UNCHAIN MY HEART: A RIKARA SS : part 11 (03-04) pg 16 - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting update.
Eager to know about gauri a past now.
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UNCHAIN MY HEART: PART FIVE

"Mishra, check Gauri's Cv, her bank account details, her address, her past her present everything. Mishra I need every detail of Gauri as soon as possible" Omkara ordered Mishra almost shouting. "But why this urgent" Pinky asked confusingly. "One sec, choti maa. Mishra I want the details before my patience gets over and you know your time limit" he warned. "Sure sir, I will give you the details in just an hour Mishra said hurriedly as he kept the phone down.

"Yes, choti maa, you were saying something he asked. "I was asking that why suddenly on the earth do you want Gauri's details. What is so important Om? Pinky finished the scentence. "I just wanted to know everything about her, because... "because you love her.. right she completed. "Yes, but how do you...? "Omkara you grew up in front of me. After jethji and jethaniji passed away I have taken care of you and after all these years at least I know what is going on in my son's heart she said caressing his cheek. "I know choti maa he said with a small smile.

"But Om do you don't know anything about gauri? she asked. "Yes and that is my biggest problem he complained. "Omkara can I help you? she offered. "You know about her he almost jumped im excitement. "Not everything, but yes I know what I have seen she said. "Please choti maa, please tell me he begged. "Om, when I and Shaktiji went to Bareilly for one of his business trip, we went to an orphanage named aaa... yaa "Thakur child home to donate some money in the memory of my mother. It was when we came across a chirpy girl named Gauri Sharma. She really had a charm. She talked to everyone with at most care and respect. She was really everyone's favourite there she started. "She still is he thought.

"It was her because of whom that orphanage was running because the owner was too old to handle it, and his only son-in-law Kaali Thakur was the most disgusting man this earth would ever have she had a frown on her face. "I still remember his behaviour to us the frown deepened. "But she was enough to handle it because she had the support of his father-in-law the frown relaxes. "But then while driving back to Mumbai, we found the same girl lying with blood scattered all over her body, as if she has fallen over the cliff we were passing by she completed.

"Fallen over a cliff... How come? he questioned. "I don't know... I really don't. But as you know your chote papa; he took that girl to a hospital nearby and said me to go to the hotel we stayed she said. "What then? he again questioned again. "He insisted to take that girl with us and without a word saying anything he just brought her here with us she said. "She was here in the Oberoi Mansion and I don't know about it? he was shocked and confused at the same time.

"Yes, she was here for two months when you were out of the country she answered. "Then; what? he asked for continuation. "She remained silent all the while till Shaktiji took her to Dr. Priya she said. "But Dr. Priya is a psychiatrist, right "Yes, and after attending few sessions of her, Gauri became alright and the only thing she asked was to be left alone. Shaktiji agreed and she went to stay away, leaving the Oberoi Mansion she was done. "That's it he asked as if wanting to know more. "Yes, this is it I know about Gauri. Her past is the only thing that Shaktiji has hidden from me in his whole life she said.

"Then the thing is really big he said because he knew that his chote papa told his choti maa everything about what he did from morning to the end. If anyone else would have said this to him he would simply have laughed his heart out to the sentence; but after Pinky told him; he knew that the thing was really big...

Just then his phone rang "Yes Mishra. "Sir, Gauri has nothing to be told about but... he paused. "But what? he almost barked. "But sir she as taken a loan of 5 lacks from the office a week ago he answered. "5 lacks... Are you sure Mishra... She has taken such a big amount he again asked. "Yes sir 100% sure he confirmed.

"5 lacks... why did she needed this huge amount of money and that too a week ago he was confused. "I think Dr. Priya could answer your questions Omkara Pinky suggested. "I think you are right choti maa and talking her blessings, Omkara drove to the City hospital.

"I want to meet Dr. Priya he almost bumped into the reception. "Sir, do you have her appointment? the receptionist asked. "No, but I want to meet her now he said. "No sir, she is really busy today. We are not allowed to let anybody meet her without appointments.

"Okay then, I need her appointment right now he said. "Sorry sir, we could only let you meet her tomorrow. There are already many appointments lined up.

This irritated him "I think you don't know who are you talking too he said. "Call the head of this place right now' he shouted. Seeing him like this both the receptionists hurried out of their places to call the head doctor. "Yes, Mr Oberoi; How can we help you? he asked. "I want to meet Dr. Priya right now he almost shouted. "But sir, she is busy he answered. "Tell me something new doctor. Your receptionists already told me this he said.

"I said I want to meet Dr Priya right now... Take as much as money you want to... But I want to meet her he announced. "Okay sir the doctor said sighing "Wait for a few minutes, I will call her. Omkara for the first time has used his powers as an Oberoi and he was really happy with the results.

