ADVNI-(SS)-Ruthless Rejection-LAST CHAPTER-updated.

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Arunima

@barsha_dash

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#91

I loved the initial teasing and easy banter between these two. Even without seeing, Chandni could read his expressions. It shows how closely they were bonded. And then Advay had to mess it up with his anger. Those hurtful words not only pierced Chandni's heart but also Advay's. The letter still remains hidden.
Two imperfect people can fit like perfect pieces of puzzle and complete each other. I hope Advay understands this fact soon abd let Chandni complete him and her both.

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priya260187

@priya260187

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Another fabulous update darling. You are such an excellent writer.
Advay and Chandini are like two missing pieces of a puzzle who could only fit beside each other. They have to understand this.
Waiting for next update eagerly.

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

I loved their nok-jhok...even without seeing, Chandni could read his expression. Advay hurt her a lot, I hope he will rectify his mistake soon.

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DushtKanya

@DushtKanya

Alumni

+ 11

Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Aww their little banter at the beginning was so cute <3 Damn it, Advay is hurting her so much ._.

Wonder what's in that letter? 😲 Update soon 😳

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MinocheBS

@MinocheBS

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Why advay is hurting her whyy

Waiting for her to read the letter yaar plz

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-BarunTheASR-

@-BarunTheASR-

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Chapter 4

I'm really really very sorry for the late comments. I was extremely busy. Hope you would understand.

Poor Advay. Another devastating news for him. This time his mother. Hope he gets all the strength from his Chandu in these tough times. Moreover Chandu is so positive about bringing back his mother. Even Advay's chasing away from him would not deter her this time. Now what's there in that letter? So Advay is gonna play a little hide and seek with that letter. I just hope Chandu reads the letter and comes to know of Advay's feelings. He is far from telling the truth to Chandu now.

Loved how these guys are so possessive of each other. Addressing each other as my Advay or my Chandni always. And Advay always holding her possessively. Chandni knowing what Advay is feeling entirely. They are really made for each other.

Thanks for the pm and the chapter is wonderful.

Edited by Isha28 - 8 years ago

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-BarunTheASR-

@-BarunTheASR-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Chapter 5

Yes chandni you are the only person to heal him. That guy is a mess. Even more now. Enjoyed their little light moments in the beginning and just when I thought it was all okay between them Advay has to hurt her even more.

Why does Advay keep on hurting her? He hurts himself in the process too. Liked how chandni gave it back to him. Really hope Chandu reads that letter soon. Else both will be keep on hurting themselves more.

I will definitely try to be regular with my comments hereafter. Thanks a lot for the pm. Waiting for the next update.

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 32

Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: deeps_92
Nice update...
Advays Mom in coma... Both advay and chandu are worried for others pain but not their own...
Wondering what's there in Letter...did mom wrote abt advays feelings?

Thanks a lot.

Yep and only both can heal each other.

Well the letter's mystery is going to get revealed soon.

Glad you are loving the story.

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 32

Posted: 8 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: deeps_92
U updated next part too... Loved their nokjhok at start...
But advay hurt her lot at end...
Hope he rectifies it in next chapter

Thank you for your comments.

Glad you enjoyed their nok-jhoks.

Yep he did...hopefully he will learn from his mistakes now.

will be updating soon.

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 32

Posted: 8 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: barsha_dash
I loved the initial teasing and easy banter between these two. Even without seeing, Chandni could read his expressions. It shows how closely they were bonded. And then Advay had to mess it up with his anger. Those hurtful words not only pierced Chandni's heart but also Advay's. The letter still remains hidden.
Two imperfect people can fit like perfect pieces of puzzle and complete each other. I hope Advay understands this fact soon abd let Chandni complete him and her both.

Thanks a lot for loving the story so much.

It means a lot.

Yep they had that easy nok-jhok just like their past.

Yep they were indeed too close.

Yep only they can heal each other and Advay has to understand this as soon as possible now.