Tangled: A Rikara SS. *Completed* (Note on Page 44) - Page 25

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

I think your updates have the perfect length dear. Never ever let anyone dictate how much to write

😳🤗you are really talented and put a lot of hard work into the updates that is clearly visible.

Ajay is just a Name for us😆someone who showed Om that if he doesn't claim his Haq over Gauri someone else will( loved how creepily good the actor portrayed him)

Just go with the flow :D Don't feel pressured to write dear, we can be patient😃

I think there was not one scene with Om without any short on, Maybe Kunal isn't comfortable that way? Leenesh had plenty of topless scenes I guess , but I think he is the only one so far

Thank you. I write through the night and update in the morning, which is why sometimes they are incoherent.

Yes Ajay did justice to his role.

I liked that cupboard scene. Leenesh and the towel scene

Originally posted by: NESRIA

I love rudra he is so funny and cute

And I like that gauri is giving

OM hard timee lol

H need to work hard to win her heart

I love him too! Such a prankster. Gauri madam couldn't help herself. Oh Om will!

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid

Wonderful update

Loved the desparate ri and their sangeet dance

I think soon they gonna accept each other as husband and wife.

Loved it so much

Thanks! I put a lot of effort into it. Yay! Staying away from her worked in Om's favour. Thank you! I'm thrilled you loved it. It makes writing it worthwhile.

Originally posted by: reenzreenz

The ending was awww...

Thanks love. I was stuck between this or the bhala maano, bura maano line. Om's writers have done such a good job and Kunal executes it so well.

Originally posted by: sh_aarohi

Aww it was so romantic

waiting for the next

Yay! I could feel the romance while writing it.

WOW! a romantic update

Originally posted by: eishe10

Awesome update😉

Thank you. Finally Gauri and Om are on the same page.

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

Aww...

Loved it

Beautifully written

Finally om proved he is a romantic person

After all tadpana Gauri danced with him

Can I expect some romantic moments now?

Thank you. Out of everything I've written, (which is not a lot) this' what I'm most proud of. I was so excited to write it. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Yess! He was romantic before in small ways, which is the kind of romance I prefer.

Gauri finally coming to her senses. Romance coming your way!

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

So he was learning dance to prove his chiraiyya..poor Ri was upset as he didn't pick her calls..but there was a surprise waiting for her in sangeet...he proved that he's extremely romantic...I loved the song on which they danced...
Omkara was awestruck seeing Gauri in that saree..and all his fantasy made me blushed...
Somu and Rudy is love..I'm glad you focused on OmRu's bonding...they're my ultimate favs in one frame..
The whole chapter was filled with so much chhota chhota moments..loved it..waiting for Rikara's "Us time"..continue soonish..

Yes! Anything for Gauri! Absence makes the heart grow fonder. Om had spoken about this in the show. I had 3 songs in mind. This one won!

I deliberately put that line there 😉

I enjoyed writing Rumya too. Saumya is so cute and of course we all love Omru.

Yes I love these chotu moments!

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Rudy and Saumya handled the situation well

Rudy even locked Ajay

OmRu just lock people in this FF 😆