ISHQBAAZO KA ISHQBAAZI part 4 updated.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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guysss sry for the late update😕...maaf kardo.
past 3 updates i didn't write about our other two pairs
.sry for that. our gaurike starts where after throwing swetlana out of OM gauri comes to know about buamaa's evil motive to kill omkara and she tries to bring the aslee chekra of buamaa in front of om...

and our ruvya it starts from bhavya returning back to OM (as if she is kidnapped)...
so gauri bhavya where also present when shivaay brings annika back to OM.
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Pinky:mummiji...(with shocked face looking at the door).
Dadi:kya hua???
and all turns towards the direction where pinky was looking...

shivaay enters carrying annika.(she was struggling in his hands)
annika:shivaay neeche utaariye hume...mr.sso aap kya sochte hai apne aapko.neeche utaryeee...
(stops after hearing pinky speaking.)
Pinky:shivaay ho kya raha hai yaha...

shivaay:(in his mind-muje maaf kardo annika for this)...TADDD.
Annika:AAA...All gets shocked ...
(shivaay drops annika to floor intentionally😛 to maintain his ssogiri and walks over her.)

shivvay:accha hua aap sab log yaha hai...muje kuch important announcement karne hai...

Ru:(to om ):O lagta hai bhaiyaa samaj gaya...i am happpy.yeee👏🤪(he literally started to dance)but was stopped by Om. ( this was noticed by shivaay from the corner of his eyes...
and he smirks...and this shivaay's smirk was also noticed ..)
Ru:kya ???tu kush nahi hai kya?
Om:shut up rudra..kuch teek nahi hai...tuje dek nahi raha hai kya?🤔

Pinky:ye kya hai shivaay.tu iss ladke ko OM phir se lekar aagai...iss tujchi ladki... jisne tume aaj itnee badaa besati ki hai ... tu isse is garse abhi ki abhi nikaaloo...(shivaay hearing his mother😡 wanted to shout at his mother for insulting annika but he couldn't do anything until he finds him/her who blackmailed his annika so he just kept quiet...) lagta hai muje hi ye kaam karna padega...(she went near annika and pulled her up?)_pinky:uto.uto...tuje kya lagta hai ..tu mera beta ko insult karogi .. .mei tume maaf kardoongi...(goes near annika ear:tuje bola thana mei yah nahi aane keyliya.par tu yaha aagai...ab dek mei tume garse nikallonga.) ...hare... deko mera beta itne... achi hai ki tume phirse is gar mai lekar aagai...par mai aisa nahi hone doonga...and tries to pull her out...

but stops hearing a sound..
shivaay:maaa..ruko (goes near pinky and annika and frees annika's hand from pinky) (turning to everyone in hall)ANNIKA kahi nahi jarahi hai...annika OM mai hi rahegiii(all smiled hearing this...and were happy except pinky...but after .. what they heared hasi choot gaya sab ki chekre se) THEEN DIN KEY LIYE...

everyone where confused of shivaay's announcement...and rudra was the first one to react
rudra:kya bhaiya.kya bhol rahi hai aap.theen din.
Om:haa shivaay .kya bhol rahi hai tu. kyu theen din. jab annika bhabi aaye hai .wo kyu theen din rukegi.RU: haa zindagi bar yahi rukne wale henaaa.kya bhaiyaa??(and does the logic symbol).

Om:shivaay. saaf saaf bhatow kya kehna chatha hai tu...
dadi:haa puttar .kya kehraha hai tu...

shivaay:haa dadi..batatha ho...annika yehi rukegi bas theen din keliye...
gauri:kya bhaiyaa. aap theen din theen din bhol rahi ho...theen ke bhaad kya hoga...annika bhojai yehi par hi rahegana...
Bhavya:haa theen din bhaath kya hoga bhaiyaa...aap theen din theen din kyu bolrah... (but stops hearing)

shivaay:DIVORCE...

