ShivKara OS - [[Stumbling Relations]]

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An old scribbling that I found, thought of shaping of a little and posting, but don't know what I did there. 😛

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He stumbled on a pebble, maintaining his balance he looked up to see where his feet had brought him. It was a Dargah. He smiled just what he needed. He walked through the entrance to the lawn that had been decorated with small flags of various colors. He removed his footwear aside and tied the cloth to his head pushing back his long hair. He walked inside, trying hard to flush the harsh memories out of his head, to no help.


Kaarigar kismat ke ye bigdi bana de tu
Itne sajdo ki hai keemat ye bata de tu
Purza purza zindagi ka dekh bigda hai
Kis jagah, main sar jhukaaun?
Dar dikhade tu...

"Om it's about our family! " he said in a loud voice his eyes green glaring in anger.

"Galat hai Shivaay, Galat Galat hota phir chaaye baat family ki ho yaan kissi aur ki!" he spat back in anger with an equally loud voice his deep brown eyes reflecting his anger.

"What if it was me instead of your father?" he asked in a cold voice.

Om glanced up at his brother who looked away staring at the family portrait that hung majestically on the mansion's wall.

Om walked up to him and placed his hand on Shivaay's shoulder turning him to face him. "It can never be you! "



That was one day and today was another. He had walked into his home after a week. He was back from germany. Only to find his mother and wife being mercilessly ordered by Shwetlana to do her work. Angry? Hell he was a raging fire. He stormed into the house.

"How dare you?" He shouted.

"Aawaaz neeche Omkara!" Shwetlana smiled.

He looked around. "Where is everybody? Where is my family?" He roared.

"Aawaz Neeche ! " Shwetlana screamed back. While Jaanvi and Gauri stood holding each others hand with moist eyes and thudding hearts.

Gauri-"Chodiye naa Omkara Jii!"

Omkara looked at her dumbfounded. Turning back to Shwetlana, "Get out now!" He said dragging her to the door.

Shwetlana-"Ahaan! Mere hi Garh Se mujhe bhaar nikaloge?"

Om-"What nonsense! Shut up!"

Shwetlana-"You shut up Omkara Singh Oberoi! Yakeen nahi hota toh apne Bhai Se poochlo jisne khud mujhe is garh ki rights bechi hain!"


Om-"Enough. Not a word more. Get out or I call the police!"

Shivaay came down the stairs.Stumbling on the last one, as he saw his brother in terrible rage. This was what he had been scared of.

"Let her be Om. She is right!" He spoke gaining his composure.


He din't have the courage to even meet his brother's eyes. He had broken the two promises he had made, to him hours before he had left.
First to take care of his wife second to take care of his mother in absence. He had failed to both. He had fallen trap to Shwetlana once again. But it was time he paid for his fault. His plan hadn't worked but Gauri and Jaanvi were the ones to suffer. Needless to say Shwetlana always wanted to do this.

Om-"Shivaay?"

Shivaay-"She holds rights to half the property! "

Om-"How is it possible!? I m pretty sure its all false!"

Shivaay-"Its the truth!"

Om-"But, How...?"

Shivaay-"I m sorry it's because..


"Because Shivaay can't compromise on his name and shares!" Echoed Tej's voice. "And now we have to be at the mercy of this woman to live as Oberois!"

"Om I agree its my fault but I can... I can explain!" Said Shivaay extending his hand to touch his brother's shoulder.

Om stepped back and left the place in hurried steps. He couldn't breathte, in the room anymore.



He knelt down at the Dargha's floor. He needed a way to go. For all that was before him was darkness. His weakness had been targeted and his strength had failed him!

Maathe pe har ek bigdi baat likhdi hai
Yeh duaa bhi arziyon ke saath likhdi hhai

Meri keemat kya lage sab teri marzi hai
Subah maathe tu zara sa noor bas mal de
Toh savar jaaye ye kismat itni arzi hai...


Somewhere away in a certain mansion, a man and a woman made their way out. Leaving the property on the name of a man who perhaps rightly deserved it as the heir of the Oberoi Empire.



P.S
Hope this small random piece was liked😳
Do let me know through comments of it was😊

Edit:-
Sorry that last para had not been pasted.😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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always a delight to read on obros
lovely piece <3
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: itzMYattitude

always a delight to read on obros

lovely piece <3


Thanks!😳
Its always delightful to write on them! ⭐️

And at times heart wrenching as well💔
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Blink_Cat

amazing shot annika.!


Thank you Himanshi!😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Anni🤗
This was just so amazing, I always love reading Obros Shots! they are bliss to read❤️
do write more.

-Anya.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very good take on track
awesome
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Posted: 7 years ago
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it's awesome Anniii...
its time for vanvass... the Most waited track is here
its emotional to see them like this
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: elysianights

Anni🤗
This was just so amazing, I always love reading Obros Shots! they are bliss to read❤️
do write more.

-Anya.


So good to see you after so long Anya🤗
Thank You😳
Yeah if time permits😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: annikaa


So good to see you after so long Anya🤗
Thank You😳
Yeah if time permits😆


Was a little away from this Forum 😆😆
Had given up on Ishqbaaaz but ghar ka khota ghar ko lauta wala baat hogaya mere saath, and I'm here once again 😛😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: elysianights


Was a little away from this Forum 😆😆
Had given up on Ishqbaaaz but ghar ka khota ghar ko lauta wala baat hogaya mere saath, and I'm here once again 😛😛


😆
Acha ji so with Tia Sumo , We Also have Anya back!😆
Welcome Back Ji...Welcome Back...Lautne Ka Season Chal Raha Hai!😆
Sahi time pe entry maari hai😆🤪

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