2S || Tere Ishq Nachaaya ||- Completed.(14.10.2017)

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Two Shots- || Tere Ishq Nachaaya ||


Shot 1- Dhal Gaya Suraj


She looked up breaking from her thoughts about her husband to look at the man Richa was introducing her to.

"Gauri..yeh...Dilpreet Hai, Woo...Delhi waale cousin" Richa nodded smiling at the man before her.

He greeted her with a Hello extending his hand towards the shorter lady, his wife!
Gauri streched her lips in a straight smile, looking reluctant at the hand extended towards her, she smiled folding her hands greeting him with a Namaste.

"Dilpreet, yeh Gauri hai meri best friend" she smiled indicating Omkara in disguise.

"Gauri, Dilpreet tumhe help kardega wo koi rasam hai- hum Gurudwar jaake aate hain, tum toh jaanti ho naa hum Punjabiyon mein mehendi-Sangeet kaise hota hai, toh thoda dekh lena."

"Lekin hum kaise,...?"

"Arey tum ne toh Punjabi ghar mein shaadi ki hai naa, aur Dilpreet bhi hai naa wo tumhe help kardega" She quickly hugged Gauru and left hurriedly, after secretly giving a thumbs up to Omkara.

Gauri raised her gaze slightly to look at the towering sardaar and formally smiling, she hesitantly diverted her gaze.

The silence was awkward.

"Main decoraters ko dehk loon?..." Asked Dilpreet looking at the men decorating the place with red curtains.

She nodded, "jii...hum wo phoolwaale.." she passed by him. She stopped turning momentarily to look back at him,something about him bothered her, did she know him? Setting aside her thoughts she continued.

*****

A while later, a plate of pav bhaji was extended before her. She looked up to find the new sardaar.
"WO aap kaam hi kiye jaa rahi hai, garam garam khaa li jiye phir chetti chetti kaam bhi karlenge." He spoke in his Punjabi accent.

"Nahi!" She said looking away from the plate at him, "humara vrat hai karwa chauth ka!"

Omkara just stared at her, remembering her words and seeing the contrasting actions. A smile curved up gently. "Aapke pati bahut lucky hai!"

She shot up a glance at him and then looked at the setting sun in the sky,which much reflected their relationship and simply left.

****

The terrace had been beautifully decorated for the Sangeet-Mehendi and the Karwa Chauth. After the married women had finished their puja, they arrived at the terrace. The plan was to spend the eveningvwith Richa's sangeet and mehendi rituals and the night for the karwa Chauth celebrations.

Omkara wore a cream coloured pajam kurta with a red turban majestically wrapped around his head. The sky wore a violet hue, the weather perfect. He turned towards the door when he saw her enter. Dressed in a simple red punjabi suit, her long hair straightened left open, the ends of the locks kissing her waist she looked breathtaking beautiful. Her face shone despite the fasting. A small bindi adorned her forehead, but the smile that ruled hearts was missing. That jauntiness in her manner was missing just like the moon was missing in the sky.

She passed by him and stood beside Rucha as her mehendi started. Gauri's mother made Gauri sit and called over the mehendi artist. Omkara casually moved around smiling and stood a little distance away from his wife. Gauri simply sat adoring the art on her hand. When the name of her husband was asked she remained silent. She was lost.

"Omkara" answered her mother to the lady. She tapped her daughter asking her whether she was okay. Gauri simply nodded, her mother assuming the fast had made her tired, assured her the moon would appear soon and went around talking to the others.


The atmosphere was joyful as the women and men danced to the laadas. Richa asked Gauri to perform, and Gauri showed reluctance.

"Gauri, tumhara pehla karwa chauth hai, aur humaari mehendi, aise tum naachogi nahi? Chalooo jaaoo...humaare liye?"
Gauri had to finally give in. No one knew the burden of her heart.


Gauri tied her dupaata on the side and went in the centre with a few other women as music started.

Chetti Bawdi Ve Tabiba,
Nahin Ta Main Mar Gaiyaan
O Tere Ishq Nachayaan
Kar Ke Thaiyya Thaiyya

Appear in haste O my Healer
Else I shall die waiting.
Your Love made me dance,
made me dance in ecstasy.

She looked up at the sky as she danced wondering whether he would come like the moon and give her his glimpse.

Omkara felt her pain, he could read her eyes, he was almost close to tears.
She danced beautifully just like the way she loved.

