Rikara SS- Mine to break, mine to heal *Dark* Chap5 pg26 UPDATED!!

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 7 years ago

#171

That was an amazing update loved it so much.

Poor om.

continue soon.

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Sayma Afrin Khan

@AfrinHrid

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Posted: 7 years ago

#172

Wonderful update

Feeling bad for Omkara after reading his painful childhood.

AniRi has a lovely bond..I loved them.

Now gauri knows about omkara's past.. she should understand him and give a chance to him.

Waiting eagerly for next chapter

Continue soon!!!!

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NESRIA

@NESRIA

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Posted: 7 years ago

#173

That was an amazing update

i really loved this version of om

plzzz continue soon

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#174

And Rex as always you amaze me with each chapter

The AniRi part was sooo sweet you saw that Gauri just wants her Sister to be happy and to ensure that she would rather stay unhappy. Anika the big sister she is couldn't understand what caused her sister to act out of character- to do something like that.

AMAZING👏

Om's past is really sad :/ he felt like his own family was happier without him. He felt as if after his mother got married he lost her just like he lost his father.

Loved how Jhanvi asked Gauri to try to make this marriage work.

( I love this Om- a little bit crazy but deep down a little insecure boy who just wants to be loved.)

Soo quick question: Did Rudy cheat on Gauri or what where they talking about when Rudy said he made a mistake?

Loved their Showdown how Rudy challenged him that he would get Gauri back and how Om asked to see him try.

These two are truly brother's because when they love they love deeply and unconditionally.

Loved it

can#t wait for the next part.👏

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Ms.Lizzie

@Ms.Lizzie

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#175

Feel very sorry for om

Hope ri understands him and gives him a chance

I m still not able to decide if Rudy is good guy or a bad guy,... so gonna wait for more parts

Continue soon

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Aarathi krishnan

@Aarathi85

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Posted: 7 years ago

#176

Nice update...the most needed talk between two sisters were amazingly written...the trust between them is so strong...i hope znika will took gsuri's side...omkara's past was too sad for a young fatherless boy...jhanvy didn't do anything in his insecurities and fear and hope the also...so the two brothers are not in good terms ..last part was so emotional...

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Ziva01

@Ziva01

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Posted: 7 years ago

#177

Nice chapter ...it displays so much on Omkara past and as a result of circumtances he has his own world surrounded by darkness and meeting Ri was the much awaited light in his world.

Well Jhanvi can justify that she did everythg for Omkara but she fails as her son only wanted her mom love and her remarriage only bring a huge gap between them and also the brothers.

Kara's past is really very sad

Looking forwards to the update

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Rex

@StarLord_Owen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: Unisha123
I am sure jho hum soch rahi he yesa tho kabhi nahi ho shakta, Om can never do that. He may have many problem but will never play with woman's respect that too his love/wife. That's impossible. Is he hurting himself? I hope not. But gauri se hurt karne se jyaada chances kud ko hurt karne ke hai om ke let's see. I hope I am not wrong🤔

You are right, Om would never do that 😆
You are right at one thing, Om would never hurt Gauri for anything. He loves her too much for that ❤️

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Rex

@StarLord_Owen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: vrindagupta
Awesome update
Omkara married Gauri
Now Rudra must be shattered
Rudra and Gauri loved eachother
How will they accept this relationship

Nice teaser
I hope Omkara is not killing himself
Or someone else

Waiting eagerly to read more
Omkara's character is so interesting
Update soon

Thank you so much! ❤️
Rudra won't take it any better than Gauri..
And Omkara is definitely not killing himself 😆 he maybe be anything but suicidal.. :)
Killing someone else is a possibility though 😆
Next chapter is already up.. 😳

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Rex

@StarLord_Owen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: IAdoreYou

What's that?🤔

PS: You have done a great job with his past. The past had to be heartbreaking enough ( at least it is if I picturize a small kid) to justify his doings now. I myself have had many experiences, writing cruel pasts in fics,and tbh, I, personally get emotional while penning them down.

I have no hopes for Rikara in the show so I was Yeh Un Dino Ki Baat Hai as a replacement sometimes..
Omkara's back story was kinda inspired by male protagonist of that show :)
I am glad I was able to write the past part alright 😃
Though I admit it tha I suck at writing emotional dialogues and all (so I won't be surprised if that part is not written good enough to bring emotions out of a person)..that's why I avoid them as much as possible..It just don't come to me.. -_-
But thank you so much! ❤️