Rikara Closure:OS series- OS 6 part 1 updated Pg 14-05/12/2017

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Farri25

@Farri25

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Aawww...😳 ❤️ That was sweet... beautiful...😊

It took me 5 - 7 minutes I guess to read it... if enacted it wouldn't have takento more than 2 - 3 minutes I'm very sure...🥱

Ugghhh... I hate some people even more now... and I've been mentioning this while commenting on almost every OS/SS...😆

You people write everything that someone else should've been..🥱

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ironwitch

@ironwitch

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Farri25
Aawww...😳 ❤️ That was sweet... beautiful...😊
It took me 5 - 7 minutes I guess to read it... if enacted it wouldn't have takento more than 2 - 3 minutes I'm very sure...🥱

Ugghhh... I hate some people even more now... and I've been mentioning this while commenting on almost every OS/SS...😆
You people write everything that someone else should've been..🥱

It wouldn't have taken maybe more than one -1.5 min😭

WHY????Waaah!

Doesn't matter. In my head Rikara are currently honeymooning in Paris. So there, CVs!

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OoViVioO

@OoViVioO

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#53

im loving this sooo much!!!...why couldnt we get this😭...Too good! CAnt wait for the rest.

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ironwitch

@ironwitch

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: AMIEO
im loving this sooo much!!!...why couldnt we get this😭...Too good! CAnt wait for the rest.

Thank you 😃

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mitul

@123mitul

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#55

ahh! it is written beautifully!

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smitar

@smitar

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Enjoyed reading all 3 parts. You have tapped into the steel spine and strength of Gauri and Om's naughty streak (as I mentioned earlier). Waiting eagerly for the next one.

In an episode in DBO, Swet comes to Om's room and tries to flirt with him in Chulbul's presence, and Gauri recites a couple of lines of a poem about a snake and a chandan tree. She has a taste for poetry, which I hope the CVs haven't forgotten. It would be lovely if they incorporate this into future episodes, but I am not holding my breath cos I don't want to die!

About Ishana in the serial, she almost twisted herself into impossible shapes trying to interest Om, but he didn't fall for it. He was blind to her except as a charity case. Her Mala-Bela game was juvenile to say the least.

Waiting to see Gouri rocking the club and Om feeling the heat. And glad you wrote on that kitchen scene. The past shapes our present and you can't really understand today's Om without knowing about his drug addiction, suicide attempts and Riddhima.

The Piya dance. He Bhagwan! It took a lot to see it on screen. Now time for Om to see Gauri being carried by three men! (No, no, not giving hints.)

A lovely read. Thanks.

Edited by smitar - 7 years ago