My RiKara Drabbles-#13-The blessing I received-Page 25 - Page 9

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Posted: 7 years ago
#81
very sad update... 😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
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so sweet... poor her cheeks
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Posted: 7 years ago
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u r right.i know an uncle who was a chain smoker.but it affected his wife more than him n she got lung cancer

Originally posted by: .Piyali..


Awww...thanks alot for such a sweet comment Jasmine...About your question, though most of the times Lung Cancer is caused by Active smoking but sometimes it is due to passive smoking as well...And in some minor cases, other reasons too lead to it so no Omkara wasn't a smoker...I hope I cleared your doubt...😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

u r right.i know an uncle who was a chain smoker.but it affected his wife more than him n she got lung cancer


Oh..Thats very sad dear, Its so wrong that somebody else faces the wrath of someone else's bad habits...But it happens..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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#8-Love In Bus


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"Hold it for a second..." I was ordered by an innocent yet deep voice as a bag was placed in my lap by someone, rather a girl who just occupied the seat next to me in the bus...A deeper glance, she wore a complete bridal attire.

"Excuse me?" I looked towards her confused.

She didn't reply to that rather just took up the bag from my lap after adjusting herself on the seat and then raised her hand for a handshake smiling, "Gauri..."

"Omkara...By the way, Have you..." I was cut in the middle.

"...run away from your wedding?' She completed my question in the most cutest tone of the world.

I looked towards her with widened eyebrows while she giggled.

"Yes, I ran away from my wedding...It was fun..." She replied still giggling, my eye widened further.

After a short pause, she again started speaking among her giggles, "Ok, I am sorry...Actually I am a theatre artist, going to give audition for a Movie role in Mumbai and this bus is going to reach Mumbai just at the time of my audition...So needed to get ready and leave na..." She was still laughing as she raised her hands for a Hi-Fi, I didn't respond.

She looked towards me with narrowed eyes as she pulled back her hand. I twisted my lips in a cute childish smile.

"Rehne Do...Tumse Nahi Hoga, Lagta Hai Salon Se Nahi Hasse..." She said as I straightened my face at her comment.

She looked towards me and I think somewhere concealed a chuckle, then suddenly burst out laughing.

" 'You are mad'...I know thats what you are thinking so yes...I am mad..." She continued laughing while looking at her laughing face, my lips themselves started curving in an unknown smile.

**

In a world where people hide their laughter, she is the one who loves showing her laughter to the world, in a world chiefly governed by love for our near ones, she was laughing with a stranger, in a world faced with 'What People will Say' syndrome, she knows how to tell people, 'I don't care about your opinion.'

Needless to say, I fell for her that day...that was my first meet...My first meet with my wife.

**

A/N: Random stuff, have another one but that after exams unless the temptation to write again takes me over.😛

Edited by .Piyali.. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#86
Aww..!! That was the cutest meeting ever..it was beautiful..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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LOVED IT
how innocent and pure Gauri seems to be
And Om just smiling and enjoying her honesty and her sweetness
Amazingly written *_*
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awww super adorable meeting loved it so much.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

LOVED IT
how innocent and pure Gauri seems to be
And Om just smiling and enjoying her honesty and her sweetness
Amazingly written *_*


Thanks alot dear...Such a sweet comment...Thanks alot...
P.S.-Another Tragic one coming up...😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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#9-Measuring Love


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"How much you love me?" Gauri asked staring at Omkara as she was folding some clothes and arranging them.

"Umm... I can't explain in words..."Omkara replied as he was busy painting something.

"Huh...at all other times you can speak lines and lines but can't tell me how much you love me that's not fair... I don't want to talk to you..."Gauri glared at Omkara as she threw away the cloth she was folding and left the room , angrily.

"Gauri..." A sad Omkara was left calling.

**

2 weeks later:

"Gauriii..." A scream escaped Omkara's mouth as he saw a car speeding towards her, coming back from a shopping Mall, Omkara was taking out the car from parking area while Gauri was talking on phone with her friend walking at one side of the road, she didn't see the car possibly driven by a drunk man, neither heard her husband's scream.

Omkara ran towards Gauri as he pushed her to a side in the nick of time but himself came in front of the car.

"Omkaraaa..." Gauri screamed as she dropped her phone and ran to Omkara, the car halted as people surrounded Omkara and Gauri, though wounded badly, Omkara was still conscious.

"What you did?" Gauri was crying miserably.

"I saved my love..."Omkara smiled wiping her tears as he closed his eyes...forever.

He might have never been able to explain the depth of his love by words, he did it by action.

**

A/N: I know you all don't like sad endings but this just came up in my mind...Hope you liked it.


Edited by .Piyali.. - 7 years ago

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