RiKara drabble series - #6 Beach - 28.10 - page 17

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javeria

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Awesome

Looking forward to read next drabble.

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Faye

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Patharsitara
Wow ☺️

Thank you, Sitara!

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Faye

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: minamma
Despo kara
Hayeee hayeee maar hi daala aaj to
Keep writing more drabbles like these

Thank you, Minamma! DespoKara is a dream.

I'll post the next drabble soon.

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Faye

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: rikara94
Oh sunday special with faye😆
Hey guys...welcome back to india forum after a long break(long break bcoz of sunday😆) in sunday special episode where faye..ooppps the sanskari faye post the another sanskari drabble...she made me or us blush by her sanskari stories..each time she represents new sanskar to our bhookhe rikarians or DKD and each time she manage to win our hearts...camaraman ...ke sath main jyoti...india forum😆
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Kya tha yeh behn...kya tha😉its hott man
Beautifully written👏

Kya tha behen, yeh kya tha? Aap reporter kab bane? Mithaai kaha hai humaari?

Thank you for the lovely feedback. Car me openhairKara dekh kar bass mann me ulte seedhe khyaal aate hai, aur kuch nahi. Glad you liked this.

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Faye

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: SRKisLove
This was short and hot 😳
Thanks for this one, Faye, but now the problem is that whenever Rikara have a car scene onscreen, my mind is going to come back to this. 😆

Your exciting writing is spoiling me, I've become addicted to your work now!

Ananya, yaar mera bhi vahi haal hai. Everytime there's something even remotely sanskaari, my mind runs off.

Thank you for the love! Will post the next drabble soon.

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Faye

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: perFICtionist.
Faye yaar! tussi great ho! so much hotness! 😳😳😳
TeasingRi for a change is sooo cute! hayeee and despokara is always ❤️
you really shouldnt do drabble! its torturous for the greedy heart!😳

😳😳😳

We all love it when Gauri takes charge and I bet omkie does too. And a desperate Omkara 😉

Thank you! I'll post the next drabble soon.

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Faye

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me
Faye 🤗 .. yaar how cute is this .. n how good are you .. magic in just a few words but honestly with you Drabble se kabhi Mann Nahi bharta.. wanna just keep reading .. this car ride is way too passionate .. Omkara is adorable n Gauri hehe .. she knows which buttons to push .. love these two .. ek car ride Aisa toh Banta hai show Mei .. Omkara going crazy with his minion wife .. maza a jayega .. thanks so much Faye .. lovely as usual .. thanks so much

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Hehehe! Sorry! Drabbles have a thing about them. Will post the new one soon. Very soon.

Show me acha wala car ride? Arre, we'll get bhajans a omie's ghazals. That's it. Ye baat to kal pakka ho gayi.

Thank you!

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Faye

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: priya_86
Faye...🤗...just loved it
Male pride hurt huh...but not for long...😆

And "should you continue?"...is that even a question to ask? 😲

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For Omkara, heart over head any day. To male pride rarely gets in the way.

I'm glad you liked it.

Will post soon.

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rikara94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: FayeMia

Kya tha behen, yeh kya tha? Aap reporter kab bane? Mithaai kaha hai humaari?

Thank you for the lovely feedback. Car me openhairKara dekh kar bass mann me ulte seedhe khyaal aate hai, aur kuch nahi. Glad you liked this.

Mai aur reporter...ek sath ek line mein 😆😆😆 nooo..

Aisa kuch nahi hai..papa kab se news dekh re the main bore ho rahi thi..reportes ke dialogues yad ho gye mere ko toh yahha chipka dale😆😆and waise bhi moka bhi tha dastoor bhi toh bol dala waise bhi us din aapne e ho post kiya hum greebon ke liye😆

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Faye

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

This is my own disappointment coupled with frustration with this bakra, shared in common with some darling friends. Turn back if you were looking for something light.

#2 Gone

She enters their room with the gloomy look that has been resident on her face ever since they escaped from the jungle. But there is something else too, something that scares him.

