Home is where the Heart is - RiKara OS (Changed #9)

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Amezing one its just brighten my face with long lasting smile yaar i loved it. Loved father daughter bond gauri getting angry stilll for adya she said nothing pls write more would love to c more father daugher bond n hw o wins ri would love to c

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Posted: 7 years ago

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The challenges of living alone are unbounded yet they are equally rewarding and goes a long way in moulding, preparing you for the world in the most raw unsheltered way... lol im so bad at consoling! lol. but just sharing my experience. its been almost 7 years and i still yearn for home but independence and opportunities are worth it.. for the time being😛

Home is where the heart is! beautiful piece kashish. felt like you are weaving it with the strings of your heart! Aadya and omkara are quite the jodi! the king and his little princess! daddys precious little angel.. love the father daughter bonding happening over a possessive mother's angst! lol.

Ommkara's silent promise to be there for her in every way and win her over through actions rather than words and promises was like the cherry on top moment! i love the combo of 'O' and 'OSO'! its like best of both worlds!

Omkara and Rudra's bonding was so well reflected! exactly how their relationship would be strained is mommakara became dadvaay.. honestly the only mother he knew of was om cuz jhanvi was too busy drowning in wine, and hence if omkara has a personality transplant Ru would definitely be the most affected.

Loved the piece! please continue!

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