Rikara SS- Mine to break, mine to heal *Dark* Chap5 pg26 UPDATED!! - Page 15

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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update
Omkara married Gauri
Now Rudra must be shattered
Rudra and Gauri loved eachother
How will they accept this relationship

Nice teaser
I hope Omkara is not killing himself
Or someone else

Waiting eagerly to read more
Omkara's character is so interesting
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

I really loved the story

Om has problems with Oberois

That is interesting to know

He insecure and craves love

Feel sorry for him

Interested to read more


Thank you so much Lizzie! ❤️
Your words mean a lot!
Omkara surely have some issues with his family which might be the reason behind his attitude..
He is insecure and the feeling just intensifies when he is with Ri 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

I'm a little confused about Omkara's character tbh
I planned the story this way..because I want the confusion to dissolve when my readers would get to know more about Omkara's characters...I hope you'll find it interesting.the whole story is based on it :P

..but loving this Kara...all he want is Gauri's love and her undivided attention..so he craved for his family's attention here..?? That's interesting..can't wait for the mystery to get unfold..
Gauri is melting in his arms..but I really want her to make him realise that she isn't some property that he could claim as his..
Though Gauri cant deny that her heart and body reacts to him..she doesnt like him..infact dislike him..she wants to yell and scream at him but somehow he do something that she forgets her anger..she is still trying to understand him..because every thing he do is so unpredictable that she don't know what to think..BUT no matter what, Gauri would never Surender to him..

but after that I want her to love him unconditionally
thats bound to happen :D

...though we're still in darkness about his equation with his family, it seems like he never got the love a child wants from his family..that's what made him insecure...continue soonish..
Waise is Rudra a bad boy here..??[
Rudy is not a negative character..infact he is my second favourite character of the story 😆

Edited by ..LittleLiar.. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-

Loved the update so much.

I would love to read the layers of Omkara's character.
Continue soon.


Thank you so much love! 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: minamma

Confused kara

Well
A good one though


Thank you so much! 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Farri25

Ooh M lovin it !❤️😲

Rudy isn't a saint either you said... gives me hope... something big's up... and I know it's gonna be awesome😃
Oh wait, he whispered "Now you know how it feels Rudra ?"..😲
Am I seeing Rudy guilty of doing something similar ?!😲
This isn't the real him..?...😲😊... excited excited to see how this unfolds... thnx for the awesome update !😃


Some thing big is definitely up at the end of first part and it do concern Rudy 😆
Why Om said that has every thing to do with his and Ruby's past..it will be disclosed in the next chap..I hope you'll like it ❤️
Rudy boy guilty- Maybe or may be not..but one thing is for sure, Rudy is not a bad guy..no one to n the story is. I hate villains 🤢
And thank you sooo much! ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: amlavs

Omg... this omkara is sooo interesting...

So damn excited for next updates...
Ready to read it anytime..
Superb...


Thanks a million! ❤️
It's kinda hard writing this Omkara 😆
I have to think like him..but if you like him then it's all worth it 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: chils

I am silent reader, I don't know what to say but this update is grateful😃


Thank you so much for commenting! ❤️
You have no idea how happy it makes me feel! Each comment encourages me so much to write 😃
And I am glad that you liked it!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Rex you are back🤗I missed you dear, hopefully you will ace all your exams the next month.

LOVED LOveD LOVED it
I never thought you would let them get married in secret and then just announce it to the world
Nicely done- a smart move by Omkara to ensure that Gauri would actually marry him.

The families reactions were on point too but the one moment that broke me the most was definitely When Om broke down. When he fell on his knees apologizing to Gauri for blackmailing her, begging her to never hate him, to forgive him
And how broken he was because he thought he was incapable of being loved😭😭

Am I sadistic for loving the dark, twisted( possibly bipolar😆) Om?😳because I do!!
He is sooo sweet in his own ways- okay he shouldn't have blackmailed her etc but somehow I just can't hate him.

Poor Gauri even felt sorry for him and without realizing her fingers went through his hair.


LOVED it👏As always amazing work
can't wait for Anika's reaction
And what will Gauri's Family say???
What will happen next between her and Om?
Will she tell Rudra the truth?


Pls continue as soon as you can😳



Amel!! My favourite girrrlll!! ❤️
Thank you so much love! You words means so much to me! 😃
I am glad that you liked it!

The idea of getting them married just buzzed into my head..LOL! Phew..thank god it didn't prove to be stupid..I rewrote the whole announcement and family reaction part more than 4 times.. nerve wrecking it was..

Though broken Omkara was my favourite thing to write 😆
I tried to keep it as emotional as I can..:)
I made him apologise because I wanted to show that he didn't marry Gauri because he doesn't respect her or is too arrogant..I wanted to show how sorry he feels and is aware of his mistake..

And Omkara is sweet ❤️ *Fangirl moment*

I don't think you are sadistic...LOL because I like to read and write about this Omkara too..or maybe we both are sadistic 😆

No matter what Gauri can't deny the pull she feel with him.. 😳

Thank you sooo much again! I'll try to post next chap asap! :D
Edited by ..LittleLiar.. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: priyadil

Ohh! om and Gauri married

Gauri was in confusion and surprised with Om's changing behavior.

Seems that real Om was lost some where in his life.
Will Gauri be able to bring that real Om to the family
Will Gauri forgive him any time soon?

I will looking forward to see the emotional and behavioral changes of Om in upcoming chaps...
Eagerly waiting for the story to unfold

Pls update soon...



Real om did get lost somewhere in his life 😊
True..
And Gauri will have a major role in bringing him back 😳
whike forgiveness might not be a part of the story..redemption will be ;)
There will be many mood swing with Om n the upcoming chaps!
Next part will be up soon..
Thank you so much! ❤️

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