Shivika OS: The Aftermath

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Mushfika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: zyrah17
Wow superb
beautiful os lovely shivika
thanks for pm

Thank you!😃

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Santhi_40
Superb loved every bit of it esp Shivaay giving cold shoulder to Pinky ..hope this happens in the show too

Honestly, though I know how much Shivay adores, loves and respects his mother, if he doesn't show the much needed wrath to this woman, I don't think this track or his love for Anika would be justified. It might take time for him to react because he would also need to digest the biggest truth of his life (And I'm terrified about how he is gonna take the blow, hopefully he gets over it soon 😒) But eventually, that's the least he could do to make up for whatever wrong he has done to Anika thus far, directly or indirectly.

Thank so very much for liking this OS🤗

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black_hawk

@black_hawk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

This was so good!

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KashiTessa

@KashiTessa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Loved Shivaay's confession.
Waiting for next update

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: meetaa_13
Brilliant!!! Loved it so much ...I want this to happen in the show 😊

Originally posted by: liazbasd
.hope this happens in the show too.

Aww thank you so much! I'm sure they're gonna come up with something even better

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@BoonAndBane

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Really nice. I love the transitions from cute to dramatic to emotional and again to cute. They are just lovely together. And Pinky ... when she will understand. I am so tired of her accusations.

Thanks for the PM.

Apologies for being late.

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rash2222

@rash2222

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

you are an amazing writer... plz keep giving us these OS

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Amnu

@Eternized_Blues

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Love Love Love it.

What a wonderful one shot. I like your Shivaay

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: ithihaas
Another brilliantly written shot from you.
I absolutely loved this. Everything about this shot is screaming love ❤️ from Shivaay's ignorance of Pinky, Shivaay's love and care for Annika, Shivaay's sweet almost love confession.
I always wanted them to have a normal husband-wife relation and to some extent you have written on those lines like the kitchen part where she waits for him for dinner.
And lastly uff Pinky never changes.😡

Keep Writing and entertaining us 😊

Sorry for replying so late.

Thank you so much. God your words are such a huge motive for me to write more and more! and aw, so happy I could somewhat provide what you've always wanted to see between them :) I myself find those little gestures of affection/care between husband and wife extremely touchy and so, include in my work as well lol😳

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: mon95
This was so good! Loved it and I'm glad you made pinky unforgivable cause she really doesn't deserve forgiveness and she will never change as well. You know what's funny. Before i started reading, I saw your arshi dp so while i was reading, i was kinda imagining some parts for both shivika and arshi lol😆 N don't worry about the pms! I love getting them. I just suck at checking them lol

May no one gets a saas like her 🥱

And lol, you know what's funnier? Whenever I write something on Shivika, for some reason, Arnav's face comes in my mind...even after 5 years!!! Probably because I had been extremely attached to the show hehe.

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. And aw okie, I won't apologize next time when I PM you my Shivika stories haha 🤗