all were shocked 😲...at shivaay's announcement
Omrugaubhav:kya???????? kya bhol rahi ho shivaay/bhaiyaa.
(and they turned towards annika who was standing beside shivaay and trying to hide her tears)
dadi:billu kya bhol raha hai tu...
shivaay:haa dadi..mei annika ko divorce de raha hai..bas isliye ...divorce formalities katam hone tak iss ko yahi rukna hoga...ye yaha isliye ruk rahi hai kyu ki... mei nahi chata is ki wajase hamari family ko koi besati ho...iss liye...

dadi:nahi puttar..
shivaay:nahi dadi.mei kuch nahi sunne wala hu...theen din mei divorce hogiii.yahi mera decision hai..aur yahi hoga...(and leaves from there to his room .)
Om:shivaay ..shivaay ruk...meri bhaat sun..
ru:bhaiyaaa(OMRU goes behind him)

all leaves the hall.
Pinky:(comes near annika)
annika:pinky aunty plzz meri bhaat suno...plzz shivaay ko kuch math bhatow...bas theen din keliye ...theen din..uski bhaat mei yaha nahi rahengi...
Pinky: chalo ye to accha hua ki...shivaay ko tujse pura ka pura chutkaara miljaayega...bas din bachi hai...mei kuch nahi boluunga use...par meri bhaat achi taraf se sunlo ...kayi muje sara sa bhi pata chala or shak hogaya ki tu shivaay se sach bolne ki tries kiye tho...tu achi taraf se jaanti hai na... mei kya kar sakta hu...)
(annika(fbs pinky annika ko damki te rahi hai...aur theen din waqt derahi hai shivaay ki zindagi mei chali jaane keliye... these kept running in her mind)
pinky:samaj gaya...
annika: ha ...samaj gayi...


pinky then leaves...
annika:(runs from there and stands behind a pillow..she fell on her knees and starts sobbing😭...she couldn't control herself...someone kept hand on her shoulder ...she stops crying and composes herself to act...and turns to look who was it.)aap...
it was gauri and bhavya...
annika:aap log ...
gauri:shhh...hume sab kuch patha hai bhojai ...gabraane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...
bhavya:ha bhabi...aap chinta mat kijiye...hum hena ...sab teek hojayega...
annika:tum dono ko kese patha chal...
: humne bhataya...inthono ko..
annika:aap...
it was tejhanvi.(guys tej has realised his mistakes after swetlana's expose...and he even asked Om to forgive him...but hume pata hai na OM kitna hurt hai ki wo itne jalti se Mr.Oberoi ko maaf nahi karega.. but tej said that he would wait for his apology.)

tej:haa hum
jhanvi:tu chinta mat karo annika..hum sab tumari saath hai.

annika:nahi aunty...ab kuch nahi hone wala hai...shivaay ko mei itne hurt kiya ki wo pehli jaise hogai...bas theen din ...uske baath mei chale jaunga shivaay ki zindagi mei...

jhanvi:nahi annika...muje lagta hai ki tu use sab kuch bhol dena chahiye...
tej:yes..hume bi yahe.. sahi lagta hai annika puttar...shivaay sab kuch samaal lega puttar...
gaubhav:haa bhojai/bhabi.
annika:(panicking)nahi...nahi bade ma, bade papa .nahi uss ko kuch nahi pata chalna chahiye..wo toot jayega...agar wo toot gaya to OM bi toot jayega...plzz unko kuch mat bhatow...
plz aap log unse kuch mat kahiye..plzzz...

seeing annika crying like this...they couldn't say anything...
they assured her that they will not say anything...

tej:bas puttar ronaa band karo...
gauri:aaye bhojai...hamare saath aaye...
bhavya:haa bhabi aaye...

they took annika to om's room (i mean gaurika 's room).

jhanvi:kyu tej ?????pinky aisa kyu kar rahi hai...
tej:chinta mat karo jhanvi... sab teek hojayega...(and hugs her)

SHIVAAY'S ROOM
shivaay enters the room ...
shivaay:(mmm .i gave the reason to everyone for annika staying here...bas ab muje kuch bi kar ke pata chalna hoga wo kaun hai😡...i can't see my annika🥺 like this ...haa...i hope sab meri acting par yakeen kiya hoga...par keise patha lagow ki sab yakken ki...)his thoughts were interrupted by his brothers's voice...OMG 😵ye dono yahi aaraha hai.phirse acting karna badega. ru ko chod...Om ko muje dek karhi shak hojai ga...come on shivaay go to SSO mode...first find whether they belived ur acting or not.)

