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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: The_Inner_Voice


Dear Fariah,

That was Beautiful 👏

Now to the Nitty gritty of what made it beautiful for me...Firstly I love the song to the T and am glad that you went ahead to create a poetry with RiKara in it.Thanks for the same dear. 🤗

Right from the initial " Hooo... hooo" where the fairy lights drop.. they happen to drop at the right beat and right when you have the chimes tune... you induced the shooting star effect... That was bliss.

The apt visuals went in sync with the lyrics... Without further ado let get into the lyric by lyric wonder that you have depicted so beautifully with the visuals.

In Faaslon ka... with Ri going away from Kara

Yeh Faisla kyun... with Ri pausing a bit as the decision isn't that easy for her to take

Dil ne ... with the heart effect right in framing Kara .. he is her heart

Mere kar liya...with the veil being torn... into shreds... the decision leaving the shreds of the heart, some with her... some with him.

Khud hi na jane kaise jiyega hoke ye tumse juda ... with the doubtful look they have as they havent got a clue as they part

Main wari jaawan... with Ri sacrificing herself in his praise, falling further more for him, evident in her subtle smile as he blows away her tendrils

Saathon ki hoya ae kasoor re... with them in an eye-lock of togetherness and she having the look of guilt

Naadaan is dilki... with her breaking down

Har Khwaish roothi... with Kara being her wish, that may not be with her

Sapne hue hain saare choor... with Rikara teary eyed looking on at the shattered dreams

Piyaaa Ore Piya... with Kara going down on his knees for his Beloved

Piyare Piyare Piyaaa... with Kara engulfing his beloved letting no distance make its presence felt between them

Piyaaa Ore Piya... Piyare Piyare Piyaaa... with the paradox of the distance between them increasing at each note

I really do appreciate the time and effort you put in to treat us with such good work.👏 Thanks Fariah.

Keep VMing

fabulous description for the lyrics👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: The_Inner_Voice


Dear Fariah,

That was Beautiful 👏

Now to the Nitty gritty of what made it beautiful for me...Firstly I love the song to the T and am glad that you went ahead to create a poetry with RiKara in it.Thanks for the same dear. 🤗

Right from the initial " Hooo... hooo" where the fairy lights drop.. they happen to drop at the right beat and right when you have the chimes tune... you induced the shooting star effect... That was bliss.

The apt visuals went in sync with the lyrics... Without further ado let get into the lyric by lyric wonder that you have depicted so beautifully with the visuals.

In Faaslon ka... with Ri going away from Kara

Yeh Faisla kyun... with Ri pausing a bit as the decision isn't that easy for her to take

Dil ne ... with the heart effect right in framing Kara .. he is her heart

Mere kar liya...with the veil being torn... into shreds... the decision leaving the shreds of the heart, some with her... some with him.

Khud hi na jane kaise jiyega hoke ye tumse juda ... with the doubtful look they have as they havent got a clue as they part

Main wari jaawan... with Ri sacrificing herself in his praise, falling further more for him, evident in her subtle smile as he blows away her tendrils

Saathon ki hoya ae kasoor re... with them in an eye-lock of togetherness and she having the look of guilt

Naadaan is dilki... with her breaking down

Har Khwaish roothi... with Kara being her wish, that may not be with her

Sapne hue hain saare choor... with Rikara teary eyed looking on at the shattered dreams

Piyaaa Ore Piya... with Kara going down on his knees for his Beloved

Piyare Piyare Piyaaa... with Kara engulfing his beloved letting no distance make its presence felt between them

Piyaaa Ore Piya... Piyare Piyare Piyaaa... with the paradox of the distance between them increasing at each note

I really do appreciate the time and effort you put in to treat us with such good work.👏 Thanks Fariah.

Keep VMing

TYSM for this comment !!! You just made my day !!
Glad you received what I wished to give !
The magical voice and the magical couple made things even more beautiful...
Thanks for watching and leaving behind such a beautiful review !! I appreciate it !
Will keep VMing ofcourse !
❤️ ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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@annudha TYSM !😳
@Zahra thanx hun !❤️
@loveispure Thank you !😊
@chandini thanks for watching !❤️
@deepzz thank You ! I wish so too darling...😊
@neeli thanks ! ❤️

Thank you so much for the great feedback guys !
I'm so glad you loved it ! ⭐️ ❤️
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