RiKara SS ~ Silent Tears (Completed 3/1/18) [CHECK PG 87 similar OS] - Page 5

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

I am sorry for making you cry... writing this made me emotional as well

Gauri's character is unappreciated by the family and I feel bad about it

I will try to write a part or two more

Originally posted by: reenzreenz

Like always love you Rudy.

Riii😭

Originally posted by: Savinaa

Loved this. And please do continue it.

I need Om to realise how he's been ignoring her. I need the rest of the family to understand the sacrifices Gauri has done. I need them to know she deserves the rightful credit for whatever she has done for them.

And if it means that Gauri has to even have a near death experience, so be it (a wish of mine to see Gauri having an NDE and Omkara's fears on losing her) I need Omkara to break down. Please Liz, you're a ray of hope. Nothing's ever given on the show. Please make Omkara regret all these times he's not been there for her. Or atleast make Om hear Gauri speak out about how she feels lonely and left out, as to how she misses bareilly and her carefree days.

Ofcourse, like i say, the writer knows best. Give this story your charm, but please do continue...

Thanks for the PM. Waiting for the next chapter. If an SS is too much, atleast make it a Two or a Three Shot story.

I am crying over this Gauri... My RI...

Plz continue dear... Even I don't want a long ff... But a twoshorts or three...


Ps: Commenting after a long time in forum

Originally posted by: Roopa_1

Awesome one ... You made me cry today ...eveeytime i watch ib i only feel sad for gouri... No one appreciates her efforts ... Omkara is in his own grief and he forgot his own wife ... He stopoed noticing everything abt gouri... Gouri became punching bag between janvi and om Why does he always blame gouri ? Rudy is bacha .. Seriously yaar mujhe ithnagussa aaya ki ff mein guskar om ki class lelu mein .. Uff and he forget abt his own wife while taking family pic.. This is limit now .. And the last scene abt babies .. Seriously ? He is thinking abt that now ?? I just loved gouris answer .. Om was shocked .. He always took gouri for granted .. Plzz continue this one yaar ..

Originally posted by: reenzreenz

Do continue this.. It's damn good. But really selfless women like gauri still exist in our world. It's hard to be like them. Love others, without any expectations from them.

I've no words to describe how beautiful it is...this is one of your best works for sure..and one of my favs...
You penned down Gauri's emotion perfectly..she did everything a daughter in law and a wife should do..but at the end of the day she wasn't even acknowledged as a member of the family, let alone as the daughter in law...I felt so bad for her..Omkara was too blinded with his sorrows and happiness that he couldn't see the pain of his wife..she wanted to be happy..but a part in her couldn't be...just because she never uttered a word doesn't mean she wasn't hurt..everyone took her for granted..
I'd love to read the continuation of it...

My poor Gauri 😭 always being taken for granted.

Originally posted by: Anokhisharma

Riii😭

It was soo sad 😭 ri is doing all that she can nd is not getting any recognition

Rudy is a gem, he remembers his chulbul bhabhi 😳

U made me hate om 😒

Please write more!!!

Nd can I give u a small request regarding Dis story??