RiKara DRABBLE - HEART STRINGS - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_


Tasnim🤗
I am so happy you liked it ... Proffesor Crush *Sigh* *Sigh* *Sigh* as I previously said I always wanted a Teacher Student relationship between Gauri and Om ... Again a simple story would do for RiKara but for that story toh likhe! Yeah I just typed this in half an hour and posted ... Tere baare mein sochte sochte hi yeh idea aayaa mujhe ... And for this kind of a relationship ... I am very sure all of Gauri's feelings are more than just infatuation but Om ko much nahi pata ... Pata chalega ya nahi ... Dekhte hain ... Achha what is your cousin saying? I will be glad to know her feed back too😃

Ahhaan..!! Mere bare mein sochte sochte..thanks behna... 😃 Teacher Student relationship between Ri and Kara is my dream..kuch din pehle bhi education tract ke bare mein sunke ummed lagaye baithi thi...par aab lagta nehi aisa kuch hoga...cvs ko fursaat kaha RiKara ke bare mein likhne ka.. 😡 Khair...I'm happy they're not showing something like that in the show...warna student aur teacher ke beech ke romance ka jo essence tha use hi barbad kar denge...nehi chahiye bhai kuch bhi inn logo se..I'm happy with your writings.. 😳 And my cousin Lamia..bass aise hi chit char kar rahi thi uske saath when I saw you posted this one...toh usse tv ka remote pakdake main apni room mein wapas aagayi..when I finished reading maine comment karne se pehle usse narrate kiya...and she said the magic you created proves that your talent is god gifted..simple sa situation ko bhi detailing ke saath itna accha likha tumne..that's all she said...she isn't a member of IF...warna tumhe ek aur paglait chiraiyya mil jaati... 😆 Waise fan bann gayi hain tumhari..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Tinuu555


My favrt is 1st scene where om asked chulbul to put ointment on his back.. chulbul denies mera vrat hai..😆

Arree haan ... Will rewrite that scene 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Tasnim I don't even want to imagine ke Jo CVS hain woh RiKara ke teacher student relationship ka kya haal karenge ... Patni toh Om usse bula nahi pata ... Main main karke bakri dabbe mein chali jaati hain 😆 I don't want anything special for RiKara onscreen now umeedein khatam ho gayi meri ... Jo chahiye jaise chahiye main khud likhke khush ho jaaungi ... CVS ko gondogol karne do 😆 ... Gauri's education track has so much of potential *Brainstorming*
Thank you so much Lamia ... I am very happy that you liked whatever I wrote *Jhappi* *Jhappi* *Jhappi* 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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And the Special Poorva awesomeness strikes again...🤗
This is pure bliss but was very short ...😭👏
I never get tired reading about ProfessorKara & StudentRi ...
U Know i love ur ProfessorKara & StudentRi so much...coz of my parents...
Keep blessing my Inbox with these most beautiful Creations of yours...👍🏼
Love u🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

Tasnim I don't even want to imagine ke Jo CVS hain woh RiKara ke teacher student relationship ka kya haal karenge ... Patni toh Om usse bula nahi pata ... Main main karke bakri dabbe mein chali jaati hain😆I don't want anything special for RiKara onscreen now umeedein khatam ho gayi meri ... Jo chahiye jaise chahiye main khud likhke khush ho jaaungi ... CVS ko gondogol karne do😆... Gauri's education track has so much of potential *Brainstorming*

Thank you so much Lamia ... I am very happy that you liked whatever I wrote *Jhappi* *Jhappi* *Jhappi*🤗

Yeah..gondogol to shuru thekei korche..korte thakuk...I'll enjoy your writings maze se.. 😆 Ummed karke khud ko dukhi nahi karwana mujhe..I'm done with CVS bakwas..they're just giving RiKara some random scrnes...such a waste of ShreNal's talent..okay..clam clam..mood kharab nehi karna sach mein...and I'll surely convey your reply to her behna...aur rahi baat jhappies ki toh woh khud rakh leti hoon..what say..?? 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing Drabble.
Loved it.
Very beautifully written.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Rikara...teacher student...crush nice ploting han
You did great job behna..you wrote beautifully and you elaborate her emotions and feelings very well👏
But he is leaving na..she felt so bad at farewell time and she left that place and he have no idea that there is a girl who is love in with him *sigh*
Keh du tumhe ya chup rahu...kash gauri keh deti
Plz write another part na..want to know omkara's pov nai toh chain nahi milega iss adhuri kahani ke bad😒
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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow...Pooru...this was a great one
Omkara in Italy......Gauri jayegi peeche peeche???😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful
Professor Kara will be dream come true
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey girl, so I write this while reading, so live updates...

'Oooh Studious Gauri! - Wait no... she's just mad that they're talking about her Omkara. Broke the pencil too - very possessive.
Aww Om is leaving...Why? Poor Ri!

She doesn't even pretend to join her friends - That's Ri, shows what she feels.

I would pay to see Omkara feeding squirrels😆. She's so in love with him. She goes to say Bye (I love how Gauri always takes the first step)

That is not the end. NO! Poor GAURI!'

Ok, live update over. Om has no clue (sound familiar?), you need to continue this until he realises the beauty of Gauri plz. I thought you were going light hearted with this, but no, you broke my heart. How can you do this to me girl?

I guess that's the power of a great writer. Well done! Keep writing.😊

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