RiKara SS -Break Ke Baad- Part 6-Page 34. (24-12)

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Hello guys. It's me again. Thank you for the love you gave me on my first SS Tangled. Now here comes another one. Hope you like it. Let me know your thoughts, good and bad!


Prologue

'Gauri ye kuch sareeyan hai, inme se jo tujhe pasand hai, woh rakh le aur shaadi ke functions main yeh hi pehen na,' (Gauri here are some sarees. Keep whichever ones you like and wear these for the wedding functions) Kalyani Devi lovingly ran her hand over Gauri's head. Gauri hesitated. 'Bohot sundar hai Dadi, par ye hum kaise rakh le?' (They are very pretty but how can I keep them?) 'Dadi bhi kehti ho aur meri baat bhi nahi maanti ho' (You call me Dadi and you don't listen to me) Dadi pouted. 'Sarry Dadi,' Gauri said, holding her ears. 'Ye hui na baat,' (Now that's the spirit) Dadi smiled and kissed Gauri's forehead. 'Hum abhi baujaai ko dikha kar aate hai,' (I will show these to Anika) Gauri sprang to her feet and made her way towards Anika's room.

Om who had witnessed this entire scene, waited for Gauri to leave before he approached Dadi. 'Dadi aap Gauri ke doosri shaadi kaise kara sakti hai?' (Dadi how can you agree for Gauri's remarriage?)


Part One: Page 4

Part Two Teaser: Page 9

Part Two A/B: Page 10

Part Three Teaser: Page 15

Part Three: Page 17

Part Four Teaser: Page 23

Part Four: Page 24

Part Five: Page 27

Part Six: Page 34

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AfrinHrid thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting prologue
So much excited for the update
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Really eager to see what the story is about.
So far we know that Gauri will be remarried? But is Om her Husband? Why is dadi agreeing?
Will Gauri go through with it?
So many questions pls update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I just can't wait for this..let's see what's written in their fate after the break...update soonish..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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The last dialogue of Om has me hooked to this.
Interesting plot.
Waiting for the updates
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Posted: 7 years ago
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As I said already it's beautiful
Waiting to see jealous om
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Posted: 7 years ago
#7
Loved the start continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Great prologue!!! Do continue soon😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting start. So is om Gauri s first husband
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very interesting., please update soon
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