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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Ahaan..!! What a dhamakedar chappy..the chapter was covered from Omkara's pov..his first reaction seeing her gave me major feelings..finally OSO got back the heart which was gone with his little chiraiyya..but he realised very well that his punishment was just starting...VolcanoKara was mind blasting..I feel pity for those fellows who dared to touch OSO's wife...Ri was shocked with the happenings..but our dabang chiraiyya didn't let herself fall weak before him...the best thing about OSO is he understand his wife..I'm glad he isn't imposing himself on her..loving this Kara...waiting for the AadKara and RiDya chemistry..continue ASAP plz..



For now it's just a question of Gauri and we all know Ri is her own person. Will he be so patient when Aadya is in question. He will want her to have a father's name and not just to stop goons like this in the future. We'll have to wait and see what DaddyKara gets up to. 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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hahahha i was waiting to see aadya and omkara union! (jonarya union😛😳) but this was incredible! so im not complaining. i know you would do justice to that so i dont mind the wait. ohkay, coming back to "finding himself"
I love the way you make it so sensational. From The moment he saw her to the moment he found himself... so many things happened in the meanwhile but all that is of little consequence compared to the overpowering self discovery that was internalized by THE OSO. hell, now we can actually use OSO and Omkara interchangeably! 😎

He starts kissing the living daylights out of her the moment he gets to her! I think on a different stage of life i would slaughter the character but for now... i totally understand the overwhelming feeling he is going through. There is no other thought going in his head except that he has finally found his wife after 3 long years and he wants nothing but to take in every part of her and hold her till death do them apart! small scene but suchhh an impact! he doesnt even register her protests, her disengaged attitude, nothing at all except that he has finally found her!

Then the push and he is cruelly and abruptly brought back to reality where she doesnt want him touching her. *cannot comprehend the heartbreak there* but then there is the OSO within Omkara... devasted yet not defeated! He willNOT lose her again, He willNOT take a no for an answer. He will fight and he will fight till he wins.

the fight. lol. volcanokara at its best! i wish they show this on the show! such a brilliant portrayal of desperate posessivekara! 👏 kj would nail it!

the last part where he doesnt fight her harsh words but understands and recognizes her needs over his is spectacular. one line is all it takes to show just how much omkara has changed and just how much he is willing to give to get her back in his shell of a life. This here is a real man who is not afraid or insecure, a man who truely values and loves his wife.

Ending was superb kashish! Viswaas! Omkara learned to have faith. albeit the hard way..but he learned.👏
Edited by perFICtionist. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: perFICtionist.

hahahha i was waiting to see aadya and omkara union! (jonarya union😛😳) but this was incredible! so im not complaining. i know you would do justice to that so i dont mind the wait. ohkay, coming back to "finding himself"

I love the way you make it so sensational. From The moment he saw her to the moment he found himself... so many things happened in the meanwhile but all that is of little consequence compared to the overpowering self discovery that was internalized by THE OSO. hell, now we can actually use OSO and Omkara interchangeably! 😎

He starts kissing the living daylights out of her the moment he gets to her! I think on a different stage of life i would slaughter the character but for now... i totally understand the overwhelming feeling he is going through. There is no other thought going in his head except that he has finally found his wife after 3 long years and he wants nothing but to take in every part of her and hold her till death do them apart! small scene but suchhh an impact! he doesnt even register her protests, her disengaged attitude, nothing at all except that he has finally found her!

Then the push and he is cruelly and abruptly brought back to reality where she doesnt want him touching her. *cannot comprehend the heartbreak there* but then there is the OSO within Omkara... devasted yet not defeated! He willNOT lose her again, He willNOT take a no for an answer. He will fight and he will fight till he wins.

the fight. lol. volcanokara at its best! i wish they show this on the show! such a brilliant portrayal of desperate posessivekara! 👏 kj would nail it!

the last part where he doesnt fight her harsh words but understands and recognizes her needs over his is spectacular. one line is all it takes to show just how much omkara has changed and just how much he is willing to give to get her back in his shell of a life. This here is a real man who is not afraid or insecure, a man who truely values and loves his wife.

Ending was superb kashish! Viswaas! Omkara learned to have faith. albeit the hard way..but he learned.👏


Ever since I read Jon and Arya were meant to be a couple in the original script, their relationship has changed in my mind... so no - no JonArya reunion here for AadKara.😆 Ok so Luck has shined on you girl... my lab got cancelled and I have an off today, so Omkara is going to find out about his little princess today.

Yep now OSO and Omkara will both be in this story... but so will DaddyKara after the next update. Now Omkara will utilise his new found faith to restore Gauri's lost faith. I can't wait for this little family to unite.

Keep reading and reviewing 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Serviana

Loved it!! Thanks for translating hindi conversations so I can understand it🤗


Thanks and you're more than welcome🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-

Wow fabulous OS.
Loved it so much.


Thank you😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Ann17

hey kashis. . thanks fr update..


finally waiting over!

sweet enough.. bt too short...
u knw how we readers r..

wants more n more..

plz do update soon if u get time...

stay blessed


Sorry about that...

Thanks for reading...

You stay blessed too😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: guy3

Thoda filmy tha:) but chalega;P
Thanks for updating dear.


Thanks for reading. I guess I am a bit of a Drama Queen😆.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

Loved it

Apt meeting

Let's see how he reacts seeing baby girl


Yep get ready for AadKara😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit

Awww kashi...filmy but still this stole away my heart...but still it feels sad when she distances him...but I know he deserves it... want to see how OSO is gonna win her back & how Omkara is gonna win her love...

Please do drop in PM's on ur updates...
Take care...


I've just discovered i'm a Drama Queen so I'm going with it😆. Just joking. This was my first attempt writing action... guess it's not my forte😭. No worries though, I will try romance next... maybe I might find better luck there😳.

Omkara will go all out, once OSO sets the groundwork... Love that you got the distinction.

Thanks for reading and take care.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: aditi27

Such an endearing story. Such angst, love and anger all tied together with a rope made of harsh words and misunderstandings.

Do continue soon.



Beautiful imagery used to describe the emotions here. Thank you😊

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