Ole Chup gaya suraj, bahar reh gyi laali
ve mein sadqay hovaan, deven muR je vikKHali
arewa! meN bhul gayiaaN, tede naal na gayiaa.

The sun has set yet the glow remains outside,
I'll give my life for a glimpse of You.
Ah! how mindless I'm! I didn't rush to You!


Her entire life from the day she had been married ran before her eyes. Their first meeting, their jungle adventure, their friendship, their banters and the painful fights and separation. So much had happened and yet her heart longed for him despite all the pain he gave her. Because he was the healer of the pains that her heart held. She danced and danced.

Tere Ishq ne dera mere andar keeta
Bhar ke zeher payala main taan aape peeta,
Jhabde wahudi tabiba nahin te main mar gaiyaan
Tere Ishq nachaiyaan kar key thaiyaa thaiyaa

Falling in love with you
Was like taking a sip of poison
Come my healer, forsaken, I am sad.
Your love has made me dance like mad


She had never known How Love Would be. But she was willing to let love happen. Oh, how did she knew Loving him was the equivalent of taking in poison. But if it was the poison then it, itself was the nectar as well. The poison of hate, anger and mistrust had stained her life like poison, had stabbed her in the heart she was bleeding. Bleeding to death. But her healer was her Love. The one who had given her poison could only heal her of it. She was irrevocably, insanely in love with him.

Tere Ishq Nachaya,
Tere Ishq Nachaya,
Kar Ke Thaiyaan Thaiyaan..

She expressed her love for him through her dance. While the others clapped and smiled, he had tears in his eyes. He weirdly felt everything she felt. That pain. He was defeated. Her love had defeated him. Could he ever love her that way? He stood there in amazement while she continued to dance graciously in ecstasy, in love.

Dancing was something she had always loved. And she had loved him too. Ahh her love knew no bounds, no languages, no words, no world, it just knew him.

She could wear his name's Chuda, apply his name's mehendi be his for all her births and keep dancing forever in the ecstasy of her love for him.

****

She had moved away to the rear side of the huge terrace, she was tired dancing. Tired loving, now. She looked up at the dark sky. Which was just like she was without him. Omkara had secretly, quietly followed her but remained aside in the shadow at a distance from her. His eyes still were moist and the pain only increased seeing her all lonely looking at the lost sky.

Suddenly there was commotion as a few people approached her. Omkara squeezed his eyes to make out what was happening. Soon Gauri was dragged by the men one among them the brother of Kaali who was the only Thakur brother alive.

Gauri tried freeing her hand from their grip, tried screaming all her efforts futile. Omkara looked at them angrily running behind them, after quickly grabbing the packet of sweets from Gauri's Pooja thaal which had been left abandoned.

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Shot 2- Aaya Chand



Aes ishqay di jhaNgii, vich mor boliiNda
saanooN qibla te kaaba, sohna yaar daseeNda
saanooN ghaa'el kar ke, pher khabar na layi aa

Cheti Bawdi Ve Tabiba,
Nahin Ta Main Mar Gaiyaan

Amidst our sacred passion, peacock will be singing (one day)
My search from nothing to all, will reveal my Beloved (one day)
Taking away my heart, never You asked about my state!

Come Soon My Lover, My Healer,
Or Is shall die waiting.

Omkara followed the jeep, on the bike, his eyes bloodshot. How dare they? Like the brave Mrizaya he set on the mission of bringing back his Sahiba, putting on stake his life if required. The wind was biting but he cared not, his life was stuck with her. He brought the bike to a screeching halt before the jeep. Getting off he stared at the three men with anger that could burn them raw.

While the young Thakur, held on to Gauri's hand the other two got off to fight the man. While he was engaged hitting the men, the man in the car spoke disgustingly to Gauri, which did not go unheard by his sharp ears.

Promptly a hard blow landed on one of the men causing him to crawl on the floor. His breathing was heavy, his nose flared, he was a dangerous mess. He turned his fiery gaze to the man in jeep as the two men escaped for dear life. The man got off angry, "Kaun hai be tu sardaar, chup chaap apna raasta naap warna acha nahi hoga"
Omkara dint bulge a bit, his eyes remained fixed, his jaw clenched and his breathing deep like that of a predator. The man raised his hand to give him a punch when Omkara held his fist in his palm.
"Himmat Kaise hui Teri!" He screamed and hit the man hard, that he almost fell over the tire of the vehicle.