OMRU:shivaay/bhaiyaa
shivaay turns towards his brothers...
OM:ye kya tha??RU:Haaa.aap kya kar rahi thi bhaiyaa waha
shivaay:kya...
Om:jo tum hall mei keh rahi thi...ab tu bhabi ko divorce dogi...kya hogaya tume shivaay... muje laga ki tum annika bhabi ko accept kar lega ...par tu bhabi ko divorce karne ki bhaat kar rahi ho...(shivaay in his mind:mm😊 accha hua ki ye log ko shak nahi hua...indono ko shak nahi hua matlab ..sablog maangayi hogi...ab muje is tune mei hi chalna chahiye...mmm ...muje bure😔 lagraha hai ki mei aap dono ki saath ye share nahi kar raha hu ki muje sab kuch patha chal gaya...par mei kya karu aap log muje bhatowgi nahi... ..uss PANNIKA😒..ne aap donose kasam jo liye hai...haaa ..ek aur bhaath ...iss ka matlab ye nahi hai ki mei aap dono ko chod thoonga😈...aap dono ko bhaath mei dekloonga😉...but i am happy😳 ki annika ko bhai jaise accha devar mile hai support karne ki...)
Rudra:😡ha bhaiyaaa.aap aisa kaise kar sakte hai...annika bhabi ko divorce...
shivaay:bas...bas tum dono...agar aap dono uski taraf se bhaath karne aaye hai tho ..ye sunle...mei mera decision nahi bhatalne wala hoo...samjaa...mei usko divorce de rahi hu matlab de rahi hu...
Om:par shivaay...tu tho use py...
shivaay😎:nahi O...nahiii...meine usseeyyy py...mera matlab...nothing is there between us...and kuch hona bhi nahi chahiye...mei pehle hi sahi thaa...
Ru:bhaiyaa aap kya..bhol rahi ho...
Om:shivaay muje laga tha ki tu NKK ke aage dekna shuru kiyaa...but tu tho abhi bi uss ki peeche padi hai...
(shivaay to himself:fhat the wuck????...😲mei ye nahi kehne wala tha.😒..i had completely ignored this NKK wala talk after accepting annika😳 as my wife...muje koi farak nahi padta iss NKK se ab... om tu yesi kese soch sachti hai...chal tk...ise hi maintain karna hoga...)

'shivaay:O...
Om:bas shivaay.tu zyaada hi bhol diya aaj..ab hamari bhaat sun lo ..is mei hum tuje support nahi karengi...(shivaay tp himself:haa jaise ki sab bhaath pe muje support kiya...nahi nahi...meri bhaiyon ne muje support kiya hai... annika ki bhaath ..tho uske hi indono hi support kar rahi hai...and makes face😛..this was not noticed ny omru.)
om:humse koi umeed math raknaa
Ru:haa bhai...mei bhi O ki side mei hu...
shivaay:meri bhaath suno...
O:nahi shivaay...bas...come on rudra...(and they leaves...)

shivaay:i hope indono annika ko samaal legi...but where is annika abhi tak yaha aaya kyu nahi...

