ADVNI-(SS)-Ruthless Rejection-LAST CHAPTER-updated.

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sunitikapoor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Nice concept...So, Chandni lost her eyesight because of Advay's small mistake...he is punishing himself for the accident which happened in their childhood. They both love each other hopefully they will be together soon.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Chapter 2

Shocking to know that Advay has his own pain to deal with. He has more scars physically as well as emotionally. Poor Advay he is punishing himself more for what he did to his Chandu unknowingly. Even his mother and Meghna knows his feelings. All but Chandni.

Both of them have been living with pain and guilt all these years. I do hope Advay and Chandni come together and fight all these battles together. Thank God Advay's mother will tell the truth finally.

Thanks a lot for the PM. Waiting for next update. Update soon.

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-BarunTheASR-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Chapter 3

Thanks a lot for your super fast updates. You are incredible. And thanks for the PM.

This one is the most emotional update. Only if Advay and Chandni sat and talked after that horrendous incident, they wouldn't be missing each other now. But they found an easy way out, ran away from the situation rather than facing it. And the price they had paid all these years is huge. More than love, they are missing each other's companion and friendship.

Advay's mother is in hospital! Hope she is fine. The last part of the update is wow. Finally the two are able to share their pain with each other. Although a different pain altogether. Hope Advay doesn't run away from chandni this time like always. Is Advay's mother gonna die? Please update soon.

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Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: barunlover1302
its different concept and im loving it already 👏👏
now what will be their destiny?

Thanks a lot for loving it.

It means alot.

Just wait and watch for the next part.

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Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: CalmaRanbir
NO SUSPENSE PLEASE!! I JUST HATE IT!! BUT PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!!

Don't worry the suspense will be over in the next part.

Will continue soon.

Thanks for commenting.

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Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: barsha_dash
This was such an emotional update. Well written. 😊
I was actually imagining Advay breaking down and Chandni consoling him. The storyline is really good.

Thank you so much it means a lot.

I am really glad you loved it so much.

Tune in for the future updates too.

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Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Andr_eana
Emotional update

Thanks alot.

It means so much.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: .MyriadOfHues.
This is so beautiful. The way you described their embrace and the way she was there for him... The way he forgot all logic, his mind gave way and he let his heart feel by simply holding her <3 I already love Advay and Chandni ❤️

Thank you so much for such a lovely comment. I am really glad you enjoyed reading the update.

I too love them so much.😳