T & T Tales! (Shivika)pART 3-p12-Through Thick & Thin (complet - Page 7

Originally posted by: ithihaas

@Risha,

That was lovely continuation to what Harshada has written and I didn't feel like some other writer has written it... the story and the flow seemed continuous...

The twist is some thing unexpected and I am glad that you had incorporated this even though you had other ideas and it did perfectly fit in the scenario at the end of the part 1.

I loved the turmoil portrayed for Shivaay and also the reactions of Annika as soon as she knew it and the way she consoled him was nicely done.

Cannot wait to read the final update to this story !

Originally posted by: Rachna.KG

Risha, I am so impressed that you ventured out and wrote something which many don't even attempt. This whole idea of twists and turns is phenomenal and first author & you, what a team you both are.

I loved this concept and it is one area which needs to be addressed by Indian Tele. Recently watched a documentary on this issue about men born in 1970's and I was shocked to hear that this problem is of epic proportion. Would love to see IB addressing this...but then it's too much to ask for. Glad you addressed it and it's written so well.

Reserved for Harshada's part.😳😳

Reserved for Risha's part😳😳

Hey harshu ❤️
You know no one can write such a beautifully emotional story like you do! The flow had me drown into it that much that I wonder how it ended just too early :P
To be extremely true I thought that Shivaay was an orphan in this story because the way he was doing everything and such, as well you didn't even mentioned the Oberoi Family here so I thought it is only about Annika and Shivaay as an alternate universe story! It was just perfectly written.

Coming to Risha ❤️ girl you just blowned me with that twist int he tale, not just because there was something regarding infertility but the way you showed that Shivaay was at fault it just made the story more interesting, because in today's time everyone blamed the girl in this matter, but the way you tackled with the first part you just made it more satisfying. The way Shivaay wanted to protect annika from this cruel world was the best thing ever happened and believe me I fell in love with him again!
Beside Om entry was just to unexpected! *shock written all over my face*
Hoping I will not disappoint any one of you with the ending :)

Much love,
-Anya.

Originally posted by: elysianights

Coming to Risha ❤️ girl you just blowned me with that twist int he tale, not just because there was something regarding infertility but the way you showed that Shivaay was at fault it just made the story more interesting, because in today's time everyone blamed the girl in this matter, but the way you tackled with the first part you just made it more satisfying. The way Shivaay wanted to protect annika from this cruel world was the best thing ever happened and believe me I fell in love with him again!
Beside Om entry was just to unexpected! *shock written all over my face*
Hoping I will not disappoint any one of you with the ending :)

Much love,
-Anya.

Originally posted by: --Risha--

Thanks, Anya! Om's entry was to help the third writer conclude the story - which happens to be you, now 😆 Hope it helps.😆

@Bold - That's SSO for you😉

Yeah a I know that you gave Om's entry just to Give some ray of light to the next writer and believe me,my mind is just too messy That Many things are revolving but with each thing i came with i only get disappointed to think that it may not fit the story, let's see, I will think about this story next morning until then, I hope while sleeping I get some thoughts inact! 😆

@Bold Above, well you are right! That's what Shivaay is for me in every true senses ;) ❤️

From IAdoreYou to Risha the story has perfectly blended.

Originally posted by: Thwisha617

From IAdoreYou to Risha the story has perfectly blended.

It didnt feel at all that two different writers wrote it.👏

Its a great concept Khidki.Love it.😳

Waiting for the conclusion.The expectations hace gone a notch higher from the last writer owing to these two.

Well done Risha n IAdoreYou👏

Originally posted by: Rainy-Season

Reserved for Risha's part😳😳

P.S. to Both the writers: Unreserve can take time as I have become a slow reader.🥱🥱

Unres

Beautiful continuation to Harshada's story.😳😳
You justified the whole track in an awesome way.⭐️⭐️
More amazing was the issue or topic on which you have developed the whole story. It was very innovative and very nicely written. From Shivaay's anger to his pain of being the reason for snatching Annika's right of motherhood; everything was beautifully done.👏👏