Rikara SS- Mine to break, mine to heal *Dark* Chap5 pg26 UPDATED!! - Page 16

Originally posted by: Farri25

😲

This is so unfair ! Even last time you left us with the same question !😭😆What is Om upto ?!😲

And he ended up marrying her...😃...

Let me tell you, I'm not in for a wedding night... not so soon... not this way...😭but I know that's not happening⭐️

I wonder wonder what he is up to now !😃😲

You what I liked the best about this comment? So many emoticons! 😆
There won't be any wedding night so soon so can chill.. 😆
You are right because Om would never ever touch Gauri with out her permission.. 😳

Is he hurting someone else? Yup that's a possibility.. 😆

Is he hurting himself? That's another possibility 😆

Thank you so much for leaving comments! ❤️
PS- one of your guesses might be right 😉

Could you let me know if this is a mature fic? as Dark fics are mostly mature as well.

Originally posted by: IAdoreYou

Could you let me know if this is a mature fic? as Dark fics are mostly mature as well.

- Harshada

Hey Harshada!
Well..the story is not rated 'mature' yet and I am afraid I have plans of rating it in future either :)

Originally posted by: ..LittleLiar..

Hey Harshada!
Well..the story is not rated 'mature' yet and I am afraid I have plans of rating it in future either :)

I think I can have a read then. 😆 I thought it was better to ask as I certainly cannot read mature stuff. Thank you.

Originally posted by: IAdoreYou

I think I can have a read then. 😆 I thought it was better to ask as I certainly cannot read mature stuff. Thank you.

And I can not write that stuff 😆 (nothing more than few cute kisses :P)
And it would make me really really happy if you give it a try 😃

Originally posted by: chils

I don't understand😭

Oh dear..don't worry the next update will make everything clear..:D
(LOL that rhymes 😛 )

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

What is he doing ????

Confused

Update soon

Next update will make everything crystal clear;)
I hope you'll like it:D

Originally posted by: amlavs

Omg...it's damn interesting teaser...

Plz update soon...

😃
I am glad that you liked it :D
Next update will be up pretty soon!

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid

I'm confused

What he is going to do??😳

It's sooo exciting!!Update soon

I'll try my best to surprise you 😆
Thank you so much! ❤️
Next update will be up soon :D

Originally posted by: ..LittleLiar..

And I can not write that stuff 😆 (nothing more than few cute kisses :P)
And it would make me really really happy if you give it a try 😃

Ha ha. I can so relate to you. I used to write and whatever stuff I have written so far, its contents go no far beyond forehead and cheek kisses, rarely a proper kiss too. 😆

I did read all the three parts and teaser just now and the story has written beautifully, undoubtedly. So I kinda like 'dark' stories provided they do not include 18+ stuff which I am not comfortable in reading but I have even read Dark+mature stories, of course by skipping the parts though. 😆

Your story reminded me of many things in some ways. By a forced marriage through sister related blackmailing, took me back to ArShi time. The thing I find surprising here is that Gauri really loves Rudra, doesn't she? I have come across such stories rarely. Uh I found in some comments about he being bipolar and all but I do not feel that he is one. He is layered character, isn't he? And layered characters have their own beauty because their journey tends to get one hell of the journey. His insecurities have been developed since childhood as from where I am seeing it and I can already think of the reasons, situations which strengthen what he feels today and somewhere, every Oberoi is responsible for that as they have straight failed to see that. Keep the updates coming.

Love
- Harshada