Story 9 -Twist & Turn Tales (Rikara) -PART 2-pg 4

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RingsOfSaturn

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Aarathi85
Wow the second part is so beautiful...really carried away with the same emotions of the first part...so beautiful...

Thank you dear.
Glad you like the continuity and development of Gauri's emotions. Gauri is a treat to write in any circumstance and this one is very special of course, thanks to Cinammon's plot.

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RingsOfSaturn

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Farri25
Oh My
So beautifully, so amazingly, so well carried... I love both you people... it's so beautiful from the beginning to the end of part 2... it's so so so beautiful❤️❤️
Very Very great work !😃
I hope the next writer does equal justice to this too... it's beautiful till now... I want both of yours proper end to this now...😆😃
Keep it up Yo !👍🏼

Thank you very much dear.
For all the love and encouragement.
I loved writing it, definitely chuffed, and your comments are beautiful.
Thank you for reading and leaving feedback.

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priyadil

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

chap 2- Smoothly developed nice chap...👏

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Khidki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Amazing Chapter!

I have to mention that I really love they manner of your narration and writing style.Lovely!

Loved how you described the inner mess within Gauri. Her contrasting thoughts and actions. The walk through her mind was nicely done.The dimensions of her mixed thoughts were very well brought out. I really loved it.

Well brought out twist - from intimacy to escapism! Brilliant idea there!

In all a fabulous update waiting to see how this one finds the much needed conclusion😳

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RingsOfSaturn

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Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Amazing..
You carried it so well..
It was hawt and cute..
I loved the way you've handled the Gauri and Arjun thing..
Jealous Ri is a treat..
Waiting to read the next part..

Thank you dear.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Yes, Gauri-Arjun had to be handled to make space for Rikara!! 😆 😆
And yes, jealous and completely confused Ri!
A treat to watch/ read and write.

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RingsOfSaturn

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Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Srivalli.t
Amazing!!
Loved it..
Very beautifully written..

Thank you dear!

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RingsOfSaturn

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Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie
Part 2
Smooth transition...

Loved it

Jealous Ri rocks...

The way you described her feelings was lovely

🤗

Thank you dear.
Getting into Ri's head having just kissed her Kara the other night was fun :)

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RingsOfSaturn

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Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: devildiva21
Part 2 was awesome... loved the way you described Gauri's feeling...
And Jealous Gauri was a treat to read...
Loved it ❤️

Thank you very much dear!
Glad you enjoyed it.

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RingsOfSaturn

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Posted: 7 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid
Part 2 is awesome
Loved the jealous Ri
Very beautifully,amazingly written
Loved the way you described gauri's feelings
Loved it so much❤️

Thank you dear.
It is always motivating when people leave comments.
Very glad you liked it , thank you for the encouragement and feedback.