Agyatvaas : Shivika TS part2 (5/2/18)

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A take, not exactly on Agyatvaas but a previously rumoured track.
I don't know how many shivika readers are active in this forum now. Posting part 1 soon.. Completion depends on response.

Please tell me whether anyone wants
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Part one


Annika


We had just played all those games and we are now dead for the world. It is just me and Shivaay in this tiny little cottage at Shimla. He works in a nearby company and I sell little sweets that we make at home. Like Ram and Sita we were spending our agyatvaas on this cold mountains.

I am concerned for Shivaay more than anything. He was a man who lived for his family. Now, left alone unrecognised and uncared for, away from his lifelines OmRu. They were the best that even I could ask her. Shivaay's loss is too big, I know.

I also know that he doesn't get any sleep even after the tiring day's work. He will just wait for me to fall asleep and then walk out into the cold.

Grabbing a shawl I open the creaky wooden door. The cold wind gushing in, pierce all exposed parts of my skin. I shouldn't have invested in all these weird clothes back home.

He stands all broken and blank staring at the sky. As soon as he spots me he frowns in concern. "Annika andar jao bimar pad jayengi he says and rushes forward to adjust my shawl. I smile as I cup his cold cheeks and rub some heat onto them.

Pulling his hand I take him inside and close the door. I Make him sit near the fireplace and gather some warm clothes for him.

Later in the night he rests his head on my lap. I gently caress his hair threading them between my fingers. He starts sobbing softly and soon they turn into blood curdling cries. I keep drawing soothing circles on his back, dropping feathery kisses on his forehead. As the night darkens we lose ourselves to each other.

Weeks later, I find myself angry and sick at everything. Tiniest things piss me off, and I would pick a nasty fight with him. He would occasionally burst out and I would finally cry myself to sleep. He being the gentleman, would then do endless cute things to cheer me up.

I felt really hopeless for troubling Shivaay at this juncture, I had to be his strength. I really need to find the reason and cure for my problem right now.

My missing period was enough doubt for me. Googling up with my limited data I got an appointment with a gynaecologist in the town. It was twenty minutes by the line bus to reach her. Sitting in the bus I wonder how difficult it would be for Shivaay to cope with all this situations. A smile appear on my lips as I remember Dadi and her Aam admi chunoti. I hope her prayers would keep her billu safe.

Dr. Usha was such a warm person, something that Jhanvi aunty used to be before. After peering on my reports for long she gives me a smile and a nod.

I stand numb with tears forming in my eyes not knowing how to react. I am worried about Shivaay's reaction, was he ready? Am I ready? Can I trust myself with the responsibility of a newborn? Endless questions pop in my head. I don't want my baby to suffer the way I did. I don't want Shivaay to have more worries.

If I was at OM everyone would have been so excited about this whole thing. I would have had my brothers and sister in laws to help me, Dadi to guide me. Even Pinky aunty would have been happy with me. What am I gonna do now!

Edited by MariaRebecca - 7 years ago
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Part two

I got the bus back home after getting some vitamins the Dr. had prescribed. I need to get back before Shivaay. The doctor's words seemed to ring in my ears.

"It's okay to be nervous dear, it's your first time. Talk to your husband and take the right decision. Just remember one thing, you are not alone anymore. There is a little life growing inside you.

My heart warmed at that. I was always alone. Then I had Sahil. Then a wonderful family. Now I have lost both of them. The only thing I'm left with is my Shivaay. He is my life. Now I'm having a baby. Our baby. I'm going to be a Mother. The feeling definitely completes a woman!

I walk tensed and tired back home. He sat at the door and is now watching me intently. Raising an eyebrow he questions my whereabouts. I try to hold myself together barely coping.

He seemed to have noticed my pale face and holds my shoulders together. I suddenly feel all light and dizzy. Oh god, I didn't have lunch. I sway slightly. "Annika he screams in concern. I soon find myself swept off my feet and pressed against our cold mattress. His hot breath fans my face. I try to resist but he holds me tight and I fall asleep snuggling in his warmth.


Shivaay

I shuttle between the kitchen and the bedroom to have a check on both Annika and the soup.

She felt warmer than usual but she didn't have a fever. Pouring the hot liquid into a bowl, I slowly walk to our room. I feel my eyes prick, seeing her so drained out. How many promises had I made to keep her happy.

She wakes up and looks around confused. I smile at her as I help her settle against the pillows.I really don't want to shout at her but I'm angry at her for being so careless.

"Bimar hai toh bahar kyun gayi? Lunch kiya tumne?

I ask composing my voice. She simply stares at the floor. I get my answer.

I just forward a spoonful of soup towards her. She turns away and starts to shed big big tears. She had been behaving weird recently but it doesn't fail to freak me out.

Gently cupping her cheeks, I ask her what's troubling her.

"Aap gussa mat karo Shivaay...

"Batao Annika...

"Aap... aap Pappa..

"Kya

"Main pregnant hu..Shivaay

My world stands still as I contain the meaning of her words. Annika was expecting. We are gonna have a baby. I'm going to be a Father.

When BadiMa was expecting Om. Everyone was afraid how I'll react to a new child. But when she came home with a little bundle covered in a soft shawl. He was so small and was constantly crying. I pulled back my fingers as soon as I touched him. But he suddenly stopped crying and showed me his beady eyes. I just wanted to take him and keep him with myself.

The same thing repeated for Rudy and Prinku too. I never felt I will ever feel more warmth for anyone else. But now I feel so different, so blessed. This happiness would have multiplied if my family was around.

As soon as I come out of my thoughts I wipe away my tears. I suddenly notice Annika clutching the bedsheet in horror.

"Shivaay I'm sorry, agar...aap...nahi... ch...chathe..

I rush to her side and rubs her back as she starts to hiccup badly and cry hysterically. She has misunderstood my reaction for not wanting the baby. I try to tell her, but she hardly listens and continues to murmur something in a trance.

"Annika, Annika I need this baby I scream again and she nows looks at me expectantly. "It's our baby, itna kushi diya tumne mujhe Annika. I hug and drop kisses on her head. She snuggles closer to me. I feel so complete holding my wife and baby together.


What is in store for Shivika?

Is there happiness short lived?

Find out in the next update.


Edited by MariaRebecca - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Can you share the link of Forgiven or Not? I am interested in reading it :) and also excited to read this one!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Plz update!!! I am shivika fan and i want to read forgiven or not also!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Please update both stories. Looks interesting.
If possible pm me please about next updates of both the stories😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome story Maru. Please continue.
And it's Agyatvaas,not Agastyavas.

Agyat means unknown.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Fantastic concept
Shivay and Anika are living away from their family and now Anika is pregnant too
What will be Shivay's reaction????
Update soon please
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awww lovely update!!! Its making me cry
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you so much for such a lovely update.
The forum hasnt been active or booming with shivika stories as they used to be and i was missing it very much

But plz do update soon, eagerly awaiting...

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