RiKara FS - Humari Doosri Shaadi Part 4 on Pg 18 (28/10) - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Naina280599

Gosh.. Genie, this is so beautiful! I want this Omkie in the show too *sigh* This is Gold, seriously! He sure is fulfilling the vow he made of always keeping her happy. I love the subtlety in this chapter. He chose the dress for her, I guess he'll be doing that for all the functions probably? He chose the mehndi design too. ❤️ Loved how he is planning every single thing for his precious chirraiya! The starting part was too cute, TejVi being happy seeing their little bahu's smile. Shivaay, the caring big brother, concerned for his little sister and even went to talk to Om. Only to find omkie planning stuff for his wife already! Loved the AniRi scene. The stairs scene was amazing too. That dupatta moment in the end is lovely Such a lovely part this one, had a smile throughout reading this. Waiting eagerly for the next part now! Much love 🤗


Naina! 🤗

As usual, a beautiful comment from you... Thank you so much for being such an awesome friend!

I'm very glad and gratified that you liked the Mehendi waala update so much. Such cute, much pretty... right?

Well, the coming update should require a glass of icewater next to you if you're easily flustered. Just saying...

Anyways, update should be out soon so stay tuned!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: ipkknd-fan

wow that was amazing!

I would love to see what their outfits were
thanks for the pm


Thanks for the lovely comment yaara!

Will put up pictures of what I imagined their outfits to be...

Hope you like the coming update...

Stay tuned!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

hehe i am sitting in front of my system smiling like a loon

haha
loved it


And I'm smiling like a loon reading your lovely comment!

Thanks for being such an awesome reader...

Anyways, update should be out soon so stay tuned!

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Posted: 7 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Gosh gosh gosh..!! This is so beautiful..TejVi's happiness seeing their DIL happy made me grin..From Shivika to dadi everyone was over moons noticing the change in Rikara's relation...aur jab Omkara ne kisi cheez ko dil se chaha toh poora oberoi khandan uski madad karne lag gaya..though we just saw them working together to unite Shivika..khair..itna lamba update ke liye shukriya..Omkie is making me fall in love with him..my sweetu...I wish we could get a glimpse of this Omkara in the show as well..but kismat humari itna accha hain nehi...they way he chose from outfit to mehendi designs for her made him more adorable to me...can't wait for the next 3 functions...continue soonish..


Tasnim yaara... 🤗

Lagta hai humari wishes poori hone waali hain... Dilpreet is such cute na? Ek din mein hi mera dil jeet liya... Haaye... KJ is such a talented actor right? I am so used to seeing him as Dilpreet now ki Omki ka getup shaayad weird lage!

Omki has been my problematic fav since day one pretty much... kya karein, the heart wants what the heart wants. At least, Queenie ko acchi treatment to mil rahi hai na?

Waise, next update was supposed to be Sangeet magar jis mood mein main hoon, us mein mujhse Oberois ke type ka Sangeet nahin likha gaya. Hope you like the update.

Anyways, update should be out soon so stay tuned!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: arshifansiri

Awesome update!!

Loved it.
Very beautifully written.
Thanks for d pm:)


Thanks for the lovely comment hun...

There should be an update soon so stay tuned!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Awesome update yar...

it was too lovely...the way om had made plans to make gauri happy was so sweet... shivaay really loves gauri...she is his sister and he is going to talk to Omkara... that was superb...aniri...shivri...they are really goals yar...superb


Aparna yaar! 🤗

I'm glad you liked the update so much! ShivRi really are goals!

Next update should be out soon so stay tuned! It was supposed to be Sangeet but its not. Hopefully you'll like it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: roaiba

Hayye I seriously think I'm blushing genie!! This is so so beautiful and I'm so so glad you didn't edit anything out 😉 kaash mein bhi aisa likh paati 😭 👏


Roaiba... Try karoge to pataa chalega my dear. Everyone here is amazing and super supportive... so just try to post something you've written and you'll see for yourself just how awesome this community is.

On another note, I'm glad you liked the update as much as you did. The next update is supposed to be Sangeet but I found I couldn't write it in my current mindframe... so here we have something... slightly different.

Hope you like it!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: BIaddict

Loved Om picking Gauri's mehndi design n lehnga a. So sweet


Hey Bladdict!

Glad you liked the previous update.

Hope you like the next one too!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: minamma

Awww

Omkara pampering gauri like a princess is a treat to read
Soo adorable


I'm super glad you found the update adorable... it is very gratifying to know.

Next update should be out soon so stay tuned!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: rikara94

Beautiful..beautiful...its really beautiful part gen

Lovely
Tejvi also very happy seeing gauri happy
And and whole family involved in omkara's plan..wow..specially shivika nd rudra
Loved the shivaye's concern for gauri..her rakhi sis..lil sis
I really love the bond of shivri..even he want to talk about this to omkie..
Loved the aniri convo and scenario also..and her plan to making gauri sit with her while mehndi was superb... isse acha idea kya ho skta hai gauuri ko bina btaye sb krna😆
stairs scene was also really gud..and and he choose mehnadi design too..wow nice han..mehndi function is really awesome dear...
And last part..removing the pin from her dupptta☺️ amazing..i'm blushing☺️
The way you wrote whole mehndi function..brilliant genie
Want some ruri part also..
Thanks for such a long update dear..update soon


Jyoti... meri behna! 🤗

I am so glad you liked the Mehendi waala update so much!

There was the whole ensemble cast in the update and we got to explore various relationships. Aage waala update is a bit different. It's all RiKara... more tooth rotting fluff and a bit of sanskaaripan.

Ru ki tho baat hi mat karo... my original plan for this update was to write the Sangeet function and bring in some RuRi bonding magar watching Ru onscreen for the past week has made me so mad that I found i couldn't write him well at the moment. So apologies... is story mein shaayad Ru nahin hoga aage.

Like I said, Sangeet likhna tha... kuch aur hi likha. Hope you like it.

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