RiKara DRABBLE - HEART STRINGS

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This ones for you Tasnim ... You know I love you right! šŸ¤—


HEART STRINGS


" Keh Doon Tumhe ... Yaa Chup Rahu
Dil Mein Mere Aaj Kya Hain ... "

" Arre kisine uss Kara ko dekha hain? He is looking so handsome in that Blue Shirt upar se aaj Baal khule rakhke aayaa hain! Khushi ne humaari humme ... Maar dala allah ... Maar dala Allah! " An excited Megha started singing while drooling at their Professor Kara.

" Udde jab jab zulfein unki ... Haan udde jab jab zulfein unki ... Kawaariyon ka dil machle ..." Megha's Bench partner Ashi continued with a different song. Both of them giggled.

" Will you both care and SHUT UP! We are sitting in a classroom " An irritated Gauri turned her head to fire the back benchers. Both of them made faces at her.

" Relax Gauri abhi class shuru hone mein dus minute baaki hain ... Aur hum toh Omkara Sir ke baare mein hi baat kar rahe hain! " Ashi winked at Gauri.

Gauri turned her head again to look back in her note book ... The way Megha and Ashi were busy drooling over Her Prof. Om was making her angry ... Her palms were itching ... She was having the ultimate ' Ek Jhaap Mein Deewar Pe Satt Jayibe ' feeling. She wanted to answer back both the crazy girls ... Nobody had the right to talk about Omkara that way, Only Gauri could do that! So furious with both the girls she had become that the pencil in her hand broke into two pieces hurting her a little.

Om entered the classroom exactly after ten minutes and everyone sang a good afternoon to him. So engrossed in some frenzied thoughts she had become ... She spring from her seat the moment she hear a choir of untuned voices ...

After some joking, giggling, singing and commentary Om started to teach them about some paintings of the Mughal Era. It was an interactive class as usual but Gauri was behaving really unusual ... She sincerely penned down every punctuation of his lecture every day but not today ... Reminding herself again and again that this was the last time he had come to teach this class ... That he was leaving for Italy and was not going to return for three months ... That maybe she will never get to see him again ... That she will not be able to listen to his passionate talking about Art ... That she is going to lose him.

After the lecture got over, suddenly everyone wanted to celebrate ... They had planned to give a farewell to Om, the fact remaining that he had resigned from his job due to all the traveling he had to do because of his work. Yes some boys in the class started jumping like Kangaroos, there was music food and even some games but Gauri packed her books and silently left the class room. She was no way going to celebrate him leaving her for like FOREVER!

All the lectures were over and after she returned the books in the library, she sat under the big banyan tree in front of the canteen and kept looking at the surroundings randomly thinking about him. He does not know anything more about her than just her name and her academic performance and he is never going to know that she holds him so close to her heart ... A feeling synonymous to love ... She is always going to remain ' GAURI KUMARI SHARMA ... ROLL NUMBER 32 ... THIRD BENCH ON THE RIGHT' for him ... She sighed.

Sitting over there, she was actually waiting for him like every other day ... She liked to see him pass by. Sometimes busy on the phone, sometimes with another student, sometimes clicking some pictures, sometimes scribbling something and many a times feeding squirrels. Today, she waited for him for more than an hour and then he passed by ... Hurriedly and realization dawned on her that he was going away from her. She had to talk to him ... She had to say a GOOD BYE ... That is the least he could deserve.

" May I come in Sir? " She knocked the door of the staffroom when she was packing his things in a carton.

" Off course Gauri. " He welcomed her with a smile.

" Sir aap jaa rahe hain. " Her tone suddenly feeble even after hard earned control

" Haan ... I am leaving for Italy in the evening. " Om said busy seeing some files. Gauri glanced at all the bouquets, gift boxes, hand made greeting cards and chocolates on the table. Oh she wanted to cry.

" Aap kitne time ke liye jaa rahe ho? " She very well knew the answer but she wanted to keep telling this to herself again and again.

" I will be back in three months. " Om said finally finished with whatever he was doing.

" Aap kyon jaa rahe ho? " Gauri's tone suddenly demanding

" I have made a work commitment there Gauri! " Om replied folding his arms across his chest.

