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Posted: 7 years ago
#31

# GONE

And my angsty Faye is back..🥳
Wait Angsty even ain't a word... Duh 🤔... but who cares??? U get the pheels Faye 🤗... so I leave it at that!!

Inne saare emojis so u know how GONE has left me...


The irony that jolts him out of his silence about their Benaam Rishta is the very title that the whole world knows Svetlana as; and that she is the one confering the same on His Wif...Wait he doesn't even consider the so called second bahu of the Oberoi khandaan as His.

The Chiraiyya kept chirping into his silence day in and day out.. "What was she to him???"and returned, with a silence as her reply ever single time. But the reply that she met with today,silenced her once hopeful inner-voice.

It took someone they both despised, to name their relation in a derogatory way, to realize what they meant to each other; and while one tried to mend things his way, those very ways made her feel that she was what she was being entitled as... The other woman!

Try as much as he could, he couldn't make the things fall into place... for they had fallen apart. While he stood a mere spectator of the wreckage of their unnamed relation, she gathered her pieces and left.

And she was GONE...She left him with his silence... taking the warmth that her presence had spread... leaving an aching cold spread through him.


Love you Faye 🤗 for all the angst. You are a marvelous writer in other genres as well but its your angsty write up that hits its mark where it should... Bull's eye... coz it makes one think and feel the dreaded emotions. It makes me feel more humane when I read them and have a tear trickle down or have that knotty feel down my heart. Now that my friend is what is called a miracle... something that only a writer can conjure... and a Lil fairy I know... My Lil Faye 🤗

Love and Hugs
Till we meet again
Sneha ❤️


P.S: Haven't proof read... I leave it upto you 😆... ab aadat daal lo... typos ki 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me

Faye .. brilliant.. .. sometimes stark ends are needed .. period .. I love you for this .. Gauri standing up for herself .. asking just the right questions as she faces this identity crisis.. Omkara not exactly calming her down the way he should .. in fact throwing her the lost self path all the more .. well done Faye .. romances fluff are adorable but when you get down to business I love it .. she going away is what I wanted to read n that's what you gave.. thank you so much.. mean totally .. Kya karu..



Hellooo!!! Yaar, gussa hi itna aa jaata hai! I'm just glad you guys liked this so much. Angst is hard to write but sometimes bass yeh ho jata hai.

I just wish Gauri takes the right step at the right time.

Thank you for the love!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Priya_Iyer

Di,
Thank you for this! This was exactly what I needed right now. I feel I will turn old and grey before the grand 'realization' happens in the serial. 😆 I am still going with my jango plan in my mind. 🤣

What a great piece of writing to read before I went to sleep. [Without IB, I have picked some good habits along the way! 😆

Gauri choosing her self respect, aaah I feel I will only get to read in stories now. 🤔

Anyways thank you for this! The angry kiss me likes! Somehow suits the situation I am in right now!!

Jhappis to my minion di 🤗



Oh Piyu!! I'm glad you liked this. Angst isn't everyone's cup of tea, I actually feared a backlash.

RiKara are actually like babies who often need to be told and yelled at.

thank you for the love. Ek angry kiss to bannta hai na? 6+ months ho gaye shaadi ko :D

I love minions!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: SRKisLove

Wow! Faye, this is a masterpiece! Like I'll put it on par with the Clean OS which you wrote. This is brilliant, its like you gave words to what I've been feeling since yesterday. 👏


I WISH we get something similar in the serial, but milega thodi. 😒

This is just...I've no words to describe it, specially that Kali Thakur analogy. *Stumped*

Before I become like BakraKara, I'll just reiterate again, that Faye gives us what cvs don't.

Thank you for writing this one. Like really this piece is like my dil ki tamanna 😭



Awwee Ananya! You really liked Clean, didn't you?

humaari wishful thinking kabhi sach nahi hogi, I'm suuuaarrr.

KT be hawwttt though

itni taaarreeefff!!!! thankooo!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: priya_86

Ohh Faye...how I love this...🤗...hugs to you

I do want this to happen...for once please let Gauri leave...slef respect is more important than any love...this realisation is important...but I know we will never get this


*hugs you back*

halfteh fandom wants this to happen. actually more than half, judging by the reaction to this.

I do hope she realizes that she isn't less that anyone else...

thank you for the love!

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Posted: 7 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: asrkasr

This is what shld happen in the show.I dnt want confession but can gauri leave OM.You shod seriously turn this into a longer version


We all want that!! won't get it though!

thank you for the feedback! I'm glad you liked this. elongate it how?
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Wow wow.!! Plz someone make this happen in the show..she should leave for her self respect..kab tak aise chalta rahega..?? And Faye di, you wrote it just the way I wanted it to happen...jhappis for you..


we all hope for it, tasnim! but won't get it. jab tak gul mata chahegi tab tak chalega yeh... kya kare?

thankooo for the love!!!

jhappies to ya too!!

PS: I'm everyone's 'di' now! 😆😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Z.A.A

This is amazing, Faye! Loved it.

Wish you could write for the show, sigh.


thank you Z!!

yeh kya wish kar diye yaar?! inna saara pyaar? 😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: ActionChirraiya

OH MY GOSH!! This is amazing. 👏👏 Instant Fave. How I hope something like this would happen in the show. Omkara's stammering and inability to give their relationship a name is getting on my nerves. Poor Gauri must be so frustrated and all that shone through in this drabble. Gauri's hurt and hopelessness and Omkara's disbelief that Gauri would think so low of him and herself even! BRILLIANT!! Pls keep writing more. You've legit become my fave rikara writer <3

P.S Are you fayemia33 on tumblr? I think you might've found my tumblr lol.😆


thank you for the love, Chiraiyya. lagta hai bas yeh fandom hi sane and sensible hai. show me to everyone is crazy, EVERYONE!

the stammering was cute for a bit but now its getting on my nerves and I'm actually angry. on both of them tbh!

thank you for loving this! fav rikara writer? arre, I'm sure there are many better writers out there.

PS: yes it is me, but with a catch!
me replies so late to the love you guys send me here and me is finding you on tumblr? 😕 something fishy. someone is getting disowned today. btw, what's your handle on tumblr? (I do hope you're not getting any hate from fayemia33?? tell me if you do!)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40

thankooo!!! 😳

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