RiKara FF - HUMSAFAR - EPISODE FIVE UPDATED Pg 22 - Page 7

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Posted: 7 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: lovesick23

You are on a roll today. Honestly the idea of all of them living together is more appealing to me than Rikara in this ff 😆

Me too 😆 RiKara se pehle I got the idea of putting these four together ... Aage aage dekho hota hai kya ...
PS - Bachna ae haseeno Rudy aa gaya ... Husn ka aashiq, Husn ka dushman ... Uski adaa hai sabse juda he ho! 🤣 ... That's for episode three
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: kashishsr

Pooru so many updates, my head is spinning😆 - will slowly work my way through and leave my responses. You make me feel so guilty about my own lack of updates😆.

Reserved for now😉

You don't have to feel guilty kash ... Its just that I have to continue and complete many stories ... So have to work it out.
Comment soon. 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-

awesome update loved it so much.

Thank you 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

As I told I'm already in love with the girl's bonding...I loved how innocently Ri questioned Mallika..aur Anika ka woh Coffee Kumari wali baat..God..!! Yaad karke bhi meri hasi bandh nehi hoti..aisi baatein kaise likh leti ho behna...the name Ideas ki dukaan is perfect for you..bechara Siddharth apni biwi ki mohabbat aab coffee ke saath bantega..

Coffee Kumari is my favorite after Kurkure 🤣 ... Anika is totally faraattedaar here ... I am loving it ...
The girls are different yet similar here. Mallika is settled and happily married, a working professional.
Anika also working is a professional of her own kind. She does not have any degrees to tell her qualification but she is very experienced.
Gauri is the girl from Bareilly who has dared to dream big. She wants to study and so she has come to Mumbai.
Just passed out from school ... Saumya has left her home and family to make a life of her own ... She wants to be a career person.
The commonality here is that all the girls are equally ambitious.

Jhanvi is mom goal..she has been a good mother..aab toh achhi dost bhi ban gayi hain sabki..their kitchen moment was just aaww..Somu being the youngest was noting down the recipe..yeh log saath hain toh baat hain..

Jahnvi is love She is a good woman who knows the worldly ways. A person who was a mother of three is now a mother of seven ... Mallika is a family friend, Anika knows her proffesionally ... Saumya came as a paying guest and Gauri toh bahu hai uski!

"Badi der kardi huzoor aate aate" this one's for Gauri's mom..aisi maa show mein hoti toh kya baat thi..der se hi sahi but koyi toh unhe bitiya jaap ko chhod kisi aur kam diya..thankooo for writing her character in a better way..she's thousands time better in your writing actually..apni beti ke future ka toh khayal hain..but seems like she believes in Gauri's marriage..

Remember how we used to discuss Gauri ki maa in the AT 🤣
I prefer writing her as if she is a normal maa ... Yes, there is a lot which has happened in Bareilly but then also she sent Gauri to Mumbai. Woh chahti hai Gauri apne pairon pe khadi ho jaaye.

jo bhi ho I'm glad that Gauri is enough strong to deny her marriage..naa jan naa pehchaan main teri dulhan..huh..!! My dabang chiraiyya is rocking..aab bass Kara ko aane do..

Exactly ... She does not want a marriage of namesake and a whimsical husband. Yes, he saved her but major than that was how he character certified her ... Abhi bhi aaega aur Nandi bail ki tarah seeng maarne ki koshish karega. 😆

Aur aap mohotarma, jaldi jaldi update kijiye..mera toh dil nehi lagta..chain nehi milta without your updates.. 😭

Awwwe my baby ... Don't worry me will update this then the baby book and The three shot KASHISH 😳

Edited by _PrincessPooru_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update pooru can't wait to read further n thanks a ton for the pm too
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Posted: 7 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Superb update
I like the confidence in Gauri. Whatever life threw st her she accepted it and moved on.
Eagerly waiting to read next chapter

Thank you
Gauri is trying to move on and make her own life.
But let's see what her Shankarji has in store for her.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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These girl gang is bringing back my old hostel memories. Hope Gauri and somu enjoy their college life. Waiting for kara
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Naina280599

I'm loving this story, specially the girls' bonding and Gauri's strong character. You've written this so well while keeping the essence of characters specially Anika and Mallika's. I loved their dialogues. Waiting eagerly for the next update!

I really enjoyed writing Mallika and Anika, I am really fond of them. These two are the mature and experienced amongst the two and Gauri is going to get stronger in near future.
Will update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid

It was fantastic

gauri wants to become independent and educated.loved the girl gang
Continue soon

Thank you so much
Gauri wants to be and she will be educated and independent.
Even I am in love with the girls.

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