RiKara SS - Catching Feelings Part 5 on Pg 16 (04/11) - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
#71
Thats an awesome take on them and their journey from hate to love
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
Wow amazing storyline continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
Hi there again!.I have been on a reading spree and in me you have an ardent admirer ny friend.These tales are so Rikarish that I feel as if I an watching them portray all these vivid emotions.

Honestly its a case of once bitten twice shy and knowing fully well how fans and their emotions are treated by this particular lady of my last beloved show,I hve vowed to never invest emotionally in an 4 lions show again even though its been years it ended.I have never been a viewer of IB but my friend forced me to watch to some Obros scenes and then there was something about thay long hair,poetic soul,saying couplets and reciting poetries that stuck a chord with me.And since then I have only followed his stuff on and off because well Kunal brings Omkara to life.Though its no hidden fact how the fans have waited for his love story to start and how that turned out not to mention I knew it wld because some people can only craft but not do justice to character like Omkara.The writers here on forum does a much better job than that which was the case with the character I loved earlier as well.But seeing shrenu who I saw for first time as well I have to admit there is thos raw chemistry between them which makes rikara so unique as they portray the unsaid.I remember Kunal said in an interview that if u know everything abt the other person that rawness goes away,something akin to that in terms of chemistry and I agree.Its sad to see such two talented actors not getting theor due when they hve such a huge fanbase and such scope pf a unique love story but theres that.

Foming to you my friend,I hve to ask are you a Jane Austen fan?.I am here to only read stuff that you people write and I have just finished the sequel to this one which is such a fluff fest.Something you want to curl up with on a winter night.Now coming to this I am glad you are writing this prequel and dwlling into Omkara's mind and heart.That man has imperfections and flaws and there is nothing more beautiful than those imperfections.And its core he is the owner of such a pure soul something which has its mate in gauri.

I dnt know how you have planned it but I really hope that here when they both talk they really to the bottom pit of hell so they can disover their haven.Gauri needs to know about his childhood,his commitment issues,his not to be called a relationship with riddhima as I feel it must have been just a conveinence,the drug issues,how he can tell everyone to go ahead and embrace love but for himself he is scared to own that emotion for himself as much as he needs to know about gauri.

We say such big stuff about being feminists but a man is still looked down if he cries but its only to those that you can show your vulnerability are what the people r ur own.

Thanks for reading such blabbering but I have to say this regarding Omkara because you can do justice to it.



Ignore typos as did it trgh phone.
Edited by asrkasr - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74
I forgot to mention about the bit where you have made Omkara say that he will provide gauri the securityto claim his riom as theirs,to be sexure in the position she holds.Omkara did say to gauri in show as well that its her room as well but some words needs to be coupled with actions also he is very much that possessive alpha male beneath all that and Lets see how he takes her indifference and ignorance or worse if she says she has to move on.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75
I read this again because I so want to read this further and you do have excuse all the typos in both the posts above as it has been typed through phone.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya_86

Genie I understand...plagiarism really hurts

One of my works was copied around 4 yrs back on IF itself
Your DP give me the Victorian feels...😊


Hi Priya Di...

Thank you so much for commenting!

Plaigiarism really does hurt but fortunately I came to know about it. Imagine if someone was able to do this for months on end without our knowledge!

My DP is indeed part of a Victorian painting but unfortunately I have no idea whose.

Hopefully you like the rest of this story as it develops.

Stay tuned for an update soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Genie, a bone crushing hug to you for updating..main kab se intezaar kar rahi thi...

Waah waah..kya khidkitod plan banayi OSO ne...glad that he realised that he should to something to pacify his little chiraiyya..aab toh bass balti bhar bhar ke RiKara moments ka intezaar rahega..

P.S : Swetlana fiasco hum RiKarians ke liye hamesha lucky saabit hota aaya hain..right...?? 😉


Sorry for the delay in updating my dear... bohot saare trys maare ye chapter likhne mein magar haaye meri kismat, mujhe kuch bhi soojha hi nahin.

Waise I'm still not 100% happy about what I'm about to post. But I am gonna post it and deal with my feelings later.

Balti bhar bhar ke RiKara ke liye hi to hum yahaan hain... It's exactly what you're gonna get in the near future.

Svetlana hum sab ke liye lucky hai my friend... RiKara stan ho ya na ho...

Stay tuned for the next update soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: sara1990

Omkie on mission. I hope he pacify his Chiraiyaa before return to Oberoi Mansion. "Mission Pacify Gauri Omkara Singh Oberoi rock"😉 Looking forward for Om's plan. By the way all the villian for Rikara proven to be the love cupid for them. O'bro's working together. Hopefully ShivRu could handle everything at home. I love it when O'bros supports their sister in law over their brother to make the brother realise how lucky they are to get the life partners like them. Waiting for your next update.


Every one of us RiKara stans are all about RiKara happening but in the presence of Obros, Obahus and the whole shebang.

Mission Pacify GOSO Rocks is a great motto for this story yaar!

Stay tuned for the next update soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: minamma

Omkie got bariely ki chirraiyya

Tch tch tch
Poor girl


Poor girl indeed... Gauri jaisi kismat kisi ko na mile. Kisi ko itna handsome hubby, itna talented pati aur itna cutie pie rotlu idiot na mile.

Stay tuned for the next update soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#80

Thanks luv!

Stay tuned for the next update soon!

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