RiKara Don't Let Me Go Chapter 7 Teaser pg. 45 05/07/2018

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So I am still unsure whether it will be a Short Story or a Fan Fiction , since I have a few Ideas for a Four Shot as well.
This is different from my Other Work but I hope you will like it.




Gauri are you ready? The Groom just arrived!" Richa , Gauri's Childhood friend , ran into the room to take a Look at her Best friend.

Gauri looked in the mirror once more, The burgundy red saree was beautifully wrapped around her petit Form, her jewellery heavy, the veil covering her Hair, the mehndi darker than she had expected. Today was her wedding day yet no Smile adorned her lips. Seeing herself decked up as a bride, she tried hard fighting her Tears. How to explain to them that by getting married to him she would lose herself? That the Love she thought they had never existed? That this was a Farce?

Gauri? Kya Hua? Are you feeling shy about the Wedding night? Don't worry I bet Jiju will be a Gentleman. " Richa said and chuckled to herself; not seeing the emotional State that Gauri was in.

How could Gauri tell her Friend that she dreaded that wedding, his arrival? How could she tell her that the Man they all adored was a dark soul who intended to break her?

Looking at her Mehndi Gauri stood up and tried to calm her breathing. His Name was beautifully written and slightly hidden in the palm of her right hand right next to her thumb.

The same place he had kissed so many times before showing his true colours.

Omkara." Gauri read out loud softly and sighed. He was going to be her downfall.

Today was the day their Fate had been sealed and Gauri prayed to God to give her strength.




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So That was the Teaser.

Please tell me whether you liked the concept or not.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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That was really bad teeaaasssiinngg !!!
When are you giving us part 1 ?! 😃
Combine all the parts and give it to me as an OS already !😆
Continue soon ! Will be waiting for the next part ! Looks very interesting...😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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liked the concept 👍🏼. pls do finish this.
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Looks really interesting, I'm excited to read the first part😊.
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I love the concept. Waiting eagerly for the 1st update.
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A Amel this too much girl each concept of your stories is unique and wonderful
Cant get 😉 enough of them
I loved this concept it is interesting
Wonder why gauri is marrying OM
Waiting to read about dark sol omkara
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow that was an interesting teaser.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow... Something really different.. Loving the concept..
Jaldi update karo
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Originally posted by: fariah25

That was really bad teeaaasssiinngg !!!

When are you giving us part 1 ?! 😃
Combine all the parts and give it to me as an OS already !😆
Continue soon ! Will be waiting for the next part ! Looks very interesting...😊


I knooow dear and I am sorry for always teasing you 😉 But I hope it will be worth it😳
😆 An OS wouldn't be able to give the Story the depth and darkness I am seeking right now but a new OS is on it'S way ;)
😳
will update tonight maybe

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