Shivika OS: The Aftermath

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Shaina744

@Shaina744

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Well written...Pinky's OMM by Shivay...She really deserves that...she was going to spoil Anika's whole life...but still she is trying her best to reunite Shivay-Pinky...
Tnq so much for the pm...

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farinaks

@farinaks

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Amazing nd awesome. Email

Loved thevery way Shivaay did Pinky Ponky 's OMM

CONTINUE IT DEAR I WOULD LOVE TO READ IT FURTHER

Edited by farinaks - 8 years ago

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Abhilasha Sharma

@abhilashasharma

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

I find it very realistic...

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ChaiPiyoge

@ChaiPiyoge

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

this was fantastic❤️ totally loved it👏👏
keep it up with your brilliant work

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S.love1

@S.love1

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

This was awsome

At first I felt bad for the way shivaay is treating pinky but after breakfast I completely agree with how shivaay is treating her.. I seriously pity pinky,, it seems like she won't change.

I love how shivaay is openly talking about love for annika

The ending had me laughing hard

An awesome os

Keep writing

Much love!

.Soumya.

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Fantastic update
Shivay knows pinky is the one who doesn't want Anika is Shivay's life
But still she isn't change
Anika will take care of Shivay

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CaffeineMuggle

@CaffeineMuggle

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Hey Mushfika 🤗
First of all I am really sorry for not commenting or replying to your PM despite reading them. I always thought I would comment properly by taking time but as you see I tend to forget a lot of things. Okay coming to your OS as I said I have read the other two as well I can identify your flavor in your work and you have that domesticated and tender flavor in your writing that leaves your heart swollen. More than the plot here I got more satisfaction in your way of writing. The Sweetness and the love left an aftertaste so amazing. I especially loved how you described Annika from Shivaay's point of view and ofc the special mention to the outburst on Pinky. Absolute fun it was ! Really loved this piece ❤️ Keep the shots coming whenever you have time :)

And Thank you so much for the PM.

Lisa