RiKara FF - HUMSAFAR - EPISODE FIVE UPDATED Pg 22 - Page 6

Pooru so many updates, my head is spinning😆 - will slowly work my way through and leave my responses. You make me feel so guilty about my own lack of updates😆.

awesome update loved it so much.

As I told I'm already in love with the girl's bonding...I loved how innocently Ri questioned Mallika..aur Anika ka woh Coffee Kumari wali baat..God..!! Yaad karke bhi meri hasi bandh nehi hoti..aisi baatein kaise likh leti ho behna...the name Ideas ki dukaan is perfect for you..bechara Siddharth apni biwi ki mohabbat aab coffee ke saath bantega..
Jhanvi is mom goal..she has been a good mother..aab toh achhi dost bhi ban gayi hain sabki..their kitchen moment was just aaww..Somu being the youngest was noting down the recipe..yeh log saath hain toh baat hain..
"Badi der kardi huzoor aate aate" this one's for Gauri's mom..aisi maa show mein hoti toh kya baat thi..der se hi sahi but koyi toh unhe bitiya jaap ko chhod kisi aur kam diya..thankooo for writing her character in a better way..she's thousands time better in your writing actually..apni beti ke future ka toh khayal hain..but seems like she believes in Gauri's marriage..jo bhi ho I'm glad that Gauri is enough strong to deny her marriage..naa jan naa pehchaan main teri dulhan..huh..!! My dabang chiraiyya is rocking..aab bass Kara ko aane do..
Aur aap mohotarma, jaldi jaldi update kijiye..mera toh dil nehi lagta..chain nehi milta without your updates.. 😭

Nice story

Superb update
I like the confidence in Gauri. Whatever life threw st her she accepted it and moved on.
Eagerly waiting to read next chapter

I'm loving this story, specially the girls' bonding and Gauri's strong character. You've written this so well while keeping the essence of characters specially Anika and Mallika's. I loved their dialogues. Waiting eagerly for the next update!

It was fantastic

It was fantastic

I Just love the chemistry of all the girls

Lovely dear.

Still cant get over the fact that the 4+1 are living under the same roof!
Very soon the roof will come down I believe with these amazing personalities.
😆

Cant wait for them to share, care, declare !
They are all so different, yet so similar in their quest for life.

And this story has so much potential for future love stories.
Keep going.
Cant wait for next update 👏