"Sir, you can meet her now the nurse came to him after a whole five minutes. He entered the cabin and saw her studying something "Amm Dr Priya he said to drew her attention towards him. "Oh, so you were the one who wanted to meet me she said looking at him. "So, tell me Mr Oberoi, what is the problem? she asked.

"I want to know everything about your patient, Miss Gauri Sharma he asked. "Gauri... No I can't tell you anything she turned herself. "But why can't you... I want to know... Say the amount and it will be given but I want to know the truth he said. "Some things can't be purchased from money Mr Oberoi. And I have promised my patient to not to tell this to anyone... She answered.

"But I want to know he insisted. "Mr Oberoi, I said I can't tell you anything she was adamant. "By the way, why are you here? Why do you suddenly want to know about her? she asked. "Because I love her and... He told her everything... Everything, even what happened between them... even the intimacy that they shared.

"Mr Oberoi, what have you done? she shouted. "How could you do this... How could you do this to her... to Gauri she was almost in tears thinking what Gauri would have felt. Omkara was confused, according to him it was just a special moment shared between the two.

"But what wrong have I done... Isn't that common between two people who love each other? he asked confusingly. "It is common for normal people, Mr Oberoi... Not for Gauri she again shouted. "And has she really trold you that she loves you? a question came from her side. No, she hasn't but he knew she loved him. "I knew it... she would never do this she said confirming. "But how? he asked confusingly. "Because Gauri's biggest fear is love she said. "But why? Omkara was literally now uttered only why or now... He thought he knew everything about that girl but he knew nothing... Just nothing.

"Because Kaali... She stopped herself. "Promise me doctor, you will not tell anyone anything Gauri's words came back to her. Kaali, again Kaali... Who the hell is this Kaali and why he is there in Gauri's past everywhere. "Mr Oberoi, you can leave she ordered. "But doctor... "Just leave she said and he had no other option.

All the way to his house what all came to his mind was Gauri's silence and "because Gauri's biggest fear is love.

"Leave me Kaali, please I beg you... Leave me please she shouted. "You are paying for your sins chiraiyya... And you will have to till you are here he said. And she jerked up from his bed, realising that it was as usual a bad dream.

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Finally done... Do tell me your views...

Edited by ayushi23 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So Gauri has a bitter past that she bas been hiding from everyone..even Shakti Oberoi denied to reveal anything about her..
Omkara is desperate to know the truth but Dr isn't ready to say a word as she promised Gauri...
What I think is maybe Gauri was abused by Kaali mentally and physically..maybe that's the reason she was so unresponsive to the intimacy..
There's so many questions..continue soonish..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
Eagerly want to know gauri past
Why she took alarge amount of loan
Thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Soo exciting!!
It's obvious that gauri has a dark past and shakti is aware of it.
Can't wait to know what happened with gauri
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Omkara wants to know her past
Guess there is something disturbing in her past

Waiting to read
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update dear..
Gauri has a painfull past and related Kaali...

Om is dying to know the truth but no one is willing to reveal...

Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
#58
Intriguing
I really want to know what happened in her past
Why did she not respond to Om after he tried coaxing her out with intimacy

I have a guess let's see if i am right
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Just read the last two parts...
Can't wait to know about Gauri's past...seems something very big and disturbing happened with her
Continue Soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I am sorry guys for keeping you all waiting but I can't help it... Firstly I don't like typing and secondly... I lost almost all my backup due to my laptop's memory loss... But then I am here to present you the next part. Enjoy...

CHAPTER SIX

It's a week now tossing on the bed from one side to the other has become her daily routine. Sleep was far away from her eyes now. Even when she tried to that devil haunted her dreams to his best. She remembers everything... She still remembers everything about that monster. She still remembers about her life's worst days and that she can never erase them out. She has almost nothing left to give anyone anything.

But then there was he, the only man she found comfort with. The only man she would have loved to share her life with, but her life and her fate would never allow this. He has to back off anyhow. She can't get his life destroyed just because she loves him. She is a curse to anyone's life. She can't let this curse fall on him and destroy his life. "I didn't wanted to do this Om, but I have to she cried

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"Achooo... Achooo... she was still sneezing. "Why don't you listen to anyone, idiot Parth shouted. "Little boy, I think I am much older than you to be called an idiot by you she said angrily. "Woah... look who is talking... My I ask you Miss Gauri Kumari Sharma that when the hell did you turned 90 he faked anger. "Ohooo... at least try to lie properly... you are 11 now Parth she smiled.

"Stop smiling, will you? he said angrily. "Awww... Look the great Parth Thakur is angry she tried to make him laugh. "I told you not to call me Parth Thakur. I told you I hate that name he was serious. "Okay, Okay I know and I am sorry... now leave for your classes otherwise your teacher will shout on me the next day she ordered. "Hahahaha... I want that... I love when you get scolded. That is why I love your boss... because he scolds you he laughed and she blushed.