in GAURIKA'S ROOM
(Om was gonna enter the room but he stops hearing gauri's voice
gauri:bas bhojai..kitne royegi aap...muje lagta hai meinaaa ...iss aasu chirote ko...nahi assu chiraiyaa /chirotaee ...jo bhi... iss aasu ko na ek chaap mei diwar pe sataana hoga aap ki aakonse aana hi band nahi hora...
(om:smiles hearing this ...)Bhavya:haa bhabi...
annika:(smiles hearing this😊)thanks gauri...bhavya...
gauri:aap ko na thanchhh bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai...hum tho aap ki behen jaise haina...(om:gauri itne bhi buri nahi hai...stops...(fbs of gauri with kalli thakur and the MU between them ran through his mind).no no ...mei kya soch raha hu...wo acche nahi hai...iss se kuch nahi hoga.maanta hu ki swetlana ko expose kiye hai ...par ess se sach tho nahi batlegi hai na ...aur buamaa ki barya mei wo kya kehrahi thi ..tuje yaad hai na...wo aise ladki hai tuje patha hai na om😡...and leaves from there angrily..)
annika:haaa...behen jaisa nahi...behen hi haa..aap dono mere liye...meina shivaay ko kitna bhi thanks bolo na wo kaafi nahi hoga...unki waja se hi muje aaj muje dho dho bhai behen mili hai aur bhade papa aur bhade ma ki roop mei mumma papa bhi mile hai...🥱 ...

hmmm.ab bas muje chalna ...chahiyee...shivaay ko shak hona nahi chahiye...muje unki saamne act karna padega...
gauri:mmm bhabi.kayaal rako...
bhavya:mmm

(annika leaves the room...)
gauri n bhavya in union :bhavyaaa/bhabi.
gauri:tuje kya lagta hai.😕..tu bhi wahi soch rahi ho .jo mei soch rahi ho...
bhavya:bhabi muje bhi yahi lagta hai kiii...
gauri n bhavya in union: bhade bhaiyaa act kar rahi hai.😔..


gauri:iss ka matlab tu bhi dekhana bade bhaiyaa rudra ko dance karte hue dekkar ..wo ..kya kehte hai..smi...smaa..🤣.Bhavya:smirk he na bhabi.
gauri:ha wahi kar rahi thi...is ka matlab bade bhaiyaa ko...
bhavya:sab kuch patha hai...

gauri:hume ye kounfirm karna hoga...
bhavya:haa bhabi...

IN SHIVAAY'S ROOM
shivaay was roaming here and there thinking what to do next...and suddenly stops...feeling something...(he was facing towards their bed)
annika enters the room...
Shivaay:ANNIKA... (and turns to face her...)
annika tooo looks at him.😭..(nazudeek hai dil ke ...phir ku lage milke...O JAANA sad tune plays in background)

both were lost in their own world...
shivaay(controls himself):(in tadi)mmm.aa...aagaye.tuje hi bulane wali thi mai.tu yaha theen din hi rukne wali hai...
annika:(to herself :inko mei bhatathow.😡.mei bhi kam nahi hu)::muje yaad hai...aap ko bar bar bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai...sunliya...aapne...haaa... mei yaha isliye aaye thi kyu ki muje kuch kaam yaad aagai iss liye...
shivaay:kyaa?(with angry face)
annika goes near him...
shivaay(OMG ...wo iss taraf se kyu aarahi hai...no..annika..no ..meri paas math aaw☺️ ...mei samaal nahi paaunga...plz ..plzz...)
as he sees annika nearing her he suddenly shifted and goes opposite to her...(now shivaay is facing annika (bedside)...annika facing doorside...)
shivaay:kya kar rahi ho...
annika:mera kaam...and walks towards him...
shivaay:kya samaj raka hai tu..🤣.SPLASHHH
annika throws water on shivaay's face...
shivaay:FHAT THE WUCK?????????

omru:(who were going to come inside the room searching their bhabi stops hearing the sound and hides to see what's happening)
OMRU:started laughing🤣...
rudra:hahaha...
waise bhi...bhabhi ne sahi kiyaa..
om:ha rudra..