"Gauri, kya hua?" he asks, really sceptical of the answer. She doesn't reply, lost in her own thoughts.

"Gauri? Kuch pucha maine," he asks again, moving towards her and holding her wrist.

"Vo... Kaveri ne..." she stammers. Worry flickers in his eyes immediately as he pulls her closer.

"kya kiya ussne? Tum theek ho?" he tilts her chin up.

"ha, hum theek hai," she frees herself with a sudden jerk. "Kaveri ne hume...hume... Mistress kaha." she finally manages to say it.

His eyes turn cold, colder than she has ever seen them instantly. "How dare she? Damn the plan, I'm throwing her out right now," he moves towards the door only to stop at her words.

"Galat to nahi kaha ussne."

He turns towards her. "Gauri?"

"hum us lafz ka matlab jaante hai, internet se pata chala. Sach keh rahi thi vo," she doesn't look at him as she says that.

"what do you mean?" he asks harshly, resisting the urge to shake her physically.

"aap Hume dost nahi maante, patni nahi maante. Par hum aapke saath aapke kamre me rehte hai. Roz raat ko yahi aate hai aapke saath to usne galat kya kaha?" she deadpans.

He cannot believe this is Gauri speaking. The Gauri who had always considered herself as his wife, no matter how much he had tried to avoid the conversation about it, neither confirming nor denying it. But Svetlana calling his wife 'a mistress' definitely hits him right where it hurts.

His wife.

His lawfully wedded wife. The one he had married with all his senses intact and in his control.

He does consider her his wife. It dawns on him in their semi-dark room, not when he is searching himself for answers or even remotely pondering over the mess that their relation is. It arrives at the very moment that his wife takes herself to be a mistress.

"mistress hai hum," Gauri mutters again in a trance, almost as if talking to herself.

"mistress nahi ho tum, Gauri! Baar baar yeh bolna band karo!" he raises his voice.

"mistress hi hai hum. Hum jaante hai ache se. Aaj hume humaare rishte ka naam mil gaya hai," she shakes her head at him.

He grabs her again, pulling her up against himself before gritting his teeth. "Mistress nahi ho tum."

"to phir kya hai hum? Mistress h-" she demands in a high pitched voice before getting cut off by his lips slamming on hers fiercely.

It is not a gentle kiss, not one bit. It is hard, his anger unleashing on her coupled with the unnamed things he feels for her. His wife. His hand moves from her arm to her waist, fingers working on the hooks securing her blouse.

He gives up when they prove to be unyielding, instead slamming her against the nearest wall as he deepans the kiss. His tongue traces her lower lip, coaxing her to open up before simply plunging in when she refuses.

She gasps as he spears a hand through her hair, tilting her head a little to deepen the kiss. Her hands clutch his arms painfully as tears finally escape her eyes.

He breaks the kiss when he feels the wetness on his face only to find her crying.

"Gauri?" he rests his forehead on hers, breathing harshly.

She pushes him away.

"aapke mangalsutra aur ring ki keemat Hume apne jism se hi chukaani hai to humaare khyaal me kaali thakur hi humaare liye theek tha," she procalims in a trembling voice.

He stands there too stunned at her words to even notice her turn around and leave. She takes huge steps from the room before breaking out in a sprint and running out of the gates under the cover of the night without a look back. Her mouth still tastes of him while Svetlana's words echo around in her head.

He stands there in the same position for quite a while before shaking himself out of it and finding himself all alone. It is already too late though, by the time anyone actually thinks of looking outside, she is long gone. Even after long hours and immaculate searches no one is able to find neither hide nor hair of her. As the minutes tick by, he feels the colours leave him one by one until all he has left is a colourless sketch that holds literally zero appeal to him. The unsaid words, words he could never give voice to hang in the silence that roars around him, a permanence now.

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I promise the next one will be fluffy because the prompt is something we all want, but won't get it because #Sautelapan

Edited by FayeMia - 8 years ago