Rikara FS - Agar Tum Mil Jao | COMPLETED | Index added on PG 1 | - Page 17

Originally posted by: sree10

It was beautiful. Please write an epilogue. And keep writing. For a person trying her hand on writing for the first time i t was super.

So best of luck!!

Thank you so much...
I've already written the epilogue..will post it soon...

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Tasniiim you did a Splendid job with the ending👏👏❤️

I LOVED IT

How Om finally realized that Gauri was the one. He is not perfect but he wants her in his life.

My favorite part was that:

He looked into her eyes and said, "I know I'm flawed..I know I'm not perfect..maybe I'm not the person you dreamt of marrying..but I want you to give me a chance..I want you in my life, Gauri..I want to start everything afresh with you...I don't know whether I love you or not, I just know that I need you..I need you to heal me..to teach me to love again..to make me fall for you..please give me a chance..give us a chance..."

I was almost crying😭👏So sweet how he asked her for a second chance, how to teach him to love , to heal. He knows he has a long way to go before he loves her and that he will do everything he can to be worthy of her love.

<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif" size="2">He realized that no one could love him as selflessly andunconditionally as Gauri does</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif" size="2">and meeting Riddhima opened his eyes! He finally saw how wrong he was in loving her, pinning away her</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif" size="2">AMAZING</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif" size="2">pls do update the epilogue soon😳</font>

Amel... 😳
I'm so so so happy that you liked the ending...
Even I think Omkara has long way to go before falling head over heels in love with Gauri..that's why I didn't use the word love to justify his feelings for Gauri..his words were simple, but came straight from his heart...maybe that's why you're touched by those simple words..
Omkara finally understood that Gauri will always be in his side supporting him..meeting Riddhima again opened his eyes and pushed him more towards Gauri..
I'll post the epilogue soon..tried to add some romance there...hopefully you'll like it...

Originally posted by: rikara94

Hey tasnim🤗

I'm Visit here after long time

And glad you write something on our favourite couple

Read all parts in one go

All parts are amazing and well written behna

Loved ri's character here ..totally bindaass

Confession part was amazing

Waiting for more stuff of yours and afcourse waiting for the epilogue😛 plz update asap

Hey Jyoti..
It's been a long time you visited the forum..glad to see you back... 😃
Yes, I tried to write something on our Rikara for the very first time..and I'm so happy that you liked it..
Thank you so much for the appreciation, doll...
Confession part gave me a hard time tbh.. 😆
Will post the epilogue soon..

Finally Omkara confessed his feelings ❤️
Loved it

Originally posted by: devildiva21

Finally Omkara confessed his feelings ❤️
Loved it

Thank you..
I'm glad you like it... 😳

Epilogue


He pulled her grabbing her wrist and pinned her to the wall..before she could mouth her question he grabbed her hair and pulled them free from the bun...

"Open hair suits you more..", Omkara whispered in her ears and brushed his lips against her earlobe..Gauri bit her lower lips feeling his hot breath on her neck and she hovered over him crushing her lips onto his..Omkara groaned as her tongue slipped inside his mouth...

Soon his hand found the zip of her dress and pulled it down, while his other hand pulled her closer grabbing her by hairs, deepening the kiss..he slipped the sleeves from her shoulders and pulled the dress down leaving her exposed up to waist...he tilted his head a little and took her hardened peak in his mouth.."Omk..a..raa..!!", she managed to say feeling his other hand cupping the other mound of her...his mouth replaced his hand and he started assaulting the other one by sucking and nibbing it...she could feel the wetness between her thighs and she grabbed a handful of his hair in her fist..

Omkara pulled away from her breasts and looked into her eyes..he could see her eyes darkening with desire..