shivaay:ye kya kiya tumne ...😲
annika:jo aapne kiya...bhool gayi hai kya?...aap bhi mere uper paani pheka na chanda ki gar mei...is liye...
shivaay:uuu...(and goes towards wardrobe to take tissue...)

omru :'who were hiding called their bhabi..signalling...to come outside...
annika:sees omru peeping from door corner ...understood that they want to talk to her...(and signaled back that she will come)
shivaay:tume mai...(sees through the sheesha thet annika is signalling something towards the door...)(to himself:koun hai waha)..and slightly bends and sees both his brothers ...peeping in laughing and saying annika to come outside..😎.)...

annika:(was going to leave the room)
shivaay:(comes before her...)werer r u going??
annika:aap ko kya??
shivaay:hello...muje koi farak nahi padta...tu kahi bhi jawo...bas muje patha chala ki tum kisi ko bhi hurt kar rahi ho tho mei tume chodengi nahi...samja...
annika:(gets sad hearing this...)(but controls herself) nahi..mei nahi karoonga...bas theen din haina...isliye mei kuch nahi boluunga...aur aapko bhi muje bas THEEN DIN keliye hi sehanna hoga...(saying this she leaves...)
shivaay:(nahi annika...tume na mei zindagi par sehnaa hoga😳...aur tu bhi muje sehanna hoga...)

shivaay:(ab muje in theeno ki piche karni hai aur in theeno kya bhaath kar rahi hai...wo bhi sunna hoga...)

and follows them...

in rudra's room

omru were waiting for their bhabi..
annika:kya omru...kyu bulaya muje ya...stops as omru gives her a bone crushing hug🤗
shivaay who reached their ...hides and hears their conversation secretly but little did he know that he too was followed by someone and now noticed by someone😉...)
(they were no one but our GauBhav...gauri:mmm.hamari shak sahi hogaya...bhavya:haa bhabi...see bade bhaiyaa kaise evedropping kar rahi hai...gauri:haa...ek min ..ye eee
evv drooping kya hota hai...bhavya:bhabhi ...wo bhaiyaa ...wo logo ki bhaath sun rahi hai naa...wo bhi chup chup ke ..ise eve dropping kehte hai...)

om:aap kaise hai bhabi

annika:teek hai om.

ru:hai teek hi hona chahiye...ap tho aap ki gussa sab kuch shivaay bhaiyaa par panni pehkar nikaaldiya na👏...

annika:(coming out of hug) smiles ... haaa

shivaay:ise tho bahut hasi aarahi hai...mei dek loonga ...isse...(panics as someone keeps hand on his shoulder)
shivaay:(turns and without seeing whom he starts blabbering ) wo...iss kamre ki lock sahi nahi hai...bas is... stops after seeing them(haaa its gaubhav)

shivaay:tum ...tum dono ...yaha kya ...kar rahi ho...
gauri n bhavya:(giving aap yaha kya kar rahi ho look to shivaay)...

shivaay::;;kuch nahi..lock...theek kar raha th...

gauri n bhavya:hame patha hai bade bhaiyaaa...aap ko hamare saath acting karne ki zaroorat nahi hai...
shivaay:kya??par kaise?/
bhavya:wo...

shivaay:ek min...yaha nahi...come with me...
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Om ki saamne aagai buamaa ki raazzz...aur bhavya and rudra on a mission...

shivika ki tadiii

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S.love1 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
Super awsome update
Loved it
Shivaays acting is awsome, love the fact that i can see his tadi a bit more
Very eager for buamaa o my mata then pinkys
Keep writing
Much love!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: S.love1

Super awsome update

Loved it
Shivaays acting is awsome, love the fact that i can see his tadi a bit more
Very eager for buamaa o my mata then pinkys
Keep writing
Much love!

😊thanks yaar..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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guys. i am here to inform u that i will update my next part by thursday or friday.
sry guys i have my exam on thursday😭 yaar...sry for the late update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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haha sab ek dusere ke piche hain
hehe totally loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

haha sab ek dusere ke piche hain

hehe totally loved it

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