OBEROI MANSION: A HOUSE OF FAILED MARRIAGES [Part 5-Page 18][29/10/17]

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@BoonAndBane

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: farinaks
So interesting... Intriguing...emotional nd heart touching
I'm loveing it Rainzz
Continue asap
Do pm me

Thank you so much for the appreciation dear.😳😳

I will try to update soon but I am a bit afraid that I will be able to do that as I have not started writing the next part yet.

And as for PM, I will try of giving one but cannot promise that. So, sorry in advance if you don't get the PM. 🥱🥱

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#22

Originally posted by: Apu_915
Intriguing Start. Loved it ❤️
Such amazing choice of words, speaking volumes in a few words. You're too good at it 👏
I'm already love with the story as well as the title!
Update Soon :)

Thank a lot dear.😛😛

I am really glad that you loved the title. 😃😃

Writing few words is not a deliberate attempt. They just come like that only. 😆😆

I will try to update soon, but cannot promise. 😊😊

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#23

Originally posted by: bworm
Interesting concept.
Loved the start. Let's see what you weave next.

Thank you so much for commenting dear.😊😊

I am happy that you liked the start.😳😳

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#24

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Intriguing Start..

Thank you so much dear. 😃😃

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#25

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
This is a very realistic take on the story! If not for Dadi's continuous ishqbaazi jaaps, all the marriages would have been cancelled long time ago. I'm loving this!

Thanks a lot for commenting dear.😳😳

Truly speaking, I am also not very fond of Dadi's ishqbaaazi lessons.😆😆

This random idea of broken marriages popped in my mind and I was here on IF with it. 😉😉

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#26

Originally posted by: samiksha1993
Oh, how did I miss it? It has a very intriguing title. Oberoi Mansion has become a house of broken marriages. The best part about you is you convey a lot in very few and simple words. looking forward to the next update.

Hey Samiksha😛,

Thanks a lot for commenting. 😳😳

I am really happy to know that you liked the title. 😃😃

About writing in few words, the problem is that I am unable to increase the length of the parts, no matter how much I try.😕😕

I knew my capability so I chose to keep them drabbles instead of one - shots.😆😆

I have started writing the next update. Hopefully, I will update tomorrow... or today (if I am able to complete that😉😉).

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#27

Originally posted by: parthianglory.
Hi!
Great work on the teaser; it was brief and offered just enough to keep the reader hooked and wanting more.

I'm such a sucker for the Senior Oberois and I'm so keen to read more of them.

I suspect Shakti and Pinky are next, going by your teaser. If it is in chronological order, then I love the rudimentary values that you've pinpointed for each pairing; it's logical, thoughtful and true to the dynamics of each couple.

Would love to read more.

Paridhi :)

Hey Paridhi,

Thank you for appreciating my work dear.😊😊

I am glad that you found the teaser intriguing. 😳😳

About the next part, you are absolutely correct. It is going to be on Shakti and Pinky.👍🏼👍🏼

The values that I wrote are not in chronological order. The order is a bit twisted .😉😉

I hope you will appreciate that order too.😆😆

I will try to update soon.😃😃