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Amazing Chapter!
I have to mention that I really love they manner of your narration and writing style.Lovely!Loved how you described the inner mess within Gauri. Her contrasting thoughts and actions. The walk through her mind was nicely done.The dimensions of her mixed thoughts were very well brought out. I really loved it.Well brought out twist - from intimacy to escapism! Brilliant idea there!In all a fabulous update waiting to see how this one finds the much needed conclusion😳
Thank you so much dear ! :)
You made my day.
Love your comments and glad you liked the story development and my narrative.
The collaboration of three writers is your idea after all. :)
Getting into Gauri's head and walking in her shoes was a lot of fun. Intimacy to escapism - that's the idea - you got it.
Yes, waiting for the conclusion as well.
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