Rikara SS- Mine to break, mine to heal *Dark* Chap5 pg26 UPDATED!!

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Farri25

@Farri25

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#121

Ooh M lovin it ! ❤️ 😲

Rudy isn't a saint either you said... gives me hope... something big's up... and I know it's gonna be awesome 😃

Oh wait, he whispered "Now you know how it feels Rudra ?"..😲

Am I seeing Rudy guilty of doing something similar ?! 😲

This isn't the real him..?... 😲 😊... excited excited to see how this unfolds... thnx for the awesome update ! 😃

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lavanya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#122

Omg... this omkara is sooo interesting...

So damn excited for next updates...

Ready to read it anytime..

Superb...

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chils

@chils

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Posted: 7 years ago

#123

I am silent reader, I don't know what to say but this update is grateful 😃

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#124

Rex you are back🤗 I missed you dear, hopefully you will ace all your exams the next month.

LOVED LOveD LOVED it

I never thought you would let them get married in secret and then just announce it to the world

Nicely done- a smart move by Omkara to ensure that Gauri would actually marry him.

The families reactions were on point too but the one moment that broke me the most was definitely When Om broke down. When he fell on his knees apologizing to Gauri for blackmailing her, begging her to never hate him, to forgive him

And how broken he was because he thought he was incapable of being loved 😭😭

Am I sadistic for loving the dark, twisted( possibly bipolar😆) Om?😳 because I do!!

He is sooo sweet in his own ways- okay he shouldn't have blackmailed her etc but somehow I just can't hate him.

Poor Gauri even felt sorry for him and without realizing her fingers went through his hair.

LOVED it 👏 As always amazing work

can't wait for Anika's reaction

And what will Gauri's Family say???

What will happen next between her and Om?

Will she tell Rudra the truth?

Pls continue as soon as you can😳

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Rex

@StarLord_Owen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid
Amazing update
i'm loving his dark character!that suits him
Finally he married her👏 by hook or crook he will make her fall in love with him.that will be very interesting how she will fall for him.
It's getting tooo much interesting!!
Can't wait for the next chapter

Thank you so much! I am gkad that you liked it! ❤️

I too think dark side suits Om bettet 😆

The story is devided into two parts.. The second part will began after one or two more chaps...gauri will began to fall for Om in the second part...😳

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Rex

@StarLord_Owen

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: DEFOM
great updates
read them all in one go

👏

cant wait to read more

n i am loving this dark omkara singh oberoi😃

Thank you sooo much! ❤️
I am glad that you liked my version of dark Om 😆
Next update will be up pretty soon :D

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Rex

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Posted: 7 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: .SNOWWHITE.
I am ready for this ride love this dark Om. Do watever u want with oms character.😎 I am into it. Loved the update. Continue soon.🤗

That's all I needed to hear, really 😆
I hope you will like what ever plans I have with Om.. 😃
I like writing about this Om so much! ❤️ and it's so delightful to know that ppl like reading about him 😆
Thank you so much for your lovely comment! ❤️

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Rex

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Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: Pau91
This is awesome,superb,amazing...I love to know more about Omkara mysterious character and how things are gonna change between him and Gauri. Looking forward to the next chapter 👏 😛

Thank you so much love, for your flattering words ❤️
They mean sooo much!! 😃
There is so much to know about Omkara as I have so many mysteries and layers to unfold about him and I hope you will like them all ⭐️
Things will change between them in the part two of the story which will be after two more chaps(you are currently reading part 1 😊 ). And they will change DRASTICALLY 😆

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Rex

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Posted: 7 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: mailanchi
How I missed the second chapter. I don't know. Read both the chapters together and loved it. wot exactly happened for om to think that no one loves him. And is Rudy a bad boy ??? One request from an ardent fan of your stories,make Gauri fall madly in love with om once it happens.

Thank you sooo much for your flattering words! ❤️
I am glad that you liked both the chaps 😃
I am planning next chap especially to disclose the past if Omkara..it wil answer all the questions 😊
And for Rudy I would just say- he is no worse or better than any or the character..he is certainly not a black character. Grey? Maybe..
And don't worry..Gauri will fall in love with Om insanely in the part two of the story :) which will be up after two more chaps :D