"Maasi... Maasi, will you actually listen to me he shouted. "Oh, I am sorry I was zoned out she said shyly. "Ahaaan, nowadays you often get zoned out... Is my dear Omkara the reason? he teased her. "You are... ughhh!!!! Now cut the call and go she shouted. "Maasi... come on you can't scare me he again teased. "Parth, go... Love you little boy she said smiling. "Love you too, maasi he answered.

She still cannot forget the day when Parth was given in her arms by Jhanvi... She was really not sure that after whatever happened to her will she ever be able to live her life or not. Saying that an incident would be an understatement... It was like a hell. She tried to run away and stopped where there was no way out.

The cliff was waiting for her on one side and he was coming to her from the other. "Meri pyaari chiraiiya ab kahaan jaegi he said in a rythem. She only moved her head in a NO. Words already went long away from her. She was not able to utter any word. And then everything went out of display.

She woke up in the hospital; beside her were Shakti and the doctor. "Girl, you seem to be very lucky. You fall from a cliff but still you were saved. I have to tell you that you have a very good fate he complimented. "Fate and me have no relation doctor she chucked humourlessly. "Anyways, Mr Oberoi, these are the medicines and you need to rest girl he said and left.

"Mumma... Mumma please don't go she heard a boy crying. "Beta don't worry, I will always be there with you Jahnvi said in an almost lost voice. "Mumma don't go he cried again. "Gauri... you are here she tried to get up. "No, ma'am please sleep.. you need rest she said.

Suddenly she started gasping for hair "Mrs. Thakur... ma'am!!! Doctor!!! Doctor!! she started shouting. "Gauri... Please take care of Parth. Parth don't disturb your maasi Jhanvi said while gasping. And there was a beep sound "Mummaaa!!! he shouted. "Sorry ma'am we could not save her the doctors replied and left.

Since then he is with her. She herself was destroyed but that child needed her more than anything. She had a responsibility; she had to take care of the child. But then she realised that it was not her who took him out of the darkness but she was the one who came out. This little fellow brought her back out of the hell and gave her the reason to live.

"My Goodness, I am late she hurried herself towards Omkara's room. "Om, I think we should she lifted her eyes and...

She saw what she should not have seen. She saw him kissing a girl, obviously more beautiful than her. She was shocked and even froze for a moment. "Gauri... I... he tried to explain. "I am sorry sir, I should have knocked before entering saying this she rushed towards her room.

Why are you feeling bad? Did he say that he loves you? No. Did he say that he even feels for you? No. Then why are you thinking too much, you always knew this was one-sided. But it hurts, yes it does... This hurts even more than anything. Gauri, stop this... you have to control yourself... you have to be strong... be strong for Parth... you need to be.

Suddenly her phone rang "Yes, liitle boy... she said wiping her tears. "Hello... Who's this? the caller asked. "Who are you? Where is parth? she asked. "Actually we found a boy on a road who met with an accident. We have managed to bring him to the hospital but he is bleeding continuously. I saw the last dialled number as yours so I called you the caller informed.

She froze for a moment... P...Parth how could this... but I just talked

"Hello... Hello is anyone there? the voice said. "Yes, where is he? she asked. "In the city hospital he answered. "Please take care of him... I will come as fast as I can she said controlling her tears.

God!!! Why me? everytime why me??? What have I done??? Please save him...

Just then she finally heard the knock and she opened "Sir, I think we both should rest. We have an early morning flight to catch she said holding her tears back. "But Gauri listen to me. I want to tell you. "Sir, I am no one to get your explainations she closed the door behind her.

Why her??? Why can't she love anyone??? Every one she loved has to pay the prize for loving her. No, she can't let this happen now. She just can't risk ant other life just because she loves him. She has no right to snatch his happiness.

She stayed silent, trying not to react to anything at least till she reached to the hospital. "Doctor, how is Parth? she asked. "He is in coma, and needs to be treated he answered. "Then what are you waiting for? she shouted in frustration. "Ma'am I don't think you know the rules. You need to deposit 5 lacks for his treatment first he answered again. "I will deposit it as soon as possible, please start the treatment she pleaded. "Okay he said and went away.

Where to get this huge amount from??? But I need this for him...

"Hello Shakti sir, I need 5 lacks she said. "Sure, but may I know why? he asked. "Sir... p...parth it was now very hard to hold the tears back. "What happened to him? he asked. She told him everything about his accident and his state.

"Sir, please don't tell O... sir about anything she requested. Shakti knew why but he decided to agree "Okay and hang the call.

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"No, I can't let my bad fate harm him. I cannot let Omkara suffer she cried resting her head on her knees. Just then there was a knock on the door.

"Who's that? she asked sobbing. The door still kept slamming. She stood up and opened the door.

"You she said.

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