Rikara Closure:OS series- OS 6 part 1 updated Pg 14-05/12/2017 - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you! :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
Daaamn that Broke my Heart :(
Whyyy did he have to leave her there
Both are hurting and in Pain but Their Love is strong enough to endure the separation ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: kashishsr

This is completely heartbreaking😭.

First I'll give you an un-biased opinion, then you can have my biased RiKarian opinion if you want it.😉

Omkara acting this way would bring in the kind of angst that TRP viewers thrive on, so you basically wrote a cure to the ailment the CVs have of not knowing where to take a track. Well done👏.

Also this fits in with the extent of the kind of role CVs would allow for RiKara to have in the vanvaas track - collateral damage. Shrenu and Kunal are AMAZING at angst so I think they would do this OS real justice onscreen. With how little RiKara we get onscreen, a separation would be best as at least it would give a reason to the lack of RiKara scenes, instead of them living like strangers in the same house and room.

Thanks for this great piece of writing.😊 Let me know if you want to hear what my bleeding RiKara heart felt about it...


Thank you!😃

Oh I definitely want to know what a bleeding Rikara heart felt about it😉.


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Posted: 7 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: smitar

If Om returns from Germany to the news of his bro's vanvas, he is going to freak out just as he did in your story. Awesome!

Thank you! :D
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Daaamn that Broke my Heart :(
Whyyy did he have to leave her there
Both are hurting and in Pain but Their Love is strong enough to endure the separation ❤️


Author takes no responsibility for broken hearts😉

Hurt.Pain. Words so much better than 'Comic Relief'.😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: ironwitch


Thank you!😃

Oh I definitely want to know what a bleeding Rikara heart felt about it😉.


Okay, seeing as you wanted to know😆...

Why Omkara? Why?! When will the day come when you prioritise your wife? I know she is DabanggRi, but surely you should take her with you. By punishing his mother, why is he punishing Gauri - has she not suffered enough? I know you're continuing this, so can you please make him realise that in the future no matter what he cannot leave her hand - preferably through a NDE. on the show that experience is restricted for a certain person (and if pushed for 2 certain persons) and villains, but can we get one for Gauri here? I guess I still haven't forgiven Omkara fully for not being the one to find her - oh CVs why do you torture me so? I think his leaving her here might make him a good brother and her acceptance of it shows what a good wife she is - but is his action that of a good husband... a true ishqbaaz?

As you can see my RiKara heart sometimes overwhelms my brain and I now have a few screws lose😆. Great job on this though, it got to me.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashishsr


Okay, seeing as you wanted to know😆...

Why Omkara? Why?! When will the day come when you prioritise your wife? I know she is DabanggRi, but surely you should take her with you. By punishing his mother, why is he punishing Gauri - has she not suffered enough? I know you're continuing this, so can you please make him realise that in the future no matter what he cannot leave her hand - preferably through a NDE. on the show that experience is restricted for a certain person (and if pushed for 2 certain persons) and villains, but can we get one for Gauri here? I guess I still haven't forgiven Omkara fully for not being the one to find her - oh CVs why do you torture me so? I think his leaving her here might make him a good brother and her acceptance of it shows what a good wife she is - but is his action that of a good husband... a true ishqbaaz?

As you can see my RiKara heart sometimes overwhelms my brain and I now have a few screws lose😆. Great job on this though, it got to me.😊


I AGREE.
Not sure about the NDE but at the end he is definitely going to realize that GKS is the one true constant in his life. Also I am planning to get them out of OM at the end. Yes I am a homewrecker😆

As for right now I think it's more of a sense of justice than love for Shivaay that is motivating his current action.Although its ridiculous that he gets to make decisions affecting Gauri on his own without talking to her first. That kind of made me furious when I was typing the words.

I realise the last sentence might cast doubts on my sanity so let me assure you I am not insane, just a person suffering from Rikara withdrawal.😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: ironwitch


I AGREE.
Not sure about the NDE but at the end he is definitely going to realize that GKS is the one true constant in his life. Also I am planning to get them out of OM at the end. Yes I am a homewrecker😆

As for right now I think it's more of a sense of justice than love for Shivaay that is motivating his current action.Although its ridiculous that he gets to make decisions affecting Gauri on his own without talking to her first. That kind of made me furious when I was typing the words.

I realise the last sentence might cast doubts on my sanity so let me assure you I am not insane, just a person suffering from Rikara withdrawal.😉


PLEASE wreck this home😆! Use a wrecking ball if you want to😆.

We're all suffering from withdrawal I think, so I'm very glad for the lovely writers in the forum.

As for Omkara making decisions for her - that was never really his thing until the merger, it was the role of another character to force their POV on others, whereas Omkara always respected individuals.

I agree that Omkara stands for truth and justice, but had they gone about this track the right way, he would have left after discovering that the Oberois might have did such a huge kaand. Honestly i just need RiKara to go on an extended art sabbatical, end-up settling somewhere gorgeous and have a few beautiful kids.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashishsr

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I agree that Omkara stands for truth and justice, but had they gone about this track the right way, he would have left after discovering that the Oberois might have did such a huge kaand. Honestly i just need RiKara to go on an extended art sabbatical, end-up settling somewhere gorgeous and have a few beautiful kids.😊

@Bold- Don't we all😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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All 4 OS were awesome
But the vanvaas one caught me
Hit the right cords in my heart

Waiting eagerly for its part 2
Update soon

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