Finding Himself - Rikara OS- Changed #6

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kashishsr

@kashishsr

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: gumpchump
Loved reading this part.. am enjoying how your story has these subtle hints of bonding and belonging between RiKara from IB.

Your depiction of their emotions, intensity and love for each other is purrfect.

PS: Only complaint, if I may 😉: this was sooo short gurl! As always waiting for the next OS 😆

I was gonna introduce Aadya and let Omkara discover some home truths too, but I wouldn't have been able to have it out today. Hopefully the next bit will be longer. It felt natural to end at Om's realisation that she hadn't forgotten him... it lead to him releasing some of the pain of being OSO and returning part of Omkara to him.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. 😊

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Serviana

@Serviana

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Loved it!! Thanks for translating hindi conversations so I can understand it🤗

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 29

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Wow fabulous OS.
Loved it so much.

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Ann17

@Ann17

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

hey kashis. . thanks fr update..

finally waiting over!

sweet enough.. bt too short...

u knw how we readers r..

wants more n more..

plz do update soon if u get time...

stay blessed

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guy3

@guy3

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Thoda filmy tha:) but chalega;P
Thanks for updating dear.

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Ms.Lizzie

@Ms.Lizzie

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Loved it

Apt meeting

Let's see how he reacts seeing baby girl

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Shraddha Dikshit

@Shraddhadikshit

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Awww kashi...filmy but still this stole away my heart...but still it feels sad when she distances him...but I know he deserves it... want to see how OSO is gonna win her back & how Omkara is gonna win her love...

Please do drop in PM's on ur updates...

Take care...

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aditi27

@aditi27

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Such an endearing story. Such angst, love and anger all tied together with a rope made of harsh words and misunderstandings.

Do continue soon.

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priya_86

@priya_86

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Lovely one Kashish...all emotions so beautifully portrayed

Rikara fandom has awesome writers...😳

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Tasnim

@tasnimrodela

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Ahaan..!! What a dhamakedar chappy..the chapter was covered from Omkara's pov..his first reaction seeing her gave me major feelings..finally OSO got back the heart which was gone with his little chiraiyya..but he realised very well that his punishment was just starting...VolcanoKara was mind blasting..I feel pity for those fellows who dared to touch OSO's wife...Ri was shocked with the happenings..but our dabang chiraiyya didn't let herself fall weak before him...the best thing about OSO is he understand his wife..I'm glad he isn't imposing himself on her..loving this Kara...waiting for the AadKara and RiDya chemistry..continue ASAP plz..

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