"Abbey tu hai kaun, iss ladki ki wajah se Maine apne bhaaiyon ko khoya hai, main isse kahin kaa nahi chodunga.!" The man spat, trying to scuttle back to the woman but was held by the neck.

"Khabardaar Jo aakhn uthaa kar bhi dheka,
Mujhse bura koi nahi hoga!" He gave the man another blow, the man was bleeding.
He moved his gaze from the fallen man to his wife, who sat hugging herself, tears rolling down her cheeks. He was about to call out to her when he received a blow. He winced in pain. Gauri looked on terrified, she scrambled out of the jeep in haste. Looking around for help, she found none.

Omkara got back on his feet, his look deadly than before. Twisting his neck he held the man by the collar and punched him hard. The man defended and pushed him, Gauri held him in time.
He glanced up at her eyes, and Gauri stared back dumbfounded. He turned to fight the man, while Gauri stood wide eyed gaping at him.

The man said something about taking Gauri, and a harsh slap rang across his face. He insulted Gauri asking why was he fighting for that woman.

"Gauri ko aakhn uthaa ke bhi koi dehke toh mujhe bardaash nahi!"

The man was wounded badly and lay by the jeep almost unconscious.
Omkara turned to Gauri. "Omkara Ji!" She whispered crying.

"Gauri" he cupped her face. She looked at the wounds on his face and back at his eyes. She saw what she had searched for all along! The care, the pain, the love For HER!!

Tears rolled down his eyes. It was terrible for him to see her like that devastated. Tears continued, and their rugged breathing was all that was heard as they eased their pain by just the sight of each other.

"Omkara Ji " she screamed looking diagonally behind him as the man came forward with a rod in hand.
At once Omkara swirled, holding the rod in time. His eyes flashed with annoyance and anger, much like lightning on a pitch black night.

He flashed the rod in hand landing it on his head. The man holding his head fell to the ground this time seriously unconscious.

The two stared at the man, hitched breaths blaring in the silent light. She quickly moved to his side, holding his arm she asked him if he was okay. He simply nodded. "Chalo".

He held her hand and walked. She simply stared at him. While he sat back on his bike, she stood like a statue. Her heart screaming for answers like always.

" Kyun?" She looked at him as though defeated, asking the question time and again.

He looked at her knowing there was no escape. He sighed, getting off the bike standing before her. "I m Sorry" . She simply stared at him, that's all he had? Spoke her mind. While her heart just wanted to hug him and leave the unspoken. But, she had to for once stand up for "them".

He removed the turban, and kept it aside on the seat.
" Poori Life Sorry bolunga tabhi kam rahega." He looked at her in the eye. "I'm sorry Gauri, bahut, bahut galtiyaan hui hai mujhse." He folded his hands before her.
"Tumhaare Pyaar Ke Aage Main Haar Gaya". He broke down into tears, crying miserably. He knelt down crying. Streams of warm droplets rolled down her cheeks, her eyes burning, it pained to see him that way. She knew the pain because she had been there, for a terribly wrong period. She knelt down before him. She held his face making him look up. He refused to look at her, he couldn't meet her eyes. He just couldn't. Regret overflowing as tears he sat there.
" Omkara Ji" she whispered a plead.

He shifted his gaze to her slowly, "I m sorry". He cried uncontrollably. At once she pulled his head closer. Resting his forehead on her shoulder he cried. The tears dint seem to was his guilt,such terrible stains his actions had left. She cried along gently rubbing his back, soothing him out of his pain. He dint know for how long he had been there. He quickly broke apart and removed the sweet from his pocket.
" You haven't eaten anything, ye khaao" he said extending it to her. She smiled nodding a no, looking up at the sky.

He frowned, his features dull, "I dont deserve it. Don't love me so much." He prayed before her.

She gulped hard, tears not reafy to stop.

"Aapse Ishq Karna Humne Nahi Chunaa that,
Lekin Iss Ishq Ko Humne Chunaa Hai!"
She said her eyes reflecting her love.He gulped nervously.

"Kaise ?" He asked her his voice deep and pained."Kaise kar sakti ho mujh se itna pyaar, San me baawajood?" He held her hands delicately, seeing his name on her hand.

" Bas karte hain!" She replied honestly.

He closed his eyes, wondering what good had he done to receive the best.