"Behave, Mrs.Oberoi..", he said and kissed her eyelids, nose, cheeks and slowly moved down from her jaw to her collarbone..he nuzzled there and she giggled...he nipped at her shoulder leaving a mark there...Gauri arched back to give him more access...he trailed her shoulder and neck with open mouth kisses...a moan escaped her throat and she tugged the waistband of his pants..feeling the desperation of his little wife he pulled away.."Seems like the pregnancy hormones are showing it's effects..someone is being impatient..", Omkara chuckled to see the frustration in her face..he held her face and gently pecked on her lips.."Relax, Gauri...I'm not running anywhere..we can continue this once we're back from the party..", he said and she pouted...

Omkara was already having a hard time controlling himself and his little wife was making it more tough for him..he adjusted her dress and brushed her hair with his fingers and whispered, "Tonight, I'm all yours, love...have some patience.."Gauri grinned mischievously planning something in her mind for the night..

When they descended from stairs hand in hand, everyone present at the party couldn't but stare them..Tej Singh Oberoi was the happiest of all...his son recently launched his art gallery in Germany and his daughter in law, who is more like his own daughter now, joined business a few months back..and the news that made him most ecstatic was that he's going to be a grandpa soon..he went to them and hugged Omkara...things between the father son duo became much more lighter and easy going since Gauri came to the house...

Tej broke the hug..he looked at Gauri..kept his hand on her head and blessed her..she smiled in return..he held both Gauri and Omkara's hand and dragged them where reporters were standing...a few clicks and the reporters started with their questions..Tej was happily answering them..Omkara couldn't but smile at his father who was behaving like a kid while talking about how his son, Omkara got an award from the art university of London and his favorite daughter in law, Gauri cracked one of the most biggest deals of the year for Oberoi Industry...Tej Singh Oberoi was a proud father now..

As the music started Omkara pulled Gauri for a dance...he swirled her and she landed on his chest..they moved back and forth..he twirled her around and her back pressed against his chest..his finger draw various patterns on her upper arm while his breath fanned her neck..he turned her..she smirked seeing her affect on him and roamed her hand seductively on his chest sightly brushing his nipple..he groaned and she whispered, "Who's being impatient now..??"

"What can I do if my little chiraiyya look so ravishing in red..", he grinned...

Gauri smiled thinking about the day when they went to Daniyal's party wearing a red dress and he didn't even compliment her...her man has learnt a lot in these two years...the thought made her blush a little...Omkara pressed her body more into his...their body moved in a familiar rhythm with the music, while their eyes never left each other..


Riddhima witnessed everything standing in a corner...she never saw the shine in Omkara's eyes when they were together..she never knew he could smile without any reason and behave like a kid for someone's attention..he looked happy and so much in love...she cursed herself for letting him go..


Omkara searched for his wife as the guest started leaving..it's been an hour since he spotted her talking with Anika..and now she's nowhere to be seen...he went back to his room only to find it decorated with scented candles amd flower petals..he was amazed to see the arrangements...

Gauri came out of the washroom wearing a black lingerie..his throat dried up to see her standing before him looking like a goddess...all he wanted to do is to push her on the bed and love her like there was no tomorrow..but he needed to be more gentle with her when he knows that his firecracker was carrying a little life in her womb...

"I thought to make the night as memorable as our wedding night..", Gauri winked..

Omkara couldn't take it anymore..he threw his blazer on the couch and carried her to the bed in his arms...

"The night is going to be another memorable one" Omkara thought as he placed her on the bed..




Finally it's done...yaaayy..!!

A heartiest thanks to everyone for encouraging me to continue the story..believe me I could never finish it without your support..

Let me know if you like it..

And Amel darling, this happily ever after is dedicated to you..I hope you'll like it... 😳

Perfect epilogue

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

Perfect epilogue

They are happily married and expecting chota baby

Very lovely

Waiting for next story now

Thank you so much for your constant support from the starting..
I'm glad you find the ending perfect...
Will surely try to write if I get some idea..

Oh I just loved it 😳...So passionate oh my ☺️...

Originally posted by: AMIEO

Oh I just loved it😳...So passionate oh my☺️...

Thank you Vivi..
😳