" OKAY BYE!!! " She abruptly turned not wanting to talk to him any more and walked away with a lowered head ... Om was quite puzzled by her such behaviour but the single tear that slipped from her eye to fall on the floor had a different story to tell.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is beautiful poorvašŸ‘šŸ‘ As innocent as Gauri, As pure as Omkara.. Please write more like this.. & if possible please continue this one with omkie's view too😳.. Loved it as always..
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Aww..!! You dedicate this to me..feeling happy shappy ji..thankooo behna..I know you love me...and I love you too...three four five and infinity...
So coming to the update..the story of having a Professor Crush is common in our life...but you wrote so beautifully...actually you create magic everytime you write something...and RiKara fit into these type of stories so perfectly...I just wish RiKara ko aise hi koyi simple sa story diya hota show mein bhi...ShreNal aag laga dete..it was a drabble naa..?? Tab hi to itni jaldi khatam ho gaya..I actually wanted to read more..I felt so bad for Ri..he's leaving her forever..he has zero idea of her feelings..her tears are proof of that it's not just crush aur attraction...it's something beyond that..*SIGH* he didn't know about all these...but kise pata kuch aur hi ho kismat mein...I simply loved this..and thanks once again...aise hi pyaar karte rehna behna.. šŸ˜† 😳
Edited by tasnimrodela - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey poorva there is on e request .. please write one drabble where omkara remembering chulbul antics & then do some masti with GauršŸ˜‰i n both gets embarrassšŸ˜³šŸ˜†..
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Thanks dafla 😳
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Originally posted by: Tinuu555

This is beautiful poorvašŸ‘šŸ‘ As innocent as Gauri, As pure as Omkara.. Please write more like this.. & if possible please continue this one with omkie's view too😳.. Loved it as always..

Yeah about continuing this ... I have a few ideas like Ri and Kara meeting after five years and both of them have changed she has become one artistic soulful and pained soul and he is a different arrogant and angsty businessman altogether ... Thank you Tinu šŸ¤—
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Aww..!! You dedicate this to me..feeling happy shappy ji..thankooo behna..I know you love me...and I love you too...three four five and infinity...
So coming to the update..the story of having a Professor Crush is common in our life...but you wrote so beautifully...actually you create magic everytime you write something...and RiKara fit into these type of stories so perfectly...I just wish RiKara ko aise hi koyi simple sa story diya hota show mein bhi...ShreNal aag laga dete..it was a drabble naa..?? Tab hi to itni jaldi khatam ho gaya..I actually wanted to read more..I felt so bad for Ri..he's leaving her forever..he has zero idea of her feelings..her tears are proof of that it's not just crush aur attraction...it's something beyond that..*SIGH* he didn't know about all these...but kise pata kuch aur hi ho kismat mein...I simply loved this..and thanks once again...aise hi pyaar karte rehna behna.. šŸ˜† 😳

Tasnim šŸ¤—
I am so happy you liked it ... Proffesor Crush *Sigh* *Sigh* *Sigh* as I previously said I always wanted a Teacher Student relationship between Gauri and Om ... Again a simple story would do for RiKara but for that story toh likhe! Yeah I just typed this in half an hour and posted ... Tere baare mein sochte sochte hi yeh idea aayaa mujhe ... And for this kind of a relationship ... I am very sure all of Gauri's feelings are more than just infatuation but Om ko much nahi pata ... Pata chalega ya nahi ... Dekhte hain ... Achha what is your cousin saying? I will be glad to know her feed back too😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tinuu555

Hey poorva there is on e request .. please write one drabble where omkara remembering chulbul antics & then do some masti with GauršŸ˜‰i n both gets embarrassšŸ˜³šŸ˜†..

This is one good plot tinu ... Achha tell me what Chulkara scene should I rewrite 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Patharsitara

Please continue. Awsome story.

Thank you 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

This is one good plot tinu ... Achha tell me what Chulkara scene should I rewrite 😳


My favrt is 1st scene where om asked chulbul to put ointment on his back.. chulbul denies mera vrat hai..šŸ˜†

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