RiKara 3S : His Naive Lolita(Completed) - Page 6

Originally posted by: OoViVioO

I for one loved the twist. I am all about drama..so a bit of spice really pulls me in to want to read more😆 I am kind of glad you didnt go the obvious route 😉

Poor Omkie xD his innocent wife looking for something he could easily show her :P

Very well carried written

I never expected something hot 😛
And what are you saying? This was funny! 😆

Idk why but I was kinda hurt at Om's presumption that Gauri watches po*n. Don't he see how innocent and naive the poor chirayya is? -_-

And if you are gonna continue it then I really wanna know why Om didn't take their relationship to the next level before? I mean, if Gauri would have ever said those things to him, would he have never done the deed?

I am REALLY REALLY wishing for next chapter with lots of Rikara conversation!

And about this chap, it was worth the wait! 😃

Ohh poor omkara was so shocked seeing his wife searching for BJ...
But loved the way you took it forward and om would be coming up clean about his past before taking the next step
Continue Soon

Oh my God..!! How can you just stop there..?! 😲

This was amazing loved it so much.

Originally posted by: ..LittleLiar..

I never expected something hot 😛
And what are you saying? This was funny! 😆

Idk why but I was kinda hurt at Om's presumption that Gauri watches po*n. Don't he see how innocent and naive the poor chirayya is? -_-

And if you are gonna continue it then I really wanna know why Om didn't take their relationship to the next level before? I mean, if Gauri would have ever said those things to him, would he have never done the deed?

I am REALLY REALLY wishing for next chapter with lots of Rikara conversation!

And about this chap, it was worth the wait! 😃

Originally posted by: Farri25

Res.

Kya U turn liya behen ? 😲 Lemme go read 😆

UnRess...

A U turn ? I would call it a beautiful turn instead Maha... makes this even more special ...read a Kali closure sometime ago... and you have given us one too an amazing one... and now getting this one !!!! It was sooo muchch needed really, and you've taken it beautifully from a light hearted thing to some drama and intensity... My heart kept getting heavy as I kept reading and the END ! Why do you people end it that waayyy 🥱

I just realized how much we deserve this CLOSURE tooo ! 😭 They simply touched the topic and closed it suddenly 🥱 That hume aapke past ke baare mein Kuch nahi jaanna Omkaraji hume Koi farq nahi padta.. was so not satisfying I tell you ! 🤢

Lol I could literally imagine Omki's expressions ! I was freaking out over here when that fone rang 😆 😆 I was llike Oh No Oh shit No No No ! 😲 😆

I'm glad you took this turn, and now my heart will be more satisfied as another closure is on the way 😃

Loved it and WAITING FOR THE NEXT ONE ! 😆 ❤️

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Poor Omkie xD his innocent wife looking for something he could easily show her :P

I love the U turn you took

It is important for both of them to talk about Om's past

Especially since Riddhima lived with him ...so it is only natural that before he can do it with Gauri they should talk about it

Else Gauri will feel the way she did now- Like he doesn't want her that way and that he likes Riddhima more ...

Can't wait for the next part :D