Only if Advay and Chandni sat and talked after that horrendous incident, they wouldn't be missing each other now. But they found an easy way out, ran away from the situation rather than facing it. And the price they had paid all these years is huge. More than love, they are missing each other's companion and friendship.

Advay's mother is in hospital! Hope she is fine. The last part of the update is wow. Finally the two are able to share their pain with each other. Although a different pain altogether. Hope Advay doesn't run away from chandni this time like always. Is Advay's mother gonna die? Please update soon.

Thank you for your awesome comments too, which motivates me to continue writing.

OMG! Advay's mother is in coma. I can't even imagine what Advay is going through. Chandni understands Advay so well. Even though she doesn't know the truth, she can feel advay is hurting and she wants to heal him. I know she will. I liked how she took her stand when she wanted to meet Ma.
I don't think Chandni will be able to read the letter so soon when Advay is hell bent on stopping her from doing so.
The last words, "You will have to heal me", was so meaningful. Yes, Chandni will surely heal him.
Waiting for next part.

Superb!!! Chandni understand him.so well... Hope she read the letter soon and heal his pain...

Another awesome update!

Awsome update.
Hope Chandani gets to know whats in the letter.

Originally posted by: barsha_dash

OMG! Advay's mother is in coma. I can't even imagine what Advay is going through. Chandni understands Advay so well. Even though she doesn't know the truth, she can feel advay is hurting and she wants to heal him. I know she will. I liked how she took her stand when she wanted to meet Ma.
I don't think Chandni will be able to read the letter so soon when Advay is hell bent on stopping her from doing so.
The last words, "You will have to heal me", was so meaningful. Yes, Chandni will surely heal him.
Waiting for next part.

Thanks alot for such a detailed analysis of the update.