"Chaliyee, " she quickly gotvup extending her hand to him. He took her hand and got up, his eyes not leaving hers. She turned, when he gently stopped by holding her hand. She turned and he smiled.

He once again got on his knees and holding both her hands looked at her. She looked at him rather nervously.
"I love You..." He said simply. No fancy words, no explanations, nothing but those words which said what had remained unsaid for too long. She closed her eyes, and opened them gently looking at him. She jerked his hand slightly pulling him up, he obeyed. When suddenly he looked away and she followed his gaze. The moon shone brightly in the sky. She stared at the sky amazed. Her feelings flowing in ecstasy. So much happiness, that she felt it was all a dream.

She at once put the duppata on her head. Holding the corner of her net dupatta she dragged it up and saw the moon threw it, and turned towards Omkara who bent slightly to make level with her. The two smiling through it. Putting the duppata down she turned to the moon folding her hands in prayer, wishing for his happiness and long life. Her gestures, her actions moved Omkara. Once again the regret flowed to surface, but he fisted his hand. He won't let regret make him weak, he would hold on to her love which made him strong and give her happiness and love for the rest of their life.

Her eye lashes curved up a she looked at him and bent to touch his feet, he stopped her in time and took her in a warm embrace instead.
"I m Sorry Gauri,
Ek vaada hai tumse,
Chaaye much bhi ho jaaye,
I will always love you,
Humesha. And. Forever" he said firmly.

Opening the packet he extended the sweet towards her, "Paani toh nahi hai iss se..." He looked around.
She smiled and ate from it.
"Sirf apka saath chaiye, baaki San manjoor hai" her words were like the pure moonlight illuminating his dark heart. She was his moon, he was the darkness. They were now complete this night.

Hand in hand they walked back to the bike. His stomach growled in hunger, having had nothing since the morning but his heart was filled and content. He was at peace. Getting on the tips of her toes, he placed the turban on his head, while he simpered surprised. "Jach Ti Hai aape!" She smiled shyly.

The breeze rejoiced while the moon looked on at this Ranjhaa who won his Heer bac. She gently wrapped her small arms around him resting her head on his back. She was finally home. Riding through the night, he smiled, never had he felt so much at peace. That missing part of him which he had been finding all throughout his life was HER. She completed him. Both, now together set out, the destination might remain hidden but the journey was what mattered.

Oh, What not did their love make them do!
The crazy heart dances to the tune of love.




Tere Ishq Nachaaya, Kar ke Thaiyaa Thaiyaa.

Your love made me dance in ecstasy.




Author's Note-

The song here is Tere Ishq Nachaaya a sufi rendition.
Though the song here describes the love between man and the Almighty. I have taken it in literal sense, here, though.

The song captures the ecstasy of the lover and complains of separation, of the ruptured heart and asks the Beloved, the Healer to come and rescue the lover.
Dance is that action that, one form of art that is a close analogue of love. And this song beautiful describes it.
It has been sung by various Sufi Singers, each putting their own kind of charm to the Beautiful Lyrical originally written by Bulleh Shah.


Hope you all could relate to the song and the story as much as I could.
Hoping you all liked this one.
Would love to read from all you dear readers!
Edited by annikaa - 7 years ago
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Brilliant
So gauri kidnapped
Yes finally some romance spicing up with some action
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So beautiful.. I love Dilri they're just so adorable . continue soon
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Res 😆

Unres 😳
The first shot was beautiful. Loved Gauri's feelings there.😊😊
Liked Guilty Omkara too.😃😃
And the Kidnap.
Edited by Rainzz - 7 years ago
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awesome update yar...
Totally loved it...
so gauri is kidnapped...
waiting for the next update
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this is amazing
cant wait to read more
plzz update soon the next part for this!!
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This is so beautiful..just like the way we always wanted..Omkara could feel his chiraiyya's pain...finally someone from Thakur family returned and kidnapped Ri...eagerly waiting for the next shot..
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Originally posted by: minamma

Brilliant

So gauri kidnapped
Yes finally some romance spicing up with some action


Romance nahi, par Dil Ki Batein for sure.😳

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...

So beautiful.. I love Dilri they're just so adorable . continue soon


Thank you.




Next Part Updated.😳
Hope you like that as well.
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update yar...

Totally loved it...
so gauri is kidnapped...
waiting for the next update


Thank you Aparna😳
The